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niharika111

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Posted: 11 years ago

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you write beautifully! count me in for the ride! :)

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Sweety012345

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Posted: 11 years ago

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love the concept

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inamajar

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Posted: 11 years ago

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That was a beautiful start.

Loved Meera, such a vibrant kid!!

You have written it so well, could feel the vibes of emotions especially the tension between Arnav & Khushi. Looking forward to the secrets of the 10 yrs gone by and NK.

Thanks Choti for the link.

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Shameela

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Just about to start on ur story... Will comment on it soon... Best of luck with ur writing and story...I'm sure a great author is in the making here.

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meera30

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I'm here i'm here :):)

And grinning proudly like a parent.

I wish you so so much love MB! I hope this story and everything you write meets with nothing but the adoration it inspires in me for you and your story telling!

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Mirabell

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: meera30
I'm here i'm here :):)

And grinning proudly like a parent.

I wish you so so much love MB! I hope this story and everything you write meets with nothing but the adoration it inspires in me for you and your story telling!

Thank you .. you are kind.. and your kindness spills over into every word you have written.. in your characters, plot, tone.. everything. Your writing is my muse..

Ab Kya Bolun?

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nazca

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Bookmarking.
Your dedication to Meera made me to bookmark.

Some authors dedicated thier story when it is completed. And some authors in the beginning like you . I feel so happy to see Meera's writing inspires so many readers and producing excellent authors.

AWW, you reminded me , now I miss Swami, miss rasgolla, miss philter Kappi and I miss spamming in AWW thread, miss all the fellow spammers and I miss Meera's writing.

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canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Thanks to Choti for the recommendation.

Mirabel, I loved the first chapter.

The awkwardness of meeting someone after a gap of 10 years, particularly your ex or someone you deeply cared for, you have brought out the feelings superbly.

Now I am more than intrigued to know about their past. Were they just friends or was it more than that? What happened to her husband NK? I am assuming he is no more. The kid is indeed very cute. I always love when bubbly children especially girls are part of a story.

Looks like Khushi's MIL would play a major role in giving them opportunities to assess their feelings towards each other again.

Waiting to read more.

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I'm so excited to see you writing! I can't wait to read your story :-)

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Shameela

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Great story...I'm loving it...u've had me hooked from the point arnav knocked on the door and rang the bell...I can sense this is going to be a very different, unique and interesting story.. Can't wait to see what u do with it...waiting eagerly for more chapters. If u PM for stories pls add me to the list. Thanx.