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CUTE_SAPNA

@CUTE_SAPNA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#261

awee the paro , luv u 4 giving dsp a daughter

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afi7861

@afi7861

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#262

OMG hammie . dutta aur us ki animal foj 🤣 🤣 🤣 wise kitna acha hot agar dutta nana ko doh doh karpet ta😆 sona aur heera ne nana kaido ka kaam tamam kar diya its good something new 😆 finally AND bhala toh sab bhala😊 hammie tu na tezz express hai .shaadi bhi ho gaye twins bache . baad mein ek girl bhi.. maghar hammie beche mein kuch missing tha nahi???😉 mujhe lagta hai tere talent ko zong lag gaya hai😆😆

just joking yaar .loved the whole update happy ending👏👏

thank you so much for giving us a such beautiful story ..warna mein toh lagtar missing he raha ...maghar tu time pe update karte rahe you are great hammie...

Edited by afi7861 - 10 years ago

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CUTE_SAPNA

@CUTE_SAPNA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#263

deary hammie; getting very nostalgic s r8 now. 😭reason = when i joined this ss, the 1st part of trilogy was already finished. even u have written the part- 1/ch-1 of this 'FTH'. 😃👏followed it continuously for 20 weeks.😃😭so a separation kinda feeling.😭😭😭i mean i know there is more to come, i,e. the third part of trilogy ,😃👏👏👏⭐️ but wanna say ;simply loved this one.😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

dsp , with his father, brother and sil ,a friend more than a brother and his mother who is a mother more to dsp. 😃enemy's girl, the 1st encounter;😃 again following her,😃 their separation due to dsp's sil . 😡😡😡this was the worst phase, i mean the saddest part 😭😭😭. and after that there was all the good one.😃👏👏

in between , what i have referred the saddest part was also 1st due to the death of dsp'f father, 😭😭🤢my heart , literally wrenched with pain at that time,😭😭😭 i cried literally.😭😭😭😭 glad dsp was having naku at that time beside him , with him.😭😃👏 but then dsp , may be 4 short time , had to loose naku ,😭😭😭😭 baaji and AS😭😭😭😭😭. his baba's home too 😭😭😭😭when he was in the forest.😭😭😭😭😭 waited 4 him to come back asap.😭

few points r there , which i want 2 share with u @hammie. in the last part , u told that AS got dsp and naku married .😃👏 baaji and roops are there with her.😃👏 but why dsp made this decision to live separately,😕😭 i mean he loved his baba's room ;house too. he also could have lived with AS and baaji 😃👏👏. i know u gave the reason of dsp's self-dependence but still may be in the home adjacent to them.😃👏

not at all agree with the decision of naku and dsp's giving their sils their love, in the form of babies.😡😡😡😕😲🤢🤢 i mean they don't deserve it simply😡😡. if they are refined, then also they can pour love on " naku's babies". 😊what they have done with my dsp is intolerable and unforgettable, no matter how much they r repenting.😡😡😡

why naku's was not willing for a 2nd child ? may be 4 the reason that dsp may give this one also to his sil !!!😭😭😕😲

waiting 4 ur answer. dear.😃😃 pls giv some hints of the 3rd story of trilogy.sorry, got very emotional😊

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#264

hi hammiee

mein aa gai ...yeh kya shock hammiee ke story finish ..but as its said all good things come to end

loved the story & the end was as amazinggg as the beginning😊 ...a story of a care free youth considered as good for nothing by his brother ..solace is his father & kajri ...his buddy baji

one fine day he met a beautifu innocent gal ..luv at first side ya from both end ...actually a barrier😉 ..the goal to get this luv an orphan gal at mercy of his uncle

father's death & fly betrayal ..trail & tribulation it transform him to rishi ..but the essence of his self never lost

he decide to bridge the gap not just for his luv but for the poor people

the luv of naku is his strength ...the action packed last part saare involved sona ,heera ,toofan ..wah hammiee sab se kaam liye dutta ne 😆...eventually both the couple got married ..AS ko purohitji ke mulaqat is baahane ho gai ...kushi ke mare shukar chakar nahin aa ya😉

happy ending luv it ...thankfully paro was born nahin toh baache nahin ..chocolate ho gai batheh fir rahe hai ...

hammiee you r amazinggg not just coz u r amazinggg writer ...respect u for your sincerity ..i hope u always remain so 🤗

hammiee we readers r greedy start something soon ...maybe a short story plzzz...thanxs a ton ...I m already missing hammiee start something new soon

as always u r amazinggg hammiee...thanks a ton
is baar murga musalaam for u ...

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jedy25

@jedy25

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#265

hi hamlet

superb story & befitting end👏 ...dutta & naku's journey of love superb ..start a new story soon plzzz..thanxs .

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jedy25

@jedy25

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#266

ITS A REQUEST plsss start a new story.plsss sss😔sss

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#267

ITS A REQUEST plsss start a new story.plsss sss😔sss[

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jedeee! tweetie pie.. why the sad face..? here's a song for you and others on this thread..
forget FTH... follow the song.. two of my fav people.. Salman,and Atif the singer.. listen to and it and consider.. hammie ,is a bit incomplete without you all..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VmjynPkyLRQ[/YOUTUBE]

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CUTE_SAPNA

@CUTE_SAPNA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#268

@hammie: and about our demands ???? jaldi se ek story nahin toh mera suicide attempt pakka, rofl.

@nakusha: u have written every single thought which i m experiencing too, very emotional

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#269

Hey hammie last part? You surprised me. However after reading the full update I felt that you did complete justice to the story and the characters. They weren't any loopholes. I loved it. The update was pacey and full of action. Dutta blowing up the boat was great. But nana firing at him was damn scary. Wow bullocks in action! This was totally unexpected and I loved the fact that dutta didn't dirty his hands by killing nana and kaido. Otherwise there could have been a police case. Nevertheless the villains got what they deserved, a painful and gruesome death. Even kaido got thrashed by dutta that was absolutely essential. Bravo you did an awesome job. Towards the end dutta' character has shaped up beautifully. With his brother becoming the head of PV and dutta deciding to live separately and work as a farmer. You kept his self respect in tact. Wonderful writing. Now with a heavy heart I have to say you didn't give us a spicy SR lol. Never mind I am still happy. Dutta giving away the twins to his sister in laws was remarkable. A very painful decision on the part of Tasha. Glad they went for another baby and this time a girl. Paro so cute just like that she is also carefree and I agree with dutta when she'll follow her heart she'll get the universe. Thanks a lot dear for sharing yet another beautiful story with us. Waiting anxiously for the third story. Good luck!

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mirage123

@mirage123

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#270

hi hamlet

the beautiful story ended i wanted to go on & was enjoying it ..it doesn't take away the fact the story & end was fab ..happy end for our couple & baji & roops ...i request you write a new story soon

thanxs a lot 👏