Gaurishankaram... Mohit Raina Mouni Roy FF - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Sadhanamomo

Wish you all the very best

relax



😊 Thank you [:-)]
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Best of luck for your exam Dhwani.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mmroyalkaterick

<font color="#0033CC">Swagatam😃</font>



omg! malayalam.. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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When will this story be updated?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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When are you updating
I am updating on Monday
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96

PART IX

In Naksh's home, Mouli questioned Dadaji for helping the meeting of Shankar and Gauri. What happens if Naksh know about it!"Before his arrival, I will conduct the marriage of Shankar and our Gauri."

"I will not allow it Dadaji."

"Why don't you allow this marriage? Do you wish my sister too lead an unhappy married life like me?!"

Mouli's eyes became teary by Ganga's words. He stopped the conversation and went out.

Dadaji consoled Gauri. "You will get your Shankar. Mouli can't inform this to Naksh now and he can't prevent me soo much".

Suddenly she asked " Dadaji, do you know the working time of Shankar's martial training centre?"

Dadaji and Ganga laughed together.




Next day Gauri visited the training centre. When she saw the master Shankar, She is very much excited. Shankar saw her while training others. He ignored her. After sometimes, he came to her and asked her to get out of the centre. Gauri smiled and said: "You should admit girl students too in this centre because nowadays they need more physical strength than man". She left with smile.

Shankar stood like a statue. "Bhabhi's idea is nice, right Bhaiyya".

'Stood like Statue' Shankar gave his reply to Nandu. "Yes."

Nandu smiled in his mischievious style as usual.

Shankar who is like come out of his unconsciousness asked him: "What did you say...? Bhabhi?? Who is your bhabhi??"

Nandu run away by saying "You accepeted it for a while, Poor bhaiyya'.




Edited by DhwaniNair - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow fabalous update
Mouli coming with brilliant idea yes they should have a secret meeting it would be romantic and fun😳
Why should Naksh come to know about them this should be kept a secret from him. 😆
And Shankar don't look away please why are you asking her to leave she needs your full attention😃
Now this is just Embarrassed
Next day Gauri visited the training centre. When she saw the master Shankar, She is very much excited. Shankar saw her while training others. He ignored her. After sometimes, he came to her and asked her to get out of the centre. Gauri smiled and said: "You should admit girl students too in this centre because nowadays they need more physical strength than man". She left with smile.
BTW did she turn around look at him and smileEmbarrassed
Your sis is on the right track 😆
Shankar needs to start hearing her and listen to his heart and give her one on one training just the two of them
I'm just imagining this happening😳


Please continue very soon and include some meetings between them



Edited by Sadhanamomo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you Meena... wish for ur detailed comments :)

Sadhana...Thank you so much yaar... I wished to complete my ff without lagging. but my ff becoming descriptive now... I dnt knw when I can complete it :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART X

Shankar's home. Its time for reading after his work in martial centre. He used to read books in all genre.

Dadaji came there to meet Shankar with a request to marry Gauri. It's not fair for Shankar to marry a girl without the consent of parents. So he politely rejected it.

"I'm leaving to the temple, Patel ji.

On the way to temple, Shankar met Gauri.
"How is it Shankar ji?" She said it wearing a new dress with a cute childish face.

Shankar walked without utter any word, Gauri followed him as usual.

"I came here to show it to you. This new one brought by Jiju yesteday. He gave me it even after all that problems. Men are soo good, am i right Shankar ji?"

"You danced well yesterday".

Gauri stunned and stopped.
"What did you say?? Oh my god! Thank you Shankar ji"

He turned and smiled. Gauri amazed again!

"Gauri ji, Could please do a favour to me?"

"What question is this! You can ask me anything except not following you"

Shankar said: "My friend is a dancer and doing dance programs around India. You know, my friend is going to perform near Kedarnath temple the day after tomorrow. But the problem is the partner with whom my friend practiced to perform has feeling some physical problems. It is very difficult to find another girl and teaching the steps in one day. But I think you are an extraordinary dancer and can pick up the steps in one day."

