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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: Chokri_ASR
That my dear was a kick ass update! You had me at the edge of seat, and I was rooting for Khushi the entire update, even at the end when it's apparent she will be leaving. GOOD FOR HER...👏 The girl needs to get away from this mess to get some normalcy back into her life. I am so happy, jumping up and down that she took a stance with her mother and also with Arnav. This is the Khushi I have been waiting for, and it was worth the wait. I realize her heart will be aching, but with time and reflection on life it will heal. I shall bet on that...

As for Arnav, he also deserves 👏 ... for finally telling the crazy, whacko sister and Lavanya that he wants signature on the divorce papers. And the fact he said, its more to protect Khushi, was the icing on the cake for me.

Oh and this line below...

"Yes, Lavanya, there were times when I loved you, when I tried hard to hold onto that love. But you wouldn't let me...you never made it easy for me".

@bold red... I am guessing that is because he wanted to make the relationship work for Aarav's sake, but La and her demented brain wouldn't accept it, which means that love did not get far or wasn't what he feels for Khushi... that is what I am going to believe, and keep smiling because I just loved loved loved this update!

But Dr Raizada has a lot to make up for now, he better get ready to win back and find Khushi to give her the happiness she deserves after the pain she had to go through...

Overall awesome update, felt like things lined up perfectly for the journey to take a leap towards some better time... Let's go, I am ready!

jigs super comment...😃iam with u on mission how to woo Kushi...Dr Raizada has to do lot of research...

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Hina khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

thanks for d update...

vl post detail cmmts.later i am bit busy...

why is like button.not working??

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sweety421

@sweety421

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

My heart is on tachycardia ryt now Jenny Di...
The Last Part...!!!!! A very big and solid reason fo Khushi to walk out...
Khushi' confrontation with her mother was very painful but it was needed...whatever khushi said was true...!!!!
Wonderful writing Di. ...
Excited to read the coming phase...

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

time heals everyone.. hope la understands that... dont know what khushi interpreted from the la-arnav convo.. it was fair that she walked out silently but hope she doesnt worry on those lines or blame herself.. khushi confrontation with her mom was heart-wrenching... beautiful writing...

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Thanks for pm.

Comment on page 18.

And I forget to say that I am all excited to visit Allahabad through your writing.

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faree

@faree

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

after reading this chapter i am completely numb and drained out.

i know arnav and lavanya needs a closure but these lines pierced my heart.

Yes, Lavanya, there were times when I loved you, when I tried hard to hold onto that love. But you wouldn't let me...you never made it easy for me".

why because khushi is hearing this confession straight from arnav's mouth, its like a last blow to her already fragile and weak state.

its good that khushi going away from all this madness, she needs it.when she is gone than they all going to realize her worth. and yeah i am bit mad at arnav too.

jenny you did it again, your writing evoke so many emotions. you wont believe i was dreading this update and in advance feeling so much pain and distress for khushi. that is the power of your writing that fictional characters seems so real.

BRILLIANT ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT

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A_BA

@A_BA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Updated res on page 15😃

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cineraria

@cineraria

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Oh God no. Dearest khushi Bitiya 😭

I remember that saying in Hindi, though out of context here but suits perfectly. Dene wala jab bhi deta, deta chappad phaad ke. (When lord above bestows you with something, he confers it a plenty.) I wouldn't want to blame god, but seriously just how screwed up one day can get for a person? Dene wala has given Bitiya heartbreaks chappad phaad ke.

Like I must have said in every comment I have had the fortune to make here, the best thing about SF is that the characters are so stunningly real. If everyone did everything perfectly, said the most appropriate things, always stepped in the other person's shoe before passing crass judgments, if none were selfish, stupid or hurting they'd all have ascended to heaven by now and would have looked down on planet Earth, puckering up their noses haughtily at silly humans with their fallibilities.

Sujatha's societal conformation instincts continue to preside over her motherly instincts, nothing changed in past 12 -16 hours. Sujatha: Meri naak kata ke rakhdi meri ladki ne. 😡

Manya would keep defending her stance with vehemence. Manya: After all how can I be ever wrong. Ever mistaken, can't say about rest of the world though, mere per ki jooti. 😈

Arnav: I'll keep saying I'll fix it all. I have years of experience in fixing eyes and vision after all.

