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Meena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: shalini_s
loved the ending.. glad that Arnav decided to stay back..

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so much for being there through this journey :)

Love always,

Choti

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Meena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: srain10
Amazing ending to this wonderful story...khushi's dream finally became reality... arnav was so right not to go back to London and stayed here for himself and for his family...
I'm going to miss this stories and used to eagerly wait for updates...
Thanks for coming up with a such story idea...
Are you planning to write anything new or taking break for a while...

Thank you so much for your comments! I've loved reading them. I am planning to take a break for a while- or at least, until another story pops up! 😆

Love always,

Choti

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Meena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: sincereme
Mind blowing. . The perfect end to the perfect story.. "This is home".. This statement of Arnav made me so proud of him..

Arnav's unconditional support made khushi the woman she is today.. He gave courage to her when she was at lowest point of her life, when she was giving up her dream.. He was there all along with her... And that's what true love is..

Loved the family scene.. Little Shashi with his parents while Khushi fussing over his hair.. That was an adorable picture.. Love them. .

Looking forward to a new story... 😊

Take care and stay blessed.. 🤗

Thank you so much! I agree- I actually felt really, really proud of Arnav and Khushi while writing the epilogue. I'm glad you felt that as well! It's a pleasure to read your comments :)

Love always,

Choti

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Meena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: kvarsha
Awesome story...
While reading the story i felt like I was watching all the incidents
happening before me
By reading this story I wish I would have born in that time
do something for my country that had given me so much and still giving me so much...
PROUD To Be Born As an Indian 😊

Thank you for commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it- using Nehru's speech and reading it made me so proud too :)

Love always,

Choti

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Meena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: LadyR
A beautiful ending.. Arnav's realization of where home is- was beautifully portrayed, especially when he saw his son playing with his father.. poignant

Their relationship was drafted so well, their understanding of each others needs.. in the beginning their inane ability to accommodate each other beliefs was worrisome but you gave it great direction.

Look forward to reading more from you, hopefully soon.

Your comments truly make my day. You always pick out the most beautiful things to say, and I absolutely adore reading them. I've enjoyed reading them on not just my story, but other stories as well- someday, I hope you'll come to the dark side with us and write 😉 Thank you!

Love always,

Choti

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Meena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: nizahairu
Nice one

Thank you for commenting, I'm glad you liked it!

Love always,

Choti

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Meena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: sankadevi25
What a sweet ending to a lovely story! I'm glad Arnav too feels at home in this chapter. Can't wait to see what's next from you!!

Awwh, thank you! I'm glad you liked it- thank you so much for commenting!

Love always,

Choti.

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Meena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor
Amazing ending to an awesome story dear. Arnav gave a right direction to Khushi...this is surely a very right direction decision. I loved the fact that they named their son Shashi. Arnav realized that his priorities have changed and decided to stay back in India.
You described the moment of freedom beautifully. Loved the way both are there for each other.
Thank you Choti for a wonderful story...and hoping to be with you on your next story.

I had thought of Shashi a while back- since Khushi's father meant so much to her, I felt it was only fitting. Thank you so much for your comment!

Love always,

Choti

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Meena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#509

Originally posted by: Phoenixrises
This is home.
Three simple words conveyed so many emotions and reading them made me feel warm and fuzzy on the inside.
I loved how you transformed both your characters with so much subtlety and yet so obviously.
How Khushi was ready to go to London just because she wanted Arnav to feel the same satisfaction as her, how Arnav was as happy about India's independence as his wife and just how far they'd come from the first time they had met.
It's the way you so eloquently placed Nehru's Tryst Of Destiny speech into your epilogue that makes me absolutely adore your style of writing.
And finally I do hope that you won't be saying goodbye anytime soon and that you won't be able to stay away from us fans for long and will come up with a brilliant new story that is just as capturing as this one was.
Until next time.
Love.

Oh, I just love your comments. You have been here for every chapter, and I always get excited when I see that you've commented. You have a way of making me see what you, as a reader, sees with my writing, and I am so grateful to have people like you reading my story. It has been a pleasure to read your comments. I am not saying goodbye- I'll be back, as soon as I come up with a new story.

Love always,

Choti.