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Posted: 10 years ago

This is one of the most beautiful updates, Mirabell. I read it, I re-read it and I re-read it!!

This chapter was all Arnav Khushi...like when they met all those years ago, they were free, ready to open up to each other, no walls, no hesitation in being close to each other physically to draw and give emotional strength support.

Fear of losing a loved one is the biggest fear and there is no medicine or cure or salve that can make the pain of losing a loved one go away!! It only cements that fear!! Khushi pushed Arnav away because of this fear, but NK with his love, persistence was able help Khushi see life beyond her demons..but his death has brought them back full force..and once again she is pushing Arnav away. But then love conquers all and Arnav will win the war he declared between them...but for both them...for Meera, for Mohan.

Memories are what keep us going in life but sometimes they are the ones that stop us from moving as we hold on them very tightly, like Khushi.

"I missed you"... I think these three words are not for the one day they were apart...it's for all those years Arnav was away from her!! He probably missed her every day since they time he drove away from her all those years ago.

The Kiss: It was raw, erotic and sensuous!! It defined the pull they have for each other.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Dear MB,

Loved the way you described changes in Khushi's relationship with her friends, her mom, her daughter, herself...those changes which changes a person deeply were put into words so precisely...Touching...you have a nice way with dealing emotions into words...it makes me feel Khushi's emotions as I read your words...

What was it with nights and difficult questions? It seemed that the darkness let the questions seek and find siblings and grow in numbers.----Wow! Excellent! I loved this thought...

She was not ready to allow anyone else in her life. ---Aha! Fear! Fear of loosing...especially when she has lost in the past naturally puts up this fear...can't blame her..

She didn't need another heart break.---Poor girl! Hugs!

Steal a few moments? -go steal girl! You both have that wonderful chemistry even now...you both could ease up with each other, bare your soul to each other...Arnav's feelings about his son was beautifully told..his pain, proudness, worry, anger...nice sketch of those two friends, the way they sat, the minor gestures, each breath, closeness, beautiful MB, really you painted it like a poem...

And what was that bomb? Whewww...the kiss was a bomb...truly all heat...

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Posted: 10 years ago


Very nice update.

We can understand what Khushi is going through.It is difficult for any girl .

You are an excellent writetr. I cry everytime when khushi cried remembering NK.
I really wonder everytime how you writers put emotions in words when it is difficult for me to even write 2 lines. Hats of to all wonderful writers.

One request can u send me the link for Twiggys Polemic Jacknapes .I really want to read this.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suzuki



One request can u send me the link for Twiggys Polemic Jacknapes .I really want to read this.


Here it is.. the link to Twiggy's http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3641672
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Posted: 10 years ago
What an update wow just love it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful, beautiful story! Bookmarking! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
I have to apologize for responding so late but I had a really bad week. So I sat and read all the chapters of SC from the begining. It did what those useless excedrin tablets couldn't do. My migraine is gone, my mood is better and I feel much better. Thank you.
It's so true, that death changes so many lives. It impacts everyone who is left behind. It also has a way of bringing people together and patching differences that normal circumstances can't. Maybe it's the ultimate reality check for us.

Can't wait for the next update to find out what's happening in your Khushi and Arnav's lives.

PS: I agree with what you said about canapoem. She is such a sweetheart. Always has warm comments, apt songs and beautiful quotes.
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Posted: 10 years ago


Thank you so much.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow. What am amazing update meera. You nailed it so beautifully..finally arnav made it. He came for khushi, for meera. How can one doesnt when a cute girl requests? And khushi sitting outside the house yes it looked as if she is waiting for him only..and they talked..abt their past life when they seperated..their life after separation..their marriage, failed marriage, nk's death...though khushi didnt answer to his question abt missing him but her expression said it all. And how he said he missed her. Uff the kiss, so pure, felt so right.. Even khushi also there as much as he in that kiss. Uff.. Yes she needs time, and he is ready to give time to her to realise.. awesomely written meera. Hats off to you..waiting to what happens next?
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Posted: 10 years ago
I haven't forgotten the update thats due tomorrow around this time. :)



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