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Sweety012345

@Sweety012345

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#461

AWESOME, BRILLIANT AND BEAUTIFUL ENDING

Absolutely loved it

Waiting for another awesome pieces of work from you

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swtsam

@swtsam

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#462

awesome. ..brilliant. ...cant believe that this ended sooo soon...
waiting for ur new works...

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#463

Coming from a family of freedom fighters, this story is very very special to me!! It brings alive many of my grandparents life stories!!

It is an extremely passionate story in more ways than one...and its been penned with great simplicity, elegance and profundity!!

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docs

@docs

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#464

A fitting end to a beautiful story ...

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#465

Wonderful Epilogue

Khushi has taken Arnav's advice seriously & joined Politics . Politics is a shield , which helped khushi to fight for her country to free it from the clutches of British . Independent India is the result of so many NK , khushi , Aman & Anjali's .

Khushi is content in life & the credit goes to her dear husband Arnav who stood with her like a pillar . Arnav's decision to stay back in India is the best one . Unknowingly Arnav has started loving his country with each passing day 😉

I will miss ''Resistance ''😭

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...ASB100...

@...ASB100...

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#466

Choti, I am just so sad right now. I don't want Resistance to end! This has been such an amazing journey, and I am just in awe of your writing prowess. You've always been a wonderful writer, no doubt, but with this story, you've set the bar really really high. The transformation of characters in this story is simply amazing, and the way you've seamlessly blended the character arcs with the story arc even more so. This is one of those stories that I am going to reread again and again, because it deserves to be read and savored multiple times.

When you asked me about the Lodhi Gardens all those months ago, little did I know then, that I would come to love this story so so much. Thank you for writing such a kick ass story, Choti! I am so proud of you and so glad to know a person as dedicated and committed as you are! Love you loads, and waiting with bated breath for your next writing venture! 🤗🤗🤗

P.S. I will post a better comment for the last chapter and the epilogue, but abhi I am a dukhi aatma because the story ended. :((

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#467

Amazing ending to an awesome story!! Totally loved the ending, going to miss the story. Hopefully you will start a story soon :-)

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#468

Brilliantly Written..Simply Superb...👏

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#469

Just finished reading the last chapter and the epilogue.

Trust Arnav to give Khushi the right direction in the quest for freedom.

This was surely the right decision.

Khushi could actively participate in the feedom struggle and be safe.

Loved the fact that they called their little one Shashi.

And that Ashok too lived to see an indpendant India.

You described beautifully the moment of freedom.

Loved the recitation of the Tryst with Destiny.

And the cute family scene with Khushi Arnav and their little one.

Arnav was with Khushi in this endeavour .

And then Khushi offered to do the same for Arnav.

Loved the way both are their for each other.

And Arnav then made the right decision to stay back home with his family.

This is one of your best works, Choti.

Loved it .

Hoping now that you will start a new one.

Maybe a fun story as you promised.

Waiting here! !

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#470

Awesome ending. Khushi named her son after her father. She achieved her goal. Arnav realized that his priorities have changed and decided to stay back in India with his family. Very heart touching epilogue, thank you choti.