#3: The Alternate Universe-Retelling IPKKND (Thread 4 link on Pg 1)

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WELCOME TO THREAD 3


A third thread was not what I had foreseen when I had started this fiction...it would not have been possible without the support and feedback of my lovely readers, most of whom have become my close friends now...so THANK YOU...you know who you are 😉

Dedicating this thread to the lovely Mojgan...who literally pushes my limit to pen down as soon as I can...

Mojgan, on popular demand, please remove Shyam from the banner 😆

Now, sit back and enjoy the story as it unfolds...

Thank You



Chapter 12- Pg 16

Chapter 13- Pg 45

Chapter 14- Pg 79

Chapter 15- Pg 113







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Posted: 10 years ago
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THE ALTERNATE UNIVERSE-

Retelling IPKKND


TEASER for Chapter 12


Arnav cornered in one of the empty rooms and pinned her on the nearby wall, to dismiss any unwanted reaction. He leaned forward and slowly raised his hand to tuck a hair behind her ear and watched apprehensively to note her reaction.

On the other hand, Khushi flinched her head sideways, too tensed to react, "Hum kuch kahte nahi, iska ye matlab nahi ki aapka jo mann kare, aap wo kar sakte hai"

(If I don't say anything, it doesn't mean you can do anything you wish to)

Regret and pain registered in Arnav's dark eyes as his gaze linked with hers, but he didn't say anything.

And just like that, the moments from long ago, crept into his conscious mind. One-by-one- Fragments. Flashes. A sound. A touch. Moments too dreamlike to bear.

He remembered her now. She'd lost her way and landed into to his bedroom.

"Five years and three months", he stated with slow deliberation.

"Give or take a few days", she agreed, her tone one of dismissal.

"I didn't recognize you at first"

Her eyes mocked him, knowing he was remembering a graceless girl who had willingly gone to his arms with a little cry...one who bore little similarity to the slim elegance of today's designer.

"You haven't changed", she stated coldly, remembering the hurt from long ago.

"Your eyes are the same", he sighed in exhaustion and his one hand rubbed briefly at a slight scar on the top of his left eye. His eyelids closed and he pinched them between finger and thumb before opening them again, "God knows I've never forgotten those eyes Khushi", he muttered.

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Hope you liked the teaser for the next MahaUpdate...

My lovely readers can understand why the next update might take some more time...!

Edited by shalini.ranjan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats For The New Thread..👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Intriguing Teaser..Waiting For The Next Update Eagerly..👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulations for d new thread...🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats on new thread...

Brilliant teaser...
Can't wait...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats on new thread.
He remembered her.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome teaser..
finally arnav remembering his past with khushi...
but how did he remember?
but firstly how did he forget??
so much excited for d whole part...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm in advance...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Acha Shalu, Naya thread, Naya teaser...Super.

Take your own time to write the super freaking awesome update, I will wait. Defiantly a Vodka deserved chapter.

PS. Don't take more than a week.
Edited by Pinky.Raizada - 10 years ago
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congrats dear on the new thread ... love the teaser..

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