Arshi FF:Saffron Fields#15// Teaser Pg.128/Link Thread 16 Pg 1. - Page 102

Like the previous chapter I had to read it twice before being able to comment.

You explained Khushi's POV very well.

"Figure out how to vanquish those demons to embrace life, soothe her guilty conscience to embrace love and unravel her mind's paradoxes to embrace peace." This was a favourite line in the chapter.

I am eager to discover how Khushi manages to do that. I want to see her heal and once again embrace the love that she and Arnav share. I want her relationship with her parents to be mended. Regain the bond that she shares with her father. More importantly, to forgive herself for loving Arnav when he was married.

Thanks for the PM. Sorry was delayed in commenting on the last two updates. I was travelling on work and then came down with the flu. Both updates needed a clear head so had to wait to comment.

Emotional chapter. As usual loved your writing. Felt bad for all three of them. But more for Khushi for sure. Truly she really needs break from all this mess. Time for her to deal and heal heart. In short span of days she emotionally drained by all the person she loved. Arnav's admission to loving Lavanya in their marriage albeit she doesn't know the context of the admission it has proved her guilt of being responsible for the demise of his marriage. In this circumstances she wont be able to find answers to the questions weighing down. She needs space and for herself even from her parents and Arnav. It's going to hurt him but she has do it for herself. Truly you're an amazing writer. In this chapter your writing each of the character is absolutely brilliant. Keep up the good work. Thx for the PM.

Superb update 👏 You are simply the best Jenny 👍🏼

Congrats on the new thread Jenny 👏 Loved the teaser 😊

Chapter 40: What a sensitive update! You really played with our inner core. You are gifted with an amazing talent, which you used to its full. I am left with no words to describe your way of writing.

sorry for late.. was ofline due to family ..

chapter 40 and 41