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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Sadhanamomo

Dhwani

Wow brilliant update
Shankar is well educated boy and he had PHD.goodmatch for Gauri's
But what's thus Naksh trying to buy him off, oof what was he thinking
😡
Bravo Shankar for standing up to him
But Gauri he broke off their engagement oh poor girl
She win him over using her charm and love just like Sati
Shankar needs her in his life
Please bring her back in his life
Update fast and quickly
I cannot wait
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Thank You Sadhana... try to update soon.. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
PART VII
The only one muhrut!

Ganga's life! - Sruthi is upset in her room..Naksh consoled her that nothing bad happens in their life because they are Dr. Naksh's daughters.

Mouli and Ganga came there and told that they are now moved on and has no problem in their life. Ganga said she forgot to tell Gauri about this change in their life which made all issues today. They apologized. Mr & Mrs Naksh satisfied with their words. But Mr & Mrs Mouli looked eachother as they understood they have to improve their acting skills.

Naksh ordered Mouli to search a suitable husband for Gauri as soon as possible and he will also try his level best. Mouli agreed. But both Mouli and Ganga worried because their sweet sister is also going to the same state where they are in.
...

Naksh's father witnessed Dadaji's pyari Gauri is in gloomy state. He know what is in her mind. He tried to change the mind of Naksh,but
failed.

Dadaji went to meet Swami without informing Naksh. For Swami, he is a respectable person.

So that he couldn't hide the truth of Shankar in front of him. Dadaji felt so happy, but shattered at the same time. Because he got back his own grandson, but he came to know about the loss of his dear daughter and the cruel face of his own son who tried to kill a child. But reason?? Is it for the inherit property of his daughter?? Or any other reason?? It does not revealed. So Dadaji also felt to hide the truth from everyone. But he should unite Gauri and Shankar.

Dadaji said Naksh to visit Varanasi with Sruthi for for getting a suitable man for Gauri. Naksh obeyed.

Now all obstacles are away from Naksh's home. Naksh and wife went to Varanasi, Mouli went to Mumbai for business purpose. Gauri, Ganga, Dadi and Dadaji in the home.

Another monday. Dadaji encouraged Gauri to go to the temple. She surprised. "But what will do if papa come to know about it". He smiled at the question of his granddaughters' anxiety. "Nothing will happen."

Ganga helped Gauri to wear Saree this time. She wished atleast her sister should get a loving husband.


Temple... All are happening again like before. The temple filled with prayers and girls of her age who came there traditionally.

Gauri smiled...
Ohmm... Namahh... Shivayaa..

The room of idol is closed like before. The ringing of bell can

hear.. Gauri closed her eyes like all devotees.She listend the

chants..bells...once more.. Opening sound of door... Har Har

Mahadev... She opened her eyes and saw herShankar.. "Har Har Mahadev" She chanted with other girls. While others looking at Shiva's idol,she looked at Shankar only as usual.He is walking towards them with 'karpoora' flame! He is in the white dhoti and white shawlthat hide the majority of his 'upanayanam' thread and also have rudraksh. He is giving prasadam.

"My Shankar" her heart said and she smiled looking at his walk. "I will show you who I am and throw the mask on your face". She said it in her mind and kept her smile.

This time she did'pranam' to flame like others and stretched her hand for prasadam.

Shankar reached at Gauri. She looked at himwith a smile. An eye lock betweenromantic, passionate, but playful eyes and serious looking, but

divine eyes."Give your hand"

"Don't you see? I already did it" But Shankar noticed it now only. He tried to hide his "pale" face. Gauri smiled with a new serious look. He gave her prasadam.She controlled her smile and turned to the lord and acted as she is praying with closed eyes. Hewalked to his room. On the way he looked back to know if she is following him like before. But he didn't see her. He came in front of the room. Again looked back. She is nowhere. He closed the door.


Gauri... She is praying now?? No.. That intelligent girl followed him, but hide behind the pillars whenever he looked back. She had an exact timing.


