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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#301

I loved maya here... Sometime I wonder if she is really a real woman .. I just hope she become the Cupid in arnav and khushi's relationship ... And other time I wonder if theyneed any body else as their children already accepted them.. And mohan already called khushi mamma... And then again do they need any Cupid as they did not forgot each other even after ten long years... And there is his nani and her mil who also want them to moved on...There are so many factors in their life and we are enjoying and who care if story is moving slowly ... We just loving this tension between them

Edited by ranogill - 10 years ago

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#302

I knew it she is feeling guilty for thinking and feeling something for him when she is a widow. But what does being a widow mean? Is there a manual on how a widow is expected to behave and feel? Are there different requirements for different ages? I feel for her because along with the guilt there is also the happiness and responsibility of the 2 humans she is caring for: her daughter and her mil. Manorama is really all alone with NK gone. Who will look after her if Kushi moves on? God, there is so much to think about. No wonder she is reticent at grabbing that second chance. During her flashback, I felt Arnav as her first love was her passion and NK with his care was the safety she needed.

I love that first meeting with Mohan both from Meera's perspective and Kushi. Mohan is such a lovely boy and I am equally looking forward to reading about his acceptance and interactions with Kushi and Meera as Arnav and Kushi reconnecting. Especially loved the scene with Arnav and the 2 kids on his sides. I felt Arnav's pain so much. It must have been really hard for him to cope with Mohan by himself. As much as she is a lovely lady, I can't help but feel he had sole responsibility for him. Not blaming her for moving on because Maya has done the best thing she could for him, by providing him with a stable environment and still being involved. It just feels Arnav has taken more on. I am so glad that Kushi reached out and assured him of her help. I don't think he told her because he was more concerned with her loss and grief in their past interactions. I hope he does question himself too much on whether he is asking too much and too soon for something between the 2 of them. She will not try this if she does not receive constant prodding from him, from the people around her. Also loved the little jealousy she felt at the interaction between Maya and Arnav.

I am not sure we can call it slow pace but definitely very descriptive scenes which leave the readers wanting more and more. Your attention to detail is exceptional and I must applaud you for your research on this story because it feels so real, almost like this is coming from having watched a closed one go through this or living it from personal experience.

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#303

Thank u for gmail...😃

The update is fabulous...👏

Feeling sorry after knowing Mohan's disorder...😭 Khushi can definitely help Mohan overcome the disorder...

Khushi should genuinely let go of her past... She feels for Arnav... They have shared a beautiful past... They both are single parents & totally lonely in their life... They both deserve someone to love, care & share their life... Arnav wants to take a step... But Khushi is still not willing to...

Life is not always willing to give second chances... But in Khushi's case, life is offering a second chance to her in the form of Arnav; so she should grab it...

Please update quickly... Waiting for Arnav & Khushi's love & passion to blossom once again...❤️

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maina95131

@maina95131

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Posted: 10 years ago

#304

What a wonderful update. Loved the interaction between mohan and khushi and meera and arnav.

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#305

Awesome chapter...finally she is in his home...meeting his family...the way khushi approached Mohan was so nice...she understood in the first instance probably...she has consoled Arnav...Maya is such a sweet lady...she wanted to meet The Khushi Gupta...khushi felt a pang of jealousy when she saw Maya and Arnav together...brilliant update...thanks for the PM

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manusmithcl

@manusmithcl

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#306

Excellent update.. Very realistic and i am really happy with the pace with you are taking it forward..

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Shilpi

@shils28

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#307

Good update! and emotional too!

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meinfrau14

@meinfrau14

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#308

very nice update :) I like this Maya..she is such a character !

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#309

First and foremost thank you for a fantastic,fabulous update dear

Felt every word and emotions u penned down excellently wow simply wow

Ur r truly truly blessed dear friend I can just envy u but can't help love u also.

Khushi's thoughts r acting like teasers which r tempting me to dig the past out ...

Arnav's straightforwardness really blown me away he knows time is ticking and he has to make hay while sunshines

And he is determined with his second chance this time

MB THANK U FOR SUCH BEAUTIFUL STORY

Hope I able to convey how much I am loving this story

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bea_rom

@bea_rom

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#310

Yet another amazing chapter
I could see and feel everything they were going through
Meera and Mohan moments were really cute, and loved how Khushi managed to get through to him
And arnav's worry and hurt for his child. So heartwarming and heartbreaking at the same time

Arnav and Khushi moment: love how you bring us bits and peaches of their former story and how it comes back to her I can also understand her reluctance and feeling of cheating on nk
Does Arnav also recal their past?
Manors ma is such a great person and I loved her being simply human and in the end also worrying about herself and afrai of being alone for the rest of her life
But her relationship with Khushi is so beautiful and strong ...

Coming to maya, she seems nice and bubbly but I couldn't resist feeling a bit jealous or uneasy, as Khushi did. Did Arnav and her really love each other?
But thy share a strong and beautiful connection. Such a rare case for separated couples

All in all, loved it and can't wait for the next one :)