Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I) - Page 91

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Posted: 10 years ago

Radhika,

As usual another awesome chapter with some remarkable revelations. Arnav is falling for Kushi's beauty, unique character and her practical thinking even in tough times 😉. I am simply in love with Kushi's character. No amount of misfortune can hinder her spirits. Finally how Garima inherited Tiwari property is revealed and it is quiet shocking to know that Tiwari was Garima's ex-husband. Is this scandal alone or something else prompted Sashi and Garima move to Lucknow leaving their only daughter at Delhi?

I like the baby steps Arnav is taking towards Kushi to make all the wrongs he and his family did to her to right. I am in awe with Kushi's will power to finish graduation after the evil Poonam Raizada funded scholarship withdrawal. I am really surprised to see Arnav remembering Kushi's birthday even after so many years. Akash birthday gift to Kushi is awesome. Payal's dad seem to be genuinely good at heart thinking to help Kushi.

Cruel Arnav, didn't even help Kushi to encash 1300 rupees which would have helped her to buy clothes / books / shoes or something. Will Arnav stalk and dig more after his conversation with Payal and help Kushi in anyway?

Edited by jduke - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting for morning 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aha!
An update at last.

Now we know why Tewari left his shop to Garima!
At least one secret has been revealed.
And the mystery of the envelope too was disclosed.
How this envelope managed to baffle your readers, R.

Aman is coming to Payal's place for dinner.
Interesting development.
Wonder whether Arnav will be there or not.
I'd love to see the dynamics between Payal and Aman.

Will now wait for the next installment.
How soon can we get it?😃
Edited by 1chilly - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

YB, practically every update you keep me glued to the screen and I read it without even blinking my eyes. Really I am scared to even blink as I think I might miss reading certain information. What is it in this story which holds the reader's interest so much.

I guess the answer to it lies in its story, which is not about fancy stinkingly rich arrogant people, or run away mills and boon kind of love story, but it deals with stories of people more like you and me. I can relate to almost every character in this story, and at sometime or the other in my life, I too possibly could have been in such awkward or difficult situations and I too might have struggled a bit to come out of it.

Coming to today's update, Arnav has had always this unique connection with Khushi in one way or the other.

He was her secret birthday Santa for four years and even after so many years, he still remembers her birthday. He observes her so closely and even remembers small things about her, actually sometimes it even feels a little bit creepy. What is this strange feeling he has towards her???

Looking back at the behaviour of New-ons students towards Khushi, its sad that apart from pity and feeling lowly about her, no one except Akash really could give her even a little bit of affection or friendship. Even at that young age, does class and standard become so important that they don't want to look at someone beyond that?

Khushi's present condition brings tears to my eyes. A girl who has not even gotten her eyebrows shaped, I cant imagine the condition she is in. Like her even I wonder, what if she had gone to a normal high school near her house or so where there would have been kids more like her, would her life have been better now? Maybe yes, maybe she would have completed her studies and found a decent job instead of being a drop out and running a mithai shop which is under so much debt.

Now what will Payal's dad do to Khushi? I guess Payal and her father were the ones left out to harm Khushi and that impending act will be fulfilled too, soon.

Ok now Tewari puzzle atleast got solved. Garima's first husband, interesting. Did they have kids???

. And as he left behind several hundreds of the athletes who were all sitting, sprawled outside the station as trains were not running. That memory of Khushi remained etched in his memory, as she sat there amidst the sea of humanity, hugging her backpack.

Every update you have to make me cry and this time too the above sentences did make me cry.

Atleast in this story, Arnav is not one of my favourite people.

Edited by canapoem - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aailaa...
Res😉

*****
Chapter 7
The first update of this New Years is full of fireworks.. not the usual kind but the more deliberate, full of potential kinds. This update chronicles the stages of Arnav-Khushi interactions, and give us a better insight into how Arnav perception of Khushi was during New-On days, then college and how his perception has shifted in all these years they did not meet to the current status.
He notices her physical appearance in a good way (almost) and he does notice her as a person but also as a girl. More so, he never uses a single depreciative word for her dressing sense.

Arnav, has so come out as his own person and not be dictated by the likes of his mom or Payal. Khushi had always noticed that he was much nicer when they met one on one... but he was different, meaner when with his group. He does not want to acknowledge the feelings that she arouses because of his elite upbringing. And, according to his group of New-Ons, Khushi was downmarket... so he finds the need to stay away from her.
Arnav, is still trapped in Bourgeoisie mentality...🤢 thanks to his mom. He does not want to acknowledge the emotions that he feels when he sees Khushi.