Shankar opened the door. Again his eyes searched for Gauri who never caught. He went out of the temple. Gauri did it through another door.


Now the temple festival is going on. He smiled by hearing the bhajans of sweet kids in loudspeaker.


A young man, Nandu came there.
"Shankar ji. Could you please sing a bhajan for us. We are conducting this program for ordinary people to sing. No probelm if it is film song, poem, whatever it is. But now only Kids are singing. Others are not participating. If you sings, then elders will join us."

Shankar smiled "How cutely they are singing! None can sing like them."

"But only a few kids there, after them what will do! So please jii"

"Okay I will come. But you should not ignore kids if elders comes."

"Agreed jii".


'Om Jai Jagadish Hare

Swami Jaya Jagadish Hare

Bhakta janon ke sankat

Bhakta janon ke sankat Kshan me door kar

Om Jai Jagadish Hare'



Shankar and Nandu listened that song with a smile.

"Hey. Some young girl is singing now. Your problem is solved."

"Yes Shankar ji. But you should sing for us please". Shankar smiled.


They walked by listening that sweet voice.

'Jo dhyave phal paave

Dhukh vinashe man ka

Swami dhukh vinashe man ka

Sukha sampati Ghar aave

Sukha sampati Ghar aave

Kashht mite tan ka

Om Jai Jagadish Hare


Mata pita tum mere

Sharan padun mai kis ki

Swami sharan padum mai kis ki

Tum bina aur na doojaa

Tum bina aur na doojaa

Asha karun mai kis ki

Om Jai Jagadish Hare


Tum pooran Paramatma

Tum Antaryaami

Swami Tum Antaryaami

Para brahma Parameshwara

Para brahma Parameshwara

Tum sab ke Swami

Om Jai Jagadish Hare'


Shankar entered the field where the stage stood and witnessed the owner of the voice and surprised... Gauri!


'Tum karuna ke saagar

Tum palan karta

Swami Tum palan karta

Mai sevak tum swaami

Mai sevak tum swaami

Kripa karo bhartaa

Om Jai Jagadish Hare


Tum ho ek agochar

Sab ke prana pati

Swami sab ke prana pati

Kis vidhi miloon dayamaya

Kisi vidhi miloon dayamaya

Tum ko mai kumati

Om Jai Jagadish Hare


Deena bandhu dukh hartaa

Tum rakshak mere...'
Gauri saw Shankar and his smile by listening her music. So she stopped the song unexpectedly. They looked eachother. Nandu noticed their expression and he moved his head playfully. Shankar turned to him and saw his funny head movement. Shankar with his mischevious eyes looked at him and tried to revive his serious look. Nandu stopped his funny movement and started to listen her song again.


'Deena bandhu dukh hartaa

Tum rakshak mere

Swami tum rakshak mere

Apane hast uthao

Apane hast uthao

Dwar khada mai tere

Om Jai Jagadish Hare


(Gauri looked at Shankar and continued her singing. Meanwhile Shankar tried to deviate his concentration to some other place. So he look at there and there, but in vain. Nandu noticed it all. But acted like listening only song)

Vishaya vikar mithao

Paap haro deva

Swami paap haro deva

Shraddha bhakti badhao

Shraddha bhakti badhao

Santan ki seva

Om Jai Jagadish Hare


Tan man dhan sab kuch hai tera

Swami sab kuch hai tera

Tera tujh ko arpan

Tera tujh ko arpan

Kya laage mera

Om Jai Jagadish Hare


(Gauri is still looking Shankar. He turned completely without facing the stage)


Om Jai Jagadish Hare

Swami Jai Jagadish Hare

Bhakta janon ke sankat

Bhakta janon ke sankat

Kshan me door kare

Om Jai Jagadish Hare.'


Shankar smiled in that same posture. He again came back to his serious when Swamiji came there and noticed it.

"Namaste Papa. Nandu, I will sing later. now has some job."

He went. Gauri smiled as her attempts are facing victory.


