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Sadia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

YIPeee Freaking awesome loved it,waiting for the next😊

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

First, excellent write up on betrayals in particular Payal's to Khushi. I came away thinking this was the most significant betrayal from the last chapter as well and you penned it very well.

Second, it's clear that Khushi and Arnav have a far more important journey ahead. So, the story went through this episode of learning to gain trust between the two. And the kudos to you for making it so very entertaining.

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Crystalcraze

@Crystalcraze

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Really happy that Arnav realised his misunderstanding...

Kuch Kuch Hota Hai moments...☺️ Loving it!!!😳

Hope to see more of it...😃

Thanks for the lovely update...I was stalking it daily...😊

Keep it going...

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arshi_sarun

@arshi_sarun

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Omg omg tat was such a good update... Finally he got to know the truth.. Thanks for the pm

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rdforfun

@rdforfun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Really Happy that misunderstanding is over.

Thank u for the note also.

I never thought abt Payal or Shyam. Just glued to Arhi.

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

lovely update!

So glad that you updated. Have been waiting!

Arnav and his stupid Harvard brain! Thats what half baked information does to you :-)

Hmmm.. interesting, I like the way Khushi chastised him but the most telling was her comment about him being a bad looser - I am wondering has either of them realised the significance of her instinctively saying so and he quietly accepting it?

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 10 years ago

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Thanks for the note.

Especially payal's part.

And I didnt really think about them. All focus on ArHi only. 😉

I liked how they fought. Even though I don't want their moment to end. I so wanna see what happens at the party.

I want Anjali to tell Arnav about Aman. It feels really bad to trick him like this.

Khushi's mom is so annoying. -.-

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

i loved your note more than the update. why? because i love the well rounded consideration for all of the characters of the story. The update was as expected clearing up a few misconceptions

Keep up the good work

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aafan

@aafan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Awesome update! U just scared us with all the confusion. Will Arnav distory it beyond repair... Great update. Love the way aman had put him in the right place.