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MMGJfanatic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Wonderful update. Instead of taking prasad she gave a handshake 😆 shankar why r u shouting at her like this poor girl. Wonder what's the reason behind his tears!!!

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MMGJfanatic

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part5: awesome loved gauri's attitude. Why he is not looking at her? Busy in blushing kya 😉 and he is trying to control his laughter MR also does in real life 😳 thier meeting interupted by chandra. It reminded me of tht gold awards where GR seated between MRs 😆

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MMGJfanatic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Part6:loved it. U r amazing writer dhwani 👏 iam just loving twists and turns in the story. Naksh you idiot 😡 u broke the marriage and gauri's heart hate u. Plz go and rott in hell 😡 and chandra has a past 😲 omg he got married to ganga only to become a rich man 😲 oh nooo 😭

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DhwaniNair

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Hima... Thank youu...

" It reminded me of tht gold awards where GR seated
between MRs"
Actually I never thought abt it when i was writing that part :) he he... but i becam happy when u connected with it :)

Thank you again... :))

Nd a personal SORRY for All GAUTAM RODE's fans if u feel I gave his face to a character like Chandramouli...

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MMGJfanatic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: DhwaniNair
Hima... Thank youu...

" It reminded me of tht gold awards where GR seated
between MRs"
Actually I never thought abt it when i was writing that part :) he he... but i becam happy when u connected with it :)

Thank you again... :))

Nd a personal SORRY for All GAUTAM RODE's fans if u feel I gave his face to a character like Chandramouli...

haha i was busy imagining them while reading 😉 u gave me chance to remembering that epic moment 😆 and don't say sorry u included GR in the story. This is enough for me 😳 iam luving this grey shade in his character 😉 love u 😳

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MMGJfanatic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: DhwaniNair
Hima... Thank youu...

" It reminded me of tht gold awards where GR seated
between MRs"
Actually I never thought abt it when i was writing that part :) he he... but i becam happy when u connected with it :)

Thank you again... :))

Nd a personal SORRY for All GAUTAM RODE's fans if u feel I gave his face to a character like Chandramouli...

plzzz don't feel sorry. Iam loving it and plz update next part na 😛 😳 😃

Edited by MMGJfanatic - 10 years ago

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DhwaniNair

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

PART VIII

Gauri's bhajan is appreciated by others. All praised "Dr. Naksh's daughter".Swamiji blessed her. Someone whispered about the broken marriage too.
Meanwhile Shankar is happened to hear these type of whispers on the way and his smile completely faded away.Gauri's eyes are searching for the Shankar.

"Gauri ji"

She exclaimed who is this. Nandu introduced himself as a brother like of Shankar. "I attended the engagement ceremony too."

Nandu, who know what Gauri is searching for Shankar, helped her by saying that Shankar will be at a forest near the stream this time.

Gauri remembered that day when Shankar saved her from some uncultured fellows. Yes that forest is this...!

...

Gauri reached the forest. None is there. How can Shankar comes here alone daily! She searched for him. Atlast she found him who is meditating under a tree.

"Oh Mr. Shankar! You are here! I feel like I am Shakti and You are Shiva."

Gauri came in front of him and looked at him with a cute face.

"I am going to disturb you Shankar. I will disturb you throughout my life" She smiled.

Gauri called him in a romantic+childish tone.

"Ssshan...kaaarrr, Shankarrr.., Shaaankarr"

Shankar opened the eyes with anger and looked at her. Gauri fainted. He shocked and broken his meditation. He stooped to the ground.

"Hey Gauri what happened?? Open your eyes. Open" He touched her cheek and called her. "Gauri"

Gauri opened her eyes and stood up with the help of Shankar. By holding her, Shankar asked her,

"Suddenly what happened to you?"

Gauri said in low voice as she is not well, "You opened your third eye na? I became ash" She stopped her acting and started to laugh.

Shankar reject her hand from her and looked so angry.

"You are really mad!"

He tried to leave the place. Gauri is running behind him.

"Hey...Shankar... Please go slowly. I am sorry. I will not repeat it. I did it just for fun. Please listen me, Shankar"

Shankar,while walking, without looking back, said:

"Villagers started to say something and they are discussing now on "broken marriage". Your father may busy with finding a guy for as soon as possible because of only one muhrut. If you are following me like this, it will create problems in your marriage. So don't do that."