Edited by DhwaniNair - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Excellent update dhwani
Especially loved the stealing looks of Shankar
Oh boy he's so stubborn not ready to accept that he too love her
I'm proud of gauri! Aakhir mogambo KO khush kar hi dia warna chehre pe smile to kabhi aati hi nahi thi
Awww nandu is sooo cute! Whatta an entry at perfect timing
My heart is saying nandu will also help gauri to unite her with Shankar
Loved the update
Eagerly waiting for the next one
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: DhwaniNair

PART VII
The only one muhrut!
Really the one moment and all will change😳Gauri would be GauriShankar😆😆😆

Ganga's life! - Sruthi is upset in her room..Naksh consoled her that nothing bad happens in their life because they are Dr. Naksh's daughters.

Mouli and Ganga came there and told that they are now moved on and has no problem in their life. Ganga said she forgot to tell Gauri about this change in their life which made all issues today. They apologized. Mr & Mrs Naksh satisfied with their words. But Mr & Mrs Mouli looked eachother as they understood they have to improve their acting skills.

Naksh ordered Mouli to search a suitable husband for Gauri as soon as possible and he will also try his level best. Mouli agreed. But both Mouli and Ganga worried because their sweet sister is also going to the same state where they are in.
...
Seeing Naksh's confidence and Mouli's helplessness...I pray no one ever has them as his/her father or brother.😡Yes am angry over Chandra too.


Naksh's father witnessed Dadaji's pyari Gauri is in gloomy state. He know what is in her mind. He tried to change the mind of Naksh,but
failed.

Dadaji went to meet Swami without informing Naksh. For Swami, he is a respectable person.

So that he couldn't hide the truth of Shankar in front of him. Dadaji felt so happy, but shattered at the same time. Because he got back his own grandson, but he came to know about the loss of his dear daughter and the cruel face of his own son who tried to kill a child. But reason?? Is it for the inherit property of his daughter?? Or any other reason?? It does not revealed. So Dadaji also felt to hide the truth from everyone. But he should unite Gauri and Shankar.
SO Dadaji knows the truth that he has a grandson...😆great.
Dadaji said Naksh to visit Varanasi with Sruthi for for getting a suitable man for Gauri. Naksh obeyed.
Wow very obedient son is Dr. Naksh Patel.
Now all obstacles are away from Naksh's home. Naksh and wife went to Varanasi, Mouli went to Mumbai for business purpose. Gauri, Ganga, Dadi and Dadaji in the home.
SO the feild is clear...Gauri scoops some sixers Girl.😛
Another monday. Dadaji encouraged Gauri to go to the temple. She surprised. "But what will do if papa come to know about it". He smiled at the question of his granddaughters' anxiety. "Nothing will happen."

Ganga helped Gauri to wear Saree this time. She wished atleast her sister should get a loving husband.
Dhwani if each time Gauri needs assistance with her saree then I am wondering what would happen after her marriage? WHo would help her then??😉

Temple... All are happening again like before. The temple filled with prayers and girls of her age who came there traditionally.

Gauri smiled...
Aww...My Honey glazed nutty chocolate mousse.😳

Ohmm... Namahh... Shivayaa..

The room of idol is closed like before. The ringing of bell can

hear.. Gauri closed her eyes like all devotees.She listend the

chants..bells...once more.. Opening sound of door... Har Har

Mahadev... She opened her eyes and saw herShankar.. "Har Har Mahadev" She chanted with other girls. While others looking at Shiva's idol,she looked at Shankar only as usual.He is walking towards them with 'karpoora' flame! He is in the white dhoti and white shawlthat hide the majority of his 'upanayanam' thread and also have rudraksh. He is giving prasadam.
So there he is...😆
"My Shankar" her heart said and she smiled looking at his walk. "I will show you who I am and throw the mask on your face". She said it in her mind and kept her smile.
She is such a tease😛Careful Shankar...you have no idea what you have in your future.😳
This time she did'pranam' to flame like others and stretched her hand for prasadam.

