Arshi FF : Merger Thrd # 2 Link to Thread #3 on Page 1 - Page 20

Originally posted by: the_breeze

"This phase of the story is very critical for me. It walks us through that phase of a relationship when you think there is none, but you surprise yourself when you realise that there "is" a relationship. It is more than an acquaintance, far deeper than a comfortable camaraderie, different from a friendship but not yet love." Lovely note. Sums up everything beautifully. 😳

You give such a wonderful description of mundane and simple things that I am really blown away. The part about family was superb. Makes you rethink about your own.

Geez he has been angry with her for two months????? What the hell happened??? 😲

Lol it is always super fun to see Arnav all worked up because Khushi didn't turn up when she was supposed to! He worries and frets so much! And all this before he has fallen in love with her. God save the poor girl when he does! He is gonna be one overprotective husband 😆. Her response to his concerns was equally funny. Searching for a screw, LOL! You have a good sense of humor. None of the funny scenes you write appear forced or weird 👏. Great job. Awww he calls her Kabootari! Reminded me of the SBS segment when Barun called Sanaya a kabootari . Anyway, Khushi's nickname for him isn't less funny, Khada Khamba! Gosh these two have really moved on from sharing a boss-employee relationship. Great to see their comfort level.

The dance session was also well described. I had a grin on my face imagining the girls dancing to sheila ki jawaani and the guys' expressions on seeing this avatar of the girls. Aman is getting quite open in his affections for Anjali. Did Arnav not notice it today?? But Kaka took the cake dancing to Lungi Dance 🤣! I laughed so hard imagining that! but OMG what followed next raised the temperature of the room by several degrees and boy did I have to drink some thanda thanda pani to cool myself down ☺️. That was HOT ☢️! Haeee just thinking about A&K doing tango makes me go all mushy and dhak-dhak. Simply AMAZINGLY described.

You have made Arnav the perfect man in this FF I tell you. He is compassionate, concerned, caring, protective, he dances well, he cooks and he has the looks!! What more could a girl want ❤️!!! You know what, I gotta check if we know each other in real life 😃, cause what Khushi said about mushrooms being a fungi is what I have been saying since ages!!!! I mean really why would you willingly eat a fungus???? Yukkk 🤢 (no offence to any mushroom lovers). Awww he made a separate dish just for her. See if you make this guy any more perfect na, it will be very difficult for all the single ladies to get a good one coz of the comparisons! 😉

Really intrigued as to what happened when they got back from the airport to lead to this situation.

By the length of my comment, I think you must have understood how much I loved the update. Though I understand that you had your reasons for being incommunicado for so long but it would be nice if you could just leave a note next time. Then we can patiently wait instead of worrying and stalking.

Thanks for the pm!

Update soon!

Originally posted by: mehak55

Hey.. Just an excellent concept. 👍🏼👏

I've been a silent reader since months, stalk your work, like the updates but it always slips off my mind to leave a comment.

This is just an astounding plot, a rare found here where story is being taken from the scratch.

I've a complain..You don't continue too soon. 😔