ME: Yeah, why exactly didn't you do something temporarily to your beloved's vision? To let her witness one living room MU? You don't fix things by hugging and declaring once-upon-a-time-lau to your exes doofus.

Arnav: f**k. Learnt a lesson for life.

ME: (eagerly) What?

Arnav: Never give spare entry cards to the girl you love till the woman you almost loathe is still your wife. Better still, never give spare entry cards to Dr. Gupta.

ME: Now what do you plan to do Dr. Raizada. How about some damage control?

Arnav: Oh yes, I'd take back that card. You know to avoid future complications.

ME: Your future complication is to figure your way out in Indian Trains dumbass, Bitiya is gone.

Arnav: Umm, uh, okay.

ME: Ask for clean bedrolls though, they don't give you till you ask for them. 😎

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Omg what a dummer!!!! So Arnav did loved lavanya!!! What a pretender!!! His action and words towards lav was like he hate her so much and never had feelings for her when indeed he loved loved her!!!! And yes indeed, MEN!!! I dnT blame lavanya completely now.

What I felt now, is somehow Arnav is responsible for lavanya condition too. They least he can do for her was help grieve with her together and not left her so sudden. They both were hurt and broken, maybe Arnav was hurt more cause the woman who he loved betray him and broke his trust.

I did had suspicious abt Arnav feelings toward lavanya, cause they did live as husband n wife and there r huge possibility of them coming together.

And indeed khushi will feel manya was right and lavanya too, there last chance to make their marriage work.

Plz plz can u feel sorry for us a give a quick teaser. I just hate Arnav right now and do agreed with the elders now. He should hve wait until he is completely over with lav before pursue khushi. Even tho he sign the divorce paper, lav was yet to sign it and they were officially separated. And I dnT think Arnav tell khushi he loved his wife.

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#120

Jen,

I feel like I have to reread this chapter over and over again to get the full impact which I will do tomorrow if I ge a chance. I so appreciate you giving us the scene with the 2 of them at the beginning. Though I don't agree with how she is feeling (just being selfish but you know I have been in this kind of situation too right?), for someone like Kushi it was bound to happen - Manya and Lavanya have put enough doubt in her mind to make her feel guilty. I can't help but want to remind Kushi that Arnav was way down the divorce process by the time they met - nothing and absolutely nothing could have changed his mind to give this marriage another go. So these 2 crazy sisters were just being plain selfish and vindictive. I for one have to take Arnav's word for what they are because he is and should be the more important person to her if he is the man she loves. I love his inner thoughts at how he f**ked up while he promises to take care of things. The take all the time kiddo was very sweet and telling her he will wait was a promise. I hope she remembers that in the worst time to come.

Can I tell you what I thoroughly enjoyed in this chapter? It is Arnav giving it back to Manya. She thought she was going to have another guilty confession . Well think again Manya! He told her exactly what she deserved - pay attention to your loved one and not waste the time on hurting others. Kudos to him for taking the divorce paper to Lavanya himself. He could not have made it clearer if he tried.

So Lavanya is regretting Dr. Neville breaking professional relationship with her. He did the right thing as he felt he would be crossing over the patient doctor relationship. Let's see if she cares for his friendship now.

Sujata? W*F? My mom was the most traditional mom in the world and was similar in always trying to avoid embarrassing situations to the family BUT she stood up for me and my happiness no matter what her wish was for who my husband ended being. She realized blood was more important than strangers gossiping or making stupid remarks. So really I do not get Sujata and Kushi needs to get away from that house so she does not have more guilt added to her already fragile shoulders. Which she did poor girl, going to the only place she felt like home. But it was not going to be her day. This part is so heartbreaking as we are seeing it from Kushj's pov. There is nothing worst than walking in ihe middle of a situation involving the person you love the most and seeing/hearing what she did. Just like she had said there are 2 sides to a marriage, I wish she had stayed and learned more. I know it all looks wrong bht I am giving Arnav the benefit of the doubt because I feel it is really him trying to move on. there are many ways one can love a person and we should not be too quick to judge Dr. Raizada and this situation. No chapals please . , ,

I guess we know why she goes away now. But he promised to wait so I can't wait to read about the next phase of this story. I do love this Arnav the most of the ones you have created. He is flawed, makes mistakes but he is so lovable which I know Kushi will be able to see after a proper wooing this time and all out in the open too.

Loved it Jen - must have been hard to write and I certainly hope we did not distract you from the original ideas on this story.