Shankar reached at Gauri. She looked at himwith a smile. An eye lock betweenromantic, passionate, but playful eyes and serious looking, but

divine eyes."Give your hand"
Playful v/s Serious yet both are divine, passionate and romantic..when Have I last witnessed it? Wait...after Sati met Jata last time in forest...Shiva is actually very simple and serene...and she's simple but playful...😳aww Dhwani I have no words to thank you for this dose of Divinity.🤗
That was for the eyelock and for the scene Superb or Apratim.👏

"Don't you see? I already did it" But Shankar noticed it now only. He tried to hide his "pale" face. Gauri smiled with a new serious look. He gave her prasadam.She controlled her smile and turned to the lord and acted as she is praying with closed eyes. Hewalked to his room. On the way he looked back to know if she is following him like before. But he didn't see her. He came in front of the room. Again looked back. She is nowhere. He closed the door.

hahahha...😆He should have known already.😉And the way he each time turned to find her and she hid...aww they are playing Hide and Seek.😛
Gauri... She is praying now?? No.. That intelligent girl followed him, but hide behind the pillars whenever he looked back. She had an exact timing.


Shankar opened the door. Again his eyes searched for Gauri who never caught. He went out of the temple. Gauri did it through another door.
Aww These too I adore them tooo much.🤗

Now the temple festival is going on. He smiled by hearing the bhajans of sweet kids in loudspeaker.


A young man, Nandu came there.
"Shankar ji. Could you please sing a bhajan for us. We are conducting this program for ordinary people to sing. No probelm if it is film song, poem, whatever it is. But now only Kids are singing. Others are not participating. If you sings, then elders will join us."

Shankar smiled "How cutely they are singing! None can sing like them."

"But only a few kids there, after them what will do! So please jii"

"Okay I will come. But you should not ignore kids if elders comes."

"Agreed jii".


'Om Jai Jagadish Hare

Swami Jaya Jagadish Hare

Bhakta janon ke sankat

Bhakta janon ke sankat Kshan me door kar

Om Jai Jagadish Hare'



Shankar and Nandu listened that song with a smile.

"Hey. Some young girl is singing now. Your problem is solved."

"Yes Shankar ji. But you should sing for us please". Shankar smiled.


They walked by listening that sweet voice.

'Jo dhyave phal paave

Dhukh vinashe man ka

Swami dhukh vinashe man ka

Sukha sampati Ghar aave

Sukha sampati Ghar aave

Kashht mite tan ka

Om Jai Jagadish Hare


Mata pita tum mere

Sharan padun mai kis ki

Swami sharan padum mai kis ki

Tum bina aur na doojaa

Tum bina aur na doojaa

Asha karun mai kis ki

Om Jai Jagadish Hare


Tum pooran Paramatma

Tum Antaryaami

Swami Tum Antaryaami

Para brahma Parameshwara

Para brahma Parameshwara

Tum sab ke Swami

Om Jai Jagadish Hare'


Shankar entered the field where the stage stood and witnessed the owner of the voice and surprised... Gauri!


'Tum karuna ke saagar

Tum palan karta

Swami Tum palan karta

Mai sevak tum swaami

Mai sevak tum swaami

Kripa karo bhartaa

Om Jai Jagadish Hare


Tum ho ek agochar

Sab ke prana pati

Swami sab ke prana pati

Kis vidhi miloon dayamaya

Kisi vidhi miloon dayamaya

Tum ko mai kumati

Om Jai Jagadish Hare


Deena bandhu dukh hartaa

Tum rakshak mere...'
Gauri saw Shankar and his smile by listening her music. So she stopped the song unexpectedly. They looked eachother. Nandu noticed their expression and he moved his head playfully. Shankar turned to him and saw his funny head movement. Shankar with his mischevious eyes looked at him and tried to revive his serious look. Nandu stopped his funny movement and started to listen her song again.


