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sweetfairy007

@sweetfairy007

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Posted: 10 years ago

#611

Hi Shalini,

Thank you very much for such a nice teaser.You know ,I was anxiously waiting for Arnav and Khushi meeting in your Chapter No.14 itself .I felt very bad and disappointed when you didnt show their meeting in Chapter 14.But now I am so happy...finally they met as Nikhil's mom and uncle.

Now

I am putting specs and getting cool breezy spot so that I can have a feeling of a writer.I am going to write what is the next part so that I will get a dedication from a talented writer...shalini...

OK...😭😭😭🤢🤢🤢

Both of them will get wet in the strong desert rain.Immediately a car will come rashly behind Khushi .Arnav will pull her out of the car's way by safely enveloping her in his arms .By the sound of a thunder thier trance will brake.Khushi will behave as if nothing happened.She will try to hide her shocked heart.She will look for her son and his pyari Di.She will find both of them playing in rain but wearing raincoats.She will move to them avoiding Arnav.Arnav will be seeing Nikhil in a new angle.

He will see Nikhil as son of her husband Shyam and he thinks that Khushi want to keep her son with her and that is the reason she is not agreeing for Divorse.

Later ...very later...Ashu will explain to her Maamu that Nikhil is exact replica of her maamu In a joking funny way.But this makes Arnav to connect the dots of his life...

Dont kill me...... I am already dead🤢

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Shameela

@Sam_Faizal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#612

The teaser is killing me...it's like an atom bomb dropped in the middle of arshi right now...Arnav is definitely shocked cause he knew Khushi was married...he knew he slept with her...but this he wasn't expecting...a child...but..I think ASR and his shatir dimaag will start putting pieces together and figure out nikhil is his kid...Khushi on the other hand is going to do her best to keep this from ASR...she'll panicked first..but then I think she'll try to play it cool to not give anything way to Arnav...that's my guess...update soon.

Edited by jani_faizal - 10 years ago

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#613

Omg so finally they !meet.

I guess this is what we all have been waiting for.

I had written on the teaser but thought if I write my view now what will I write for the update.

The sequence for someone who follows it closely like you. Lol can't get into your head can I otherwise I would be writing a story and this is unlike other stories unpredictable never know the twist.

But here it is from my pov.

KHUSHI WILL FAINT and Arnav will be right there to catch her.

Please I could totally off the mark here but try and fail then not try at all.

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Rabiabegum

@Rabiabegum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#614

Khushi will try to leave making an excuse to see her son and Arnav will stop her to ask questions about that night and NIkhil. And it is going to rain :))!!!

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Rabiabegum

@Rabiabegum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#615

Khushi will faint and arnav is going to take care of her:))

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Zeehana

@Zeehana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#616

Amazing teaser

Eager to read the chapter

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rk2127

@rk2127

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Posted: 10 years ago

#617

Thank Shalini for small mercy, the teaser contain what I want to read now the question is which part of the update it will be? Beginning, middle or end.

And as per guessing goes, Khushi will run away for recollecting herself and than by ignoring his questions or verbal sparring.

As for ASR his shatir Dimag has been a late riser in this fic so he will take time connecting dots. First I think he will be thinking she has a son from her marriage and be heartbroken and angry.

What say??

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pravallika

@pravallika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: shalini.ranjan

Asha darling you are so cute!
See, I am bringing out the writer in you 😆 given that you had two interesting line of thoughts!
<Hats off to you>

Shalini I'm confused now

my guess is any where close to the question???

When r u planning to give us the update????