Arshi FF:Saffron Fields#15// Teaser Pg.128/Link Thread 16 Pg 1. - Page 13

Originally posted by: Raila1014

Jen,

I feel like I have to reread this chapter over and over again to get the full impact which I will do tomorrow if I ge a chance. I so appreciate you giving us the scene with the 2 of them at the beginning. Though I don't agree with how she is feeling (just being selfish but you know I have been in this kind of situation too right?), for someone like Kushi it was bound to happen - Manya and Lavanya have put enough doubt in her mind to make her feel guilty. I can't help but want to remind Kushi that Arnav was way down the divorce process by the time they met - nothing and absolutely nothing could have changed his mind to give this marriage another go. So these 2 crazy sisters were just being plain selfish and vindictive. I for one have to take Arnav's word for what they are because he is and should be the more important person to her if he is the man she loves. I love his inner thoughts at how he f**ked up while he promises to take care of things. The take all the time kiddo was very sweet and telling her he will wait was a promise. I hope she remembers that in the worst time to come.

Can I tell you what I thoroughly enjoyed in this chapter? It is Arnav giving it back to Manya. She thought she was going to have another guilty confession . Well think again Manya! He told her exactly what she deserved - pay attention to your loved one and not waste the time on hurting others. Kudos to him for taking the divorce paper to Lavanya himself. He could not have made it clearer if he tried.

So Lavanya is regretting Dr. Neville breaking professional relationship with her. He did the right thing as he felt he would be crossing over the patient doctor relationship. Let's see if she cares for his friendship now.

Sujata? W*F? My mom was the most traditional mom in the world and was similar in always trying to avoid embarrassing situations to the family BUT she stood up for me and my happiness no matter what her wish was for who my husband ended being. She realized blood was more important than strangers gossiping or making stupid remarks. So really I do not get Sujata and Kushi needs to get away from that house so she does not have more guilt added to her already fragile shoulders. Which she did poor girl, going to the only place she felt like home. But it was not going to be her day. This part is so heartbreaking as we are seeing it from Kushj's pov. There is nothing worst than walking in ihe middle of a situation involving the person you love the most and seeing/hearing what she did. Just like she had said there are 2 sides to a marriage, I wish she had stayed and learned more. I know it all looks wrong bht I am giving Arnav the benefit of the doubt because I feel it is really him trying to move on. there are many ways one can love a person and we should not be too quick to judge Dr. Raizada and this situation. No chapals please . , ,

I guess we know why she goes away now. But he promised to wait so I can't wait to read about the next phase of this story. I do love this Arnav the most of the ones you have created. He is flawed, makes mistakes but he is so lovable which I know Kushi will be able to see after a proper wooing this time and all out in the open too.

Loved it Jen - must have been hard to write and I certainly hope we did not distract you from the original ideas on this story.

Originally posted by: cineraria

Oh God no. Dearest khushi Bitiya 😭

I remember that saying in Hindi, though out of context here but suits perfectly. Dene wala jab bhi deta, deta chappad phaad ke. (When lord above bestows you with something, he confers it a plenty.) I wouldn't want to blame god, but seriously just how screwed up one day can get for a person? Dene wala has given Bitiya heartbreaks chappad phaad ke.

Like I must have said in every comment I have had the fortune to make here, the best thing about SF is that the characters are so stunningly real. If everyone did everything perfectly, said the most appropriate things, always stepped in the other person's shoe before passing crass judgments, if none were selfish, stupid or hurting they'd all have ascended to heaven by now and would have looked down on planet Earth, puckering up their noses haughtily at silly humans with their fallibilities.

Sujatha's societal conformation instincts continue to preside over her motherly instincts, nothing changed in past 12 -16 hours. Sujatha: Meri naak kata ke rakhdi meri ladki ne. 😡

Manya would keep defending her stance with vehemence. Manya: After all how can I be ever wrong. Ever mistaken, can't say about rest of the world though, mere per ki jooti. 😈

Arnav: I'll keep saying I'll fix it all. I have years of experience in fixing eyes and vision after all.

ME: Yeah, why exactly didn't you do something temporarily to your beloved's vision? To let her witness one living room MU? You don't fix things by hugging and declaring once-upon-a-time-lau to your exes doofus.

Arnav: f**k. Learnt a lesson for life.

ME: (eagerly) What?

Arnav: Never give spare entry cards to the girl you love till the woman you almost loathe is still your wife. Better still, never give spare entry cards to Dr. Gupta.

ME: Now what do you plan to do Dr. Raizada. How about some damage control?

Arnav: Oh yes, I'd take back that card. You know to avoid future complications.

ME: Your future complication is to figure your way out in Indian Trains dumbass, Bitiya is gone.

Arnav: Umm, uh, okay.

ME: Ask for clean bedrolls though, they don't give you till you ask for them. 😎