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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#291

Oh MB that was mindblowing - I need to rush for work - I need to leave by 6.30 am and here Iam at 5.45 am sitting on the commode reading ur update instead of taking bath.
Will be back from work to re-read it.
Just wanted to tell u once more that I love ur writing and we lost out a lot of precious things because of ur delayed launch as a writer -
Iam bad at words MB - hence I don't comment much (you may name that as inferiority complex)
Thx for the beautiful update -
Superb, awesome, great going - loving this story

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deepthi

@deepsdspeed

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#292

yet another awesome update. .

how well you put in word their feelings.. manorama understanding her daughters struggle and the battle going on within her heart.. trying to support her..

arnav for not telling khushi about mohan.. but he is a dad. how can he.. now everything will really going to be fine..mohan will make them meet more often i guess..

meera such a lovely kid and im more than sure that mohan and khuhsi really gonna share a great bonding than what arnav and meera will gonna have..maya is such a wonderful woman..i just love her..

everrytime i read an update it makes me feel so good that i fail to put in words what it feels like as im no good at that.. but truly this is one of the ff's where i dont dislike any of the characters.. and u make me love them more and more every time..

thank you for such a lovely story..thanks for the pm and looking forward for yet another great chapter..

Edited by deepsdspeed - 10 years ago

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#293

Mirabell,

Slow or not, Second Chances is in my top-rated stories of all time list on Arnav and Khushi. How beautifully well-etched are your characters...I feel their angst, their pain, their passion. Khushi and Arnav...sigh...what a beautiful couple...yes, a dream team if they were together...loved Khushi's reminiscences about him and their long ago moments...sensuous...Arnav's reticence to tell her about Mohan's ASD, Meera's easy camaraderie with all and sundry...the title of the chapter equally explaining the Mohan and Meera equation as much as the Arnav and Khushi one...Maya could not resist dropping in...she is definitely going to match-make between the two now...but one cannot resist loving her for who she is...and Khushi, like it or not, has found her newest project...I have a feeling that Mohan and she are going to be even greater buddies than Arnav and Meera are...all very wonderfully scripted together in your inimitable narrative. Great story...waiting to see how this evolves...10 days is too long a wait...can we ask for the update to happen sooner? Pretty please?! 😛

Best,

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#294

Khuhsi's memories of her time with Arnav have risen to the surface and now seem to occupy her mind.. It was never a case of out of sight, out of mind..she has been counting the years, months, weeks, days, hours, and seconds..they have been apart...

NK was her husband.. Arnav was her first love... Her discomfort arises from her thinking her behavior is not warranted as she is a widow, she is dishonoring NK's memory..but really she is suppressing her right to happiness.. If fate had been such that she had passed away..NK would have been encouraged by all to remarry...

I hope seeing how Maya has moved forward after divorce will allow Khushi to reassess..

Arnavs discomfort over Mohan seems to descend from him blaming himself in some way.. Maya reaching out to Khushi for her professional opinion alludes to her acceptance of Mohans condition .. Proof that we all react differently to situations in life..

A special bond has developed between Mohan and Meera Mama..its warming and its endearing..

Edited by LadyR - 10 years ago

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis
Oh MB that was mindblowing - I need to rush for work - I need to leave by 6.30 am and here Iam at 5.45 am sitting on the commode reading ur update instead of taking bath.
Will be back from work to re-read it.
Just wanted to tell u once more that I love ur writing and we lost out a lot of precious things because of ur delayed launch as a writer -
Iam bad at words MB - hence I don't comment much (you may name that as inferiority complex)
Thx for the beautiful update -
Superb, awesome, great going - loving this story

I *had* to respond.. I just *had to*.

This is one of the highest compliments one could receive.. you sitting on a commode and reading when you should be bathing and leaving for work. It brought a smile to my face and gratitude in my heart. :) Thank you. ❤️

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#296

Awesome update!!! Loved it totally!!!!

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nisha_mehta

@nisha_mehta

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#297

Update was too good

Very heartfelt. Khushi and meera need Arnav and Mohan in their life just as much as the later needs them. They would all make the perfect family.

Waiting for the next part

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DDC1

@DDC1

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#298

I hereby join Dr.R's team & state the obvious- you write so well I feel like I am vacationing in India with them.

Arnav has thrown the gauntlet.. deny all you want Kushi I have faith that the man knows what he wants & what you want.

Mira slow is fine ...some of the finest things in life evolve slowly