"I found my groom. So don't worry Shankar. My father will definitely accept our love as he loves me. Ganga is not so close with my papa. Thats why she didn't get a good marriage. But Shankar he will definitely accept our love"

"What non-sense! Our love!!?? I don't love anyone."

"Then why you searched for me when you went to room in temple today. I noticed it."

Shankar stopped his walking and turned to Gauri.

"Yes. I looked if you are following me or not. I feared if torture is following me."

"Torture!! You called me torture.. But you know, this is sign of love."

"No I don't love you because I don't like you"

"Why?"

"I have some dreams about my girl. She will be good mannered and loving without selfishness. I just want a simple girl. Not a rich girl like you"

"I am rich. It is not my mistake and I am good mannered I am sure. I am always give respect to elders! I am not selfish too Shankar"

"Are you giving respect to elders??I am elder than you. But you still calling my name "Shankar" without giving any respect. How much time I ignored you. But you are irritating me again and again for your happiness. Selfish!"

Gauri shocked and remained silent.

Shankar started to walk. Again she started to running back him. "Is it a big problem Shankar? Oh noo... Shankar Ji...! Stop there. Please. Listen me... Shankar Jiii..."

They reached at the stream where the forest ends.

Some passerby villagers looked at them and some whispered something. Shankar stopped.

"Look! All are watching us. Every suspicious eyes are like fire.It will make your life an ash. So please go Kanya."

Gauri smiled. "That fire will not affect me because you are with me, Shankar ji. Heyy...don't go..See now I am giving you respect in my words too which is already in my heart. I am not selfish. I know I am not irritating you. I know you loves me. Love is not an irritation. Okay bye Shankar ji. See you tomorrow..." Gauri went without letting Shankar to say anything more.

...

Evening Gauri reached again at the temple with her Dadaji and Ganga. The pooja is done by Shankar. She felt more crowdy now than in morning. So that he didn't see her and passed her by just giving prasadam. Dadaji did not disturbed him because he is that much busy. After sometime, Swamiji came to meet Dadaji and invited them to the Ulsav special dance performance of little girls held at 9 pm. He readily agreed. But Gauri got interest only when she came to know that girls will dance with the song of Shankar, which is informed by none other than Nandu.There are no seats in front of the stage allocated for audience. They should sit on the ground and watch.On the stage, Swami arranged a chair for Dadaji from where he can get the side view of the perfromance. Gauri refused a chair because she knows these types of partiality wont like by Shankar. "Chair is for elders. I will stand and watch." Ganga supported her.

Shankar entered, but at the opposite side, where arranged musical instruments.

He sat down with orchestra team.

Gauri gazed at him only.

"Rii...nii riri saaa aaa...aaa dherenananaaa dheee dheerernnnaaa..."

Gauri gazed at him only...

Little girls moved their cute steps with that magical voice and rhythm. All others enjoying it.

But Gauri gazed at him only... Listen his music only...

"Sa Sa ni Sa Ni Ni Sa... Pa Pa Pa Ma Ri Ga Ri Sa... PaPaPaMa Dha Dha Dha Pa Ni Sa Sa...NiDha Ma Ma Ma..."

Shankar closed his eyes while singing.

Gauri moved forward by forgetting all.. Little girl danced by moving backward...

Now Gauri is in the centre of the stage by facing Shankar. Dadaji stood up. All wondered what is happening .

"Riri thanana dhithaNanana dhirana dhirana dhirana..."

Gauri started to dance.

"...thanana Riri thanana dhithaNanana dharininanana dhirana dhirana dhirana dheeem dheem thanana dhirana dhiranana...dheerreeenAaa...aaa"

Shankar opened his eyes... Gauri stopped her dance... They look at eachother... All witnessed their magical eyelock...

"Gauri!!!!" Mouli's voice trembled the place. Ganga shocked. He came to the stage and pulled Gauri's hand. He stared at Dadaji and Ganga with great anger.

"All come with me."

Dadaji remained silent for not creating a scene there. They left.

Swamiji looked at Shankar. Yes, his son is upset...

Edited by DhwaniNair - 10 years ago