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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Oh MB Iam so happy to see u writing a story - I have always loved ur comments and conversations in some threads
Excellent start
Iam sure this story is going to rock
Thx to choti for the link

Iam already in love with this Meera
Would wait to know the reason for the decade long separation
Paaati seems to be a very solid character in this story
So NK is no more -
Will wait for next Saturday
If u r planning to pm, then add me in ur pm list - if not, I can always keep track of this thread - so no issues
Thx
Priya

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

One more thing
Choti, awesome banner dear

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Thanks chotidesi for recommending this

I cannot wait to read more

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

That was a beautiful start with different concept...

Loved it

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khub

@khub

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Thank you Choti, for recommending this story. Very interesting indeed! Waiting for more..
BTW - I'm a great fan of 'A Word's Worth' too - I've enjoyed reading all of Meera's stories.. but I think this one is Meera's best work yet!

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rk2127

@rk2127

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

First off. Thanks choti for recommending this story.

Now about the first chapter. It was so well written. Each detail about the house, or the location, or about meera and her resemblance with her parents so beautifully described.

The chapter was a scene of awkwardness, of digging of well hidden secrets and feelings which had just changed there position in there confine. It was saying so many things of what possibly had happen. But at this point I just want the writer to tell me the story and me to read.

Read how these relation were, are and will be in future. Read how Meera Gupta Krishnan were and is with her parents and patti, and will be with ASR. What role Masiluv plays.

And what Arnav felt about a unit, a family which he never had.

And about Manorama which seems a lot different and understanding in this story, who was able to read Khushi's animated and lively self on her face expression and associate it with Arnav.

And about Khushi, of her sudden outburst and her comforting herself that 'it means nothing'.

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rith123

@rith123

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Wow.

I honestly don't know what else to say. It usually takes at least 3-4 chapters for me to get completely engrossed in a story. This took me 3 paragraphs. I don't know where the story is going, but I do know that it is going to be nothing short of phenomenal. Can't wait for more.

Thanks for the rec Choti :D

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WanieA

@WanieA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

beautifully written and a great start..please update soon..

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Hi,

This story appears to be interesting...👏

Will love to know how you take this story further...

Please pm me for future updates...😃

I will love to follow this one...😛

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

So here I am from a Choti sa recommendation and I am glad I checked it out. I have liked your comments on RB's stories and knew the story will be different. Glad to see the mature characters and the little girl is simply adorable. I love the image in the opening shot about whether to knock or turn around. Once the door is opened, there is no turning back so no wonder he had those thoughts in mind. So they were friends 10 years ago? Maybe more than that it seems from all feelings and recollections that each is having. He can read her like a book and she is not immune to his good look. Well I am glad Manorama dadi asked him to stay for lunch. Now she did not seem like a traditional MIL so maybe she will want to keep the lively look on her bahu a little longer even if it means having the friend around.

Btw, love that you dedicated this to Meera. She is very inspiring and one of a kind.