Hamlet's Revised Fanfic Collection Index - Page 29

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hammiee, hi naku, hammie is back to annotate

mein aa gai ...yeh kya shock hammiee ke story finish ..but as its said all good things come to end

thanks,naku, for being spot on.. the story had to end.. I had nothing more to add.. so cheers for your support😃

loved the story & the end was as amazinggg as the beginning😊 ...a story of a care free youth considered as good for nothing by his brother ..solace is his father & kajri ...his buddy baji

naku, you are a star, how well you have summed up the tale.. itna carefully you read it.. I am touched 😆

one fine day he met a beautifu innocent gal ..luv at first side ya from both end ...actually a barrier😉 ..the goal to get this luv an orphan gal at mercy of his uncle

hain?? ye sab maine lekha tha.. can't believe it..

father's death & fly betrayal ..trail & tribulation it transform him to rishi ..but the essence of his self never lost

i think I should give you the title on my critic.. bane ge na?

he decide to bridge the gap not just for his luv but for the poor people

the luv of naku is his strength ...the action packed last part saare involved sona ,heera ,toofan ..wah hammiee sab se kaam liye dutta ne 😆...eventually both the couple got married ..AS ko purohitji ke mulaqat is baahane ho gai ...kushi ke mare shukar chakar nahin aa ya😉

I used the animals to show his fine and soft side.. so well pleased you enjoyed their inclusion in the plot.. heera and sona.. stood as his father's prized pets ..

happy ending luv it ...thankfully paro was born nahin toh baache nahin ..chocolate ho gai batheh fir rahe hai ...

even I had a soft spot for madame , Paro.. 😃 it had to be a girl! to control Dutta!

hammiee you r amazinggg not just coz u r amazinggg writer ...respect u for your sincerity ..i hope u always remain so 🤗

Naku your words gave me a lump in my throat.. haan tu na bhi bole tu I know how you feel about the work I have done on Laagi.. you see it was Dutta's preoccupation.. however ,Naku I have realized recently that TASHA was mishal and mahi.. I am numb about his new programme.. will have to see it and feel the story.. then form an opinion..
hammiee we readers r greedy start something soon ...maybe a short story plzzz...thanxs a ton ...I m already missing hammiee start something new soon

as always u r amazinggg hammiee...thanks a ton

naku ,yes will start brief new story ,so i can close this thread.. will post a small promo, may be kal if i have the time..

is baar murga musalaam for u ...

thanks for the yummy festive food will eat it ..eid is expected in uk tomm.. many thanks for your love and encouragement naku, much love hammie

Originally posted by: jedy25

hi hamlet

superb story & befitting end👏 ...dutta & naku's journey of love superb ..start a new story soon plzzz..thanxs .

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi hamlet

the beautiful story ended i wanted to go on & was enjoying it ..it doesn't take away the fact the story & end was fab ..happy end for our couple & baji & roops ...i request you write a new story soon

thanxs a lot 👏

Originally posted by: dilse14

hi

hamlet

i feel a journey ended i felt i was part of it

it was wonderful ..all 's well that end's well👏

start a brand new story ...plsss soon

thanxsss ..you r wonderful 😎

Originally posted by: uwith

hi hamlet

like all previous stories this one too was awesome .dutta & naku love triumph with action packed finale ..waiting for another part of trilogy ..waiting & hoping for a prologue ..pls don't disappoint 😊

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi Hamlet,hi sonaaa, baat sun result bata.. hope sab gang did well? only the best from you lot other wise.. dirty look!

The end of story took us by suprise like all ...The story of Dutta & Naku we all felt part of the journey 😳

you are sooo kind Sona... look I used your precious name in the story as well..😆

They both got their share of Happiness & paro too 👍🏼..otherwise it would be difficult to visualize parent giving away their kids

ohhh look here with naku any thing is possible.. perennial giver hai..hamrai nakusha dutta patil.. haina??

pls start a story which you have just waiting to unfold😊

yes thought to resurrect my dead thread.. thuri sharam aagai mujhe.. soo yep will do a new tiny short story ,to wind the thread up.. will post promo at some point.. thanks for the multilingual image..shukariye..😉.. much love to you and the gang.. hammie