"Are you going to ask me to perform in that program with your friend? Ohh my Shankar ji.. I will do it. I love dance. You have confidence in me. Thats enough for me for self-confidence. Thank you Shankar ji for this opportunity"

"But you should inform your father and please avoid my name in this case. I want to happen it. It is my friend's dream. If you gets permission from your father, please go to my friend's home tomorrow morning which is the only home behind my home"

"Papa love my performances on stage. So don't worry. I will go there and fulfill your friend's dream"

Shankar thanked and said bye. But Gauri followed and asked "Can I ask one thing?" Shankar stopped and looked at her by expecting the question. "You told me some of the qualities that you wish for your future wife. Anything left? I think you wish to marry a dancer, am I right?"

Shankar turned and walked again. But this time he answered. "You are right. I am happy if my wife know dance and music. I wish she should be so traditional in personality as well as in dressing too". Gauri stucked by this and looked at her dress. Shankar just smiled and moved. But Gauri stood their with a cute sad face.

Next morning she woke up early, wore saree with the help of Ganga, went to temple, mesmerized by the priest, the ignoring lover Shankar. When he came to near for giving prasadam she said very happily and loudly: "I like to wear traditional dresses too". Shankar looked her and moved with his serious look. Gauri gave a funny smile to those devotees who is looking at her.

Gauri decided to go to his friend's home without disturbing Shankar. She went and saw a house behind Shankar's home. She felt so happy because it is really a musical atmosphere. She listened Gayathri manthra in a sweet female voice from the home.

"Om bhur bhuvaH svaH,

tat savitur varenyaM,

bhargo devasya dhImahi,

dhIyo yo naH prachodayAt"

Gauri closed her eyes by listening that soothing and divine melody. But it stopped soon. She opened her eyes and thought.

"Oh Shankar's friend is married. When will this Shankar wish for a marriage! He has too only one Muhruth for it. Hum."

Gauri rang the calling bell. The door is opened.

A beautiful young woman with a beautiful smile.
"Gauri? Please come inside."
Gauri entered home and asked her about her song and husband.

She smiled and said. "Yes, I was singing. And I am not married"

Gauri surprised then who is she. This is Shankar's friend's home na!
"Gauri, I am Nandini, Shankar ji's friend"
Gauri shocked.

"We were schoolmates. I think you know my brother Nandu. Shankar ji and his father take care of us after the death of our parents".
Gauri tried to smile.
"Okay Gauri, please wait for one minute. I will give you tea. Then we can start our practice."

Gauri nodded her head hopelessly and sadly. She started to examine Nandini.

Traditional!
Polite!
Dancer!
Singer!

She felt to cried aloud... But poor Gauri stood by making fake smile.

She recollected Shankar's words about his "my friend"!

So many thoughts rotated around her mind.

'Oh! That means he talked to me because of this special friend! Friend! Only friend! Not like me. I am his soulmate. If Nandu is his brother, then Nandini a sister. Nandu wish for our marriage. That means Nandini and Shankar ji are just friends. Am I correct God?? Or Shankar Ji and Nandini waiting for a day to reveal that they are in love to others!!! No No No.. Shankar ji loves me. Only me.. Oh my God!! What I will do.'
Gauri picked up the step soon and well in between her dillemma because she is doing for this Shankar ji. She hopes for good...
Edited by DhwaniNair - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
What a fabulous update and the twist is too good
Starting with Gauri following her Shankar asking him how the dress was uff why can I hear her voice
Then something unexpected happens Shankar ☺️compliments her saying she danced well
She is stunned😲naturally
Shankar neels a favour will she dance with his friend
She agrees to
Gauri goes to the friends house and is greeted by his lady friend she is shocked😲
Shankar never mentioned her Gauri is also feeling a Lil jealous all kinds of emotions run through her mind
She imagines that NandinI is going to say that she loves Shankar
I am imaging a possisive Sati Gauri stating Shankar is mine he only loves me
I think he needs to confess now
Please don't do this to me 😒
I want to read Shankar reaction to her dance
Please continue very soon

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