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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#481

such a beautiful story. awesomely written

thank you so much.

hoping to read your new story in future

mwuaaah xxx

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#482

Choti, this was such a beautiful ending. This was the perfect ending. He finally sees that this is where his home is, with his family. And nothing in te world would compare. The beginning of the story, where you incorporated THE moment of 20th century for India, was awe-inspiring. I got a little teary eyed myself. I have often wondered how our grandparents' generation felt that day. To watch something so momentous happen. To know that you had a hand in this. I guess our generation will never know that sense of achievement.

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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#483

It feels like it ended really fast :(
What an amazing story loved everything about also the end when arnav said this is home. Simply brilliant can't wait to see which other story you will give us just don't make us wait too long ;)

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#484

Another fabulous story coming to an end.. Beautiful beautiful is what I have to say.. Story was different and made a special place in our hearts..

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#485

Last Unres for Resistance :(

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#486

Suck a beautiful end to one of my favorite stories

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SharuAG

@SharuAG

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#487

😭 I 'm so sad to see this beautiful work has come to an end. This is such an amazing story. You are a talented writer and I hope you would soon some up with another amazing work of Arshi.

You have fill all the grey areas in the story and what an amazing way to end. A couple who started their love with some ch differences learn to give and compromise. Both are willing to go to the extend beyond their comfort zone to bring the happenings of the other.

Both in a way gaining what they want, "Home".

Take care Choti and See you soon with a new work of Art.

Edited by SharuAG - 10 years ago

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#488

nice ending...i really luvd this story..unique settng..both arnav n khushi strong personalities...u r an idinan..beautifually written line..shows the power n pride of having an independent identity...beautiful story..😊

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#489

Such a wonderful story and such a befitting end.
I loved how you showed both their dreams and goals. At one point of time their difference in dreams was a major issue between them but after some time they not only found a way but also their dreams, outlook changed. Khushi moved from ground to planning and Arnav found home in India. 😊
It was a very beautifully written story and with lot of maturity. Congratulations for writing it down so well and completing it successfully.😳
These Arnav and Khushi will stay with me for a long time. Will wait for your next work.😊

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#490

Wow superb epilogue dear... Each word is full of meaning... Really enjoyed reading this wonderful story.. You have really captured that era well in this story dear... Looking forward to read more of your work:-))