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dilse14

@dilse14

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#241

hi hamlet

wonderful ud

dutta & naku riding a horse was magical moment

the four friend convo was very nice

ud soon

dp pic is recent?

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#242

Hey hammie have you seen a thumbs up commercial? It's tag line is " aaj kuch toofani karte hain." Lol. How do I say how much I liked the ride. I mean reading about it. The wat he asked nakku to change her position was cute and funny. Poor toofan must be thinking what is happening on me, can't they sit properly? Ha ha and when finally nakku settled down she gives a hard time to our sher. I am sure this close proximity was unnerving for her too but I am not complaining. The way he was explaining her to balance her weight I was like yaar this horse riding is so technical. Lol. But the whole scene was beautifully penned with both of them considering each other as their respective star and moon. How romantic. Oh I thought the good news would be something else. Now don't ask me what was in my innocent mind. However I agree with dutta when your family or close ones hurt you then that hurt us ten times more hurtful than getting hurt by a stranger or an enemy. So if he is taking his time to forgive them then it's fine. I am sure he will come around soon. Now meeting with kaido would have been more interesting if Dutta knew that the pevert had hit on his girl. He would have broken his bones. Tasha going on a double date...that's nice but what is this after working on the fields now he will work on the dock! I have a feeling now nana's smuggling business is in danger. Chalo now let's see how Dutta pacifies his ruthi hui almost biwi

Edited by stranger2rose - 10 years ago

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uwith

@uwith

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#243

hi hamletawesome ud..dutta is depressed family behaviour naku ease his pain ..toofan ride was amazinggg & drive with baji & roops too ...dutta & naku on toofan was very nice ..ud soon

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CUTE_SAPNA

@CUTE_SAPNA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#244

hello hammie deary ;

me finally here. i know , someone frowning badly. really don't want to give excuses for being late for 2 weeks. but it's the sweet right of ur's to know.

10 days = mom's adverse health [ a bit only]
and after that came to forum , got 2 huge shockers ; one MR ON COLORS !!!!! really; if the whole management is changed then only will be able to believe , a bit only. second = THE KISS. OH !!!!!!!!! how badly i wanted to die at that moment. still feeling very disturbed. will PM you more on this.

re the ff: started reading it. the final comment will be by the evening.once again, my sincere apologize 4 coming late. luv u hammie; muuuah.

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CUTE_SAPNA

@CUTE_SAPNA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#245

hello hammie deary ;

me finally here. i know , someone frowning badly. really don't want to give excuses for being late for 2 weeks. but it's the sweet right of ur's to know.

10 days = mom's adverse health [ a bit only]
and after that came to forum , got 2 huge shockers ; one MR ON COLORS !!!!! really; if the whole management is changed then only will be able to believe , a bit only. second = THE KISS. OH !!!!!!!!! how badly i wanted to die at that moment.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 still feeling very disturbed. will PM you more on this.

re the ff: started reading it. the final comment will be by the evening.once again, my sincere apologize 4 coming late. luv u hammie; muuuah.

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: jedy25
hi hamletsuperb ud..toofan ride was too& baji roops met dutta & naku very nice ud..ud soon😊

hi jedy..😛 phir se first.. hammie flattered! I never imagined ek ghorah .. mujhse bhi zayeeda popular ho jaya ga.. you see I am a gadha person.. humble janwar!
yes will update tomm... listen ,thanks very much for reading and commenting.. oyee results ka kiya buna..😛... much love hammie

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: Nakusha
hi hammiee..eyyee naku.. and then a hummmh.
mein aa gai ..nahin toofan par sawar nahin thi ...mere toh wohi 11 number ..do peer (legs)😆
haaa haaa.. hasi tu muhje bhi ah gaye hai. after listening to you two legged baat!
loved the ud ...dutta & naku riding on moon it seems & toofan mail was beautiful with lovely couple on it ...this is new ...wish it was incorporated in LTL ...
yes it was ok.. dutta activities with horse in jungle was something else,how he fitted the knives in their sheaths on his arms... classic.. warrior dutta to me was unsurpassable in persona...
nana & oldie back ...dutta was introdued to his rival & he was quite restrain ...oldie hai fukh maronga toh maar jaiga 😉..dutta ne baksh deya ...now offer to work on docks reminded of dutta's entry ..😊
well.. iam sure dutta has valid reasons for accepting this job
baji & roops with dutta & naku car drive & dhabba was too good
even I too enjoyed writing this car drive
aage ka plan abhi bakhi hai ...ud soon
yes.. you are right naku.. aage ke journey abhi baki hai do check the ud tomm..
as always u r amazinggg hammiee
and you naku.. are hammazing.. forever
meeth kaafi ho gaya ...is baar saara dhaba hammiee ke samane order as per u wish
naku!! hey I LOVED this image of a dhabba.. wow proper make over..foam backed seaters.. kiya baat hai.. this image is great.. many thanks for your lovely comments naku.. much love hammie

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: sona89
Hi Hamlet
Awesome UD ...TOOFAN ride was too enchanting ..Dutta & Naku are flying in the wind
Rishi bhau was not recognized great going
Dhabba with friends Baji ,Roops ...journey was very nice ...UD soon

hi sonaaa.. I can gather by the big smilley face how much you enjoyed the ud! rishi bhau.. tended to hide his face with his long hair and uncouth beard.. and the kapre tied around his head.Glad to hear you enjoyed the double date... dutta 's choice has a proper.. you read on tomorrow ,what happens. much love hammie.. love to gang members

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: tamanna1391
awsemm update tasha on toofan baji roops fab friends

helooo my partner.. tammy, hope you doing ok.. I am pleased you enjoyed the ud.. thanks for sparing time to read it.. and do catch the next UD tomm..
much love ,partner.. yours hammie

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: mirage123
hi hamletfab ud..journey on toofan to drive on car ..captured too well dutta ,naku together & joined by friends😊

hi mirage! good to see you, thanks for enjoying the ud.. and as for the mouse, with a tail curved into a heart.. has to be me.. bart ,calls me a chooha ,I guess YOU KNOW! so enjoyed your comment.. catch the next ud tomm.. much love hammie