'Deena bandhu dukh hartaa

Tum rakshak mere

Swami tum rakshak mere

Apane hast uthao

Apane hast uthao

Dwar khada mai tere

Om Jai Jagadish Hare


(Gauri looked at Shankar and continued her singing. Meanwhile Shankar tried to deviate his concentration to some other place. So he look at there and there, but in vain. Nandu noticed it all. But acted like listening only song)

Vishaya vikar mithao

Paap haro deva

Swami paap haro deva

Shraddha bhakti badhao

Shraddha bhakti badhao

Santan ki seva

Om Jai Jagadish Hare


Tan man dhan sab kuch hai tera

Swami sab kuch hai tera

Tera tujh ko arpan

Tera tujh ko arpan

Kya laage mera

Om Jai Jagadish Hare


(Gauri is still looking Shankar. He turned completely without facing the stage)


Om Jai Jagadish Hare

Swami Jai Jagadish Hare

Bhakta janon ke sankat

Bhakta janon ke sankat

Kshan me door kare

Om Jai Jagadish Hare.'


Shankar smiled in that same posture. He again came back to his serious when Swamiji came there and noticed it.

"Namaste Papa. Nandu, I will sing later. now has some job."

He went. Gauri smiled as her attempts are facing victory.

So penance of Gauri finally paid off as Shankar smiled and liked her bhajan...about bhajan no coment...but she has sung...then it must be very good.😳😳And at the end of the day...the day is well spent.👏
GauriShankar are awesome and I like Nandu too...waiting for next updates.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Oops forget to give the result of the today's match...so the day was very bright and sunny. Gauri looks irresisstable and invincible...Shankar was clearly into her. So Shankar was clean bowled by Gauri...and she scored century.
Edited by mmroyalkaterick - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Priyanshi_

Excellent update dhwani
Especially loved the stealing looks of Shankar
Oh boy he's so stubborn not ready to accept that he too love her
I'm proud of gauri! Aakhir mogambo KO khush kar hi dia warna chehre pe smile to kabhi aati hi nahi thi
Awww nandu is sooo cute! Whatta an entry at perfect timing
My heart is saying nandu will also help gauri to unite her with Shankar
Loved the update
Eagerly waiting for the next one



Thank you Priyu... :) Happy to hear u liked my Nandu. at first I written him like a "Junior artist" but when I was reaching the end I feel, he should be here more. So that I given him a face and then a Name :)

but priyu..." Aakhir mogambo KO khush kar
hi dia warna chehre pe smile to kabhi aati hi nahi
thi" could u pls translate??

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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: DhwaniNair



Thank you Priyu... :) Happy to hear u liked my Nandu. at first I written him like a "Junior artist" but when I was reaching the end I feel, he should be here more. So that I given him a face and then a Name :)

but priyu..." Aakhir mogambo KO khush kar
hi dia warna chehre pe smile to kabhi aati hi nahi
thi" could u pls translate??


Mogambo is the villain from Mr. India Dhwnai...a film starred by Anil Kapoor and Sridevi...
and the line means...at last Mogambo means Shankar was appeased by Gauri's singing. Othersie he won't smile...😉😆
P.S. just for information...Mogambo is a famous restaurant at Park St. Kolakata..😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Thank you Rimi... u also liked Nandu... Me too while writing... thts y he got a face and name.

About saree...dont knw wht is future!. wait n see ;)

Bhajan is my favourite... so included it... :)
Hop u read that part by singing it. ;)

I wrote the scenes in betw the song while singing. :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Just read the lines Dhwani...👏wonderful. You used the apt words in apt place...now I realize why Sankar was smiling so brightly.😛So Gauri...note down..you have to sing this song before dawn daily to your Swami...one question wouldn't she mind if Shanakr's everyone's Pati and Swami and Prabhu??
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: mmroyalkaterick

<font color="#003366">Just read the lines Dhwani...👏wonderful. You used the apt words in apt place...now I realize why Sankar was smiling so brightly.😛So Gauri...note down..you have to sing this song before dawn daily to your Swami...one question wouldn't she mind if Shanakr's everyone's Pati and Swami and Prabhu??</font>



He is saviour of all... She meant it only :)
Edited by DhwaniNair - 10 years ago

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