Lavanya was also a revelation. Not inviting Khushi for her Birthday party coz Khushi would be uncomfortable!?! Rule of friendship is to invite all friends, and let them decide what they want to do about it. To not invite Khushi for party, is very telling about Lavanya. I also remember reading they never met out of school. So, lav was never really a friend just a common activity buddy.
But, there is more, that is yet to be revealed. Lav and Khushi had a showdown of sorts.. waiting for that one.😃
Akash is a sweet person and I think he is scared to move out of his friendzone with Khushi. Or maybe its something else!!! 😛 But Khushi has no issues, touching, hugging Akash... but she is hesitant with Arnav... Thats whats calles unresolved chemistry!!! 😆

I kind of like Payal. She is a straight shooter... But has no chemistry with Arnav and they have decided to get married?? Other than similar status, do they understand anything about chemistry/biology????😉

Arnav, is 28 and he is ok getting married to someone without any physical attraction.. 😲thats little difficult to grasp... i feel something is missing. Maybe its not Akash we should be worried about but A... !! 😆

Waise, Arnav does not understand the value of money... coz he never had to think about it. For Khushi the 1300 mean a lot and here he was giving it to her after 7yrs. How crazy!! It would have been better if he had just left it at that... But then I also wonder about how safely he had kept it coz he found it and finally gave the check to her...

Did he mean it as a Birthday Gift???🤔

Khushi is a smart intelligent girl... does she not get what it really means?? He is least bothered about Khushi.. all Arnav cares is the uneasiness Khushi's proximity creates for him and he does not want to deal with it.

Now, at the RIPE age of 28, he is actually coming of age, which is long due!!!
Hope in dues time he will resolve all the mysteries of his brain and heart.

But mostly worried about Khushi...One more calamity is about to befall!!! Now that Payal will also become a part of Raizada's its her and her father's turn to hurt Khushi... Ehhh!!


I hope something good happens for Khushi... Let her get married to Akash and come to Bay Area... she will find atleast one good friend in me... pucca 😆

eagerly waiting for the next...
Edited by _Mini_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ME TOO RES YB..!
Finally I remembered to unres... SORRY😕

WOW YB.. awesome update what remained in my mind was the last line.."he wondered what new trouble could possibly be coming Khushi's way. And per usual, the degrees of separation between her troubles and his people being responsible for it continued. God, why?"
Looks like Arnav got a hint of Khushi's upcoming troubles..but I guess he is not in a position to help, no he will even be cautious to warn her...but though she may not have an idea of Payal's dad being behind the escalation of her troubles but she certainly knows of AnandRam's venture... But what is with Payal and Aman..why would she have toruble even being CIVIL with him..? Had something happened before Aman left..?
Aman has not contacted Arnav after coming to India..WHY..? Was he in touch with him while he was in UK..? If Payal has no clue about Khushi having to leave Alchemy because of Poonam Raizada...there is very little chance of Aman knowing it...infact for that matter anyone else other than Akash...so why is Aman avoiding Arnav..?
Akash is very thoughtful of Khushi and got her the present from his place of work...and Radika you are letting us still in dark making us all speculate about his heart ..?
Was expecting Baig Sir ...but I guess that would have stolen the time Arnav and Khushi had got ...so no complaints there..
Now we all can see Arnav has more than one reasons to be ashamed of his behavious..his leaving her along with the others outside the Railway Station was definitely something he should be ashamed of..
Whats still puzzling me is Poonam Raizada's absence and behaviour...is she trying indirectly to make Arnav involved into AR...or is there more ulterior motive..?
Can't wait for the next update already...

Edited by jyothim78 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update R!!!! Totally loved the update!!!
At last the tewari and sons mystery is revealed now it will be good if Arnav joins Khushi to save the sweet shop :-)

Akash is such a cutie and a good friend, hmm it will be interesting to see him getting married to opposite Chawla lol!!!!

So Aman is going to make his reentry into the story soon, can we please send Payal with him so that Arshi can be together 😃

I am happy that your pegeon situation is taken care of by your valiant man hehehe!!! Love the notes you put up too they are as good as the story.

Edited by anu1017 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Is it a bird? Is it a plane? Oh wait it is an update by one very lazy writer who never keeps up with promised timelines.

Just an update, the pigeons have been banished from the apartment. Among other factors that I had to take into account, a very curious eleven-month-old boy who poured some paint into the poor bird's nest within fifteen minutes of our discovery of it was one of them. Don't ask.

The next update I post will also be a present day chapter, I thought we will celebrate Happy New Year and usher in 2015 in my story too. Like any self-respecting desi soap, my story is also at least a few weeks behind asli duniya.

Someone had commented asking me,if Khushi's birthday is on December 19th, what about Arnav's since I had alluded to it in the prologue. You guys are such fantastic readers, it is crazy cool. Anyway, I checked my notes (yes, I am a compulsive notes taker and keep notes about everything.. and I still make timeline errors.. sorry about that) and it says that Arnav's birthday was on November 29. Sorry that we missed that. Maybe Payal got him something 😆


Edited by YellowBoots - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well I had thought that he was going to give her money a check since it was an envelope...but a 7 yr old one...I wonder why he kept it.this long
...they have so much things unsaid...and with the