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Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#881

Originally posted by: canapoem

Yes Mira, most of them open a new thread to post a new update if it has already reached 140 pages.

Yes.. doing it now. :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#882

Fantastic chapter!!! Looking forward for more from you :)

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Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Here is the link to the Third Thread! All thanks to you folks.. ❤️

I will post the next update on this new thread and look forward to your feedback, comments and thoughts.

I will post in ten hours folks.. Thank you..

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Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Thank you to all of you ... I managed to open a thread with your help!❤️

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Sobhan006

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Lovely! Lovely!lovely! What an update! Khushi needs time...arnav is ready to give that in his own way... Sweet moment between them...

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ipkndlover75

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Posted: 10 years ago

#886

Wow!!!..so glad Arnav finally made it ...yay!!!

There was something magical about the way they met...alone in the night and away from prying eyes n being judged...loved the way they sat on the sofa ...talked about their past...about Arnavs concern n insecurity with Mohan ...like long lost friends...

Also liked the way u created awareness between them...their passionate kiss...n the way Khushi thought to let go and take these memories... Was fabulous!!

But this time Arnav has made it clear...that he is ready to wait but not let go...that was commendable.. Love his resolve... Hope it goes through..

Fab update!!!

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Kishmish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#887

Congratulations on the new thread ...

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955548

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Posted: 10 years ago

#888

Reflecting on NK & Khushi's bond.

The unassuming NK. A loveable Son- Husband -Friend -Father

It is devastating when any death occurs.

But for a parent to see their Child die is so Heart Wrenching.

Loved the way You showed His relationship with one & all

That loving Character much admired

And now Arnav who does not want to wait for another 10 yrs.

As the Pun used by You 'Khushi '

Happiness once slipped by. Not any more

They both have to grab this Second Opportunity Fate has laid out in front of them.

Loved night Texting.

Nani & Arnav this is a sacred beautiful bond.

MB :- I envy Khushi & gang going to MATHURA.

I know You must have picked this destination for Meera.

Sheer Nostalgic for Me.

I could say a lot about Mathura yet it won't be enough.

Summer Holidays was a must.

And few in between trips squeezed in.

Played on the banks of Yamuna Ghat. Sat under the tree watching the monkeys.

Loved all the nooks & crannies.

The Galies are like maze itself.

My dad told us lots of stories. Fascinating & Enthralled by them

And the Goshala. Had names for some of the Gows

Yes you get pestered by locals but one gets good how to avoid them.

Very colourful.

And onto Goverdhan a night is a must.

Early morning doing the Parekrama it has it's own appeal.

Fresh Air.

Yes it has the downside too. But I will push that at the back of my mind

Meera will Love it

So MB go on You paint the picture & am ready to enjoy it.

I know I do get carried away so please ignore it if not interested.

No harm done.

❤️S

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955548

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Posted: 10 years ago

#889

This Chapter wins hands down to Manorama & Nani

And the beautiful interaction between Meera & Mohan.

'Does sharing them build bridges over gaps we create?'

'See what I still have,just not what I lost '

'And who knows what Our Tomorrow's will bring '

This inter action between the two Wise Souls is so so bonding...----

Behind the sofa =====:-)

That persistent firm yet calm voice of Meera questioning Mohan

Only a child knows how to get reaction from another child

Inquiring why dose Mohan not consult the map

No response. Love Her persistent

Mohan's silence.

It's like a wave is gathering a momentum.

The persistent gentle coxing for the reply.

Building up the emotions

Trying to find that connection which in turn that wave gives in & throws up those pearls of Foam

And that Wave & foam gently reach a the Shore call Home.

They have made this connection.

Yes Arnav is the Connection

Meera just tipped the scales & Mohan's euphoric Foam reached the shore

Connection with Meera was made. So innocently done.

Yet the result was Heartwarming & important for the Parents

Mohan opens that door Meera has his attention.

Euphoric foam of Guffaws & Giggles

M& M sharing a joke at Arnav's expense

'Share half of my Papa' "WOW"

The response - spontaneous

Both clinging to Arnav's legs

This brings me to Your thoughts Yes

It's time to fill those cracks & form the strong bonds.

Meera just did that.

She is true gem :- a Sparkling one I would say.

Hint of NK's character peeping through

And of course the chapter ending with the midnight texting.

Sleep eludes these two.

Those Memories which lay dormant-------

Was it time to to unlock that door...

Bring out the Motorbike...Dust it down...blow away the Cobwebs...

Ride Away with that 'Sentimental Boy who has 'lovers Hands'

Dam where is that key so all those pent up feelings can have wings

Admire Arnav who has this huge responsibility of looking after Mohan

Universally all parents should be applauded.

It must be tough.

Day after day.. Diligently caring for their bundles.

Some breakdown due to the pressure.

Yet some don't Waver

They both need that support equally.

They should not be judged.

This is a interesting Topic You have dealt with Compassion.

Bravo once again.

❤️S

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PS :- this window belongs to Meera & Mohan

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#890

Marvellous update
Loved it
Thanks for the mail

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