Gaurishankaram... Mohit Raina Mouni Roy FF - Page 7

Wonderful update Chocolava

Originally posted by: Sadhanamomo

Wonderful update Chocolava

You just managed to beautifully weave everything into place

I loved how Gauri was getting ready to go to the temple and needed help with her saree

I amiss thinking that perhaps in future Shankar has to take over that job

Next temple divine eyelock

Everyone looking at shivling.or while Gauri eyes stayed put on her Shankar.

Well you can't blame Gauri

Shankar telling her hold out her hand when her hand is outstretched for the prasad

Shankar needs to admit that he loves her

The nok jhok is too good

And the intro of Nandu is perfect

He asking Shankar to sing and then hearing a sweet melodious voice finding out that it belongs to Gauri.

He is attracted to Gauri his heart belongs to her.

Now he needs to admit it

Waiting for the next update

Thank you Sadhana... I think Nandu became a star in this part :) Did u remember a temple scene before which is very similar to current part... ? All mohinians are thinking same... so my story must be predicted always... :)

Part-1: loved the names shankar, gauri and ganga. And beautiful title 😊 so shankar is shiv bhakt. Loved the prophecy thing u added in to story. Their first meet reminded me of shiv sati first meet 😊 miss my shivsati 😭 and naksh attempted to murder the lil boy by throwing frm bridge 😡 so our young priest is none other than shankar 😉 great pic collection and groom is my cutie pie Gauti 😳 loved the first update. Now i can't wait any more running to read 2nd part 😆

Part 2:vritrasur track wow. Liked how he saved her from that goons and promises to take her home safely he is such a gentleman 😳 uff that touch 😛 loved how u added that dkdm essence to it. He tolg gauri to hold bike instead him? Why man 😲 waiting for naksh and shankar/dev confrontation too. Shankar remembered him or not? Very gripping story. So gauri realized she is in love 😳

Hima... happy to see u r reading my ff frm begining..thanks for that.. :) waiting for ur comments on other parts too... :)

Part3: wonderful update dhwani 👏
gauri taking shankar's name all time awww 😳
naksh what he want's man? That dude has so much attitude 😡 shankar gave right answer to him 😆
and he remembered naksh is his real uncle who tried to kill a 4 year old baby swami is very nice and he is right about gauri shankar wedding:) and i forgot to add shankar has his own martial arts coaching centre wow i am just loving it...

Originally posted by: DhwaniNair

Hima... happy to see u r reading my ff frm begining..thanks for that.. :) waiting for ur comments on other parts too... :)

awww... My pleasure 😳 this whole story is so so beautiful 😊

Hello!!!! I'm kind of new to if..so bear with me😊

Hima...u completed part 3 too na... :) Thank you

Originally posted by: nadine_lopez_48

Hello!!!! I'm kind of new to if..so bear with me😊

I'm glad I read your updates because they are amazing!!!

Keep writing like this!!!!!👏

I truly love the plot and the way you portray the story!!!!
Update jaldi karo!!

Also could I get pm's on the updates????

Oh... my ff got a new reader! Thank you for ur words... I will definitly inform abt my updates... :)