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Sisbamboo1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Thank you chotidesi for the recommendation!

If you hadn't said that this is your first story I would have been searching IF for anything else you may have written. This is a really good beginning. Nothing is too vague and nothing is too obvious. I like how you gave hints to their past. The flow of the story is smooth and it's very easy to read. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Do you have a PM list?

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KaaliBilli

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Posted: 10 years ago

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You had me at "How does one contend with intimate knowledge about a stranger?"

I loved the subtle perspective shift, the inner monologue and struggle of Khushi while the narration is primarily by Arnav. Its awesome how you have pulled it through.

And the story! Ah...Delicious angst, here I come.

- RB

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Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sisbamboo1
Thank you chotidesi for the recommendation!

If you hadn't said that this is your first story I would have been searching IF for anything else you may have written. This is a really good beginning. Nothing is too vague and nothing is too obvious. I like how you gave hints to their past. The flow of the story is smooth and it's very easy to read. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Do you have a PM list?

PM list? I am still figuring out how to do this.. I am sure I will have it figured out and squared in a couple of days? And will let you know? Thank you

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

This story was recommended by Choti

Very interesting

Cant wait to find out what happened between them

Please pm me when you update

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kavitha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

sounds great.i would love to read the story.

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Lovelyday

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Just wowww!!! Lovely start:) please add me in ur pm list

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sban

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Posted: 10 years ago

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this is super Mirabell.. would love to see where the story goes...

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Cherylann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

You are very brave to start a story where Khushi is(was) married to someone else😃

Great start ..you have got us curious to know details of Arnav- Khushi's past

Love the attention to detail and perfect punctuation in the chapter.It makes reading an absolute pleasure🤗

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Cherylann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Chotiji... thanks for guiding us here☺️🤗

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cocoamob

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Thanks Chotidesi for the recommendation! I really liked the first chapter - you write like a pro!

Fresh storyline to see Khushi married and has an 8 year old and seems to have been happily married to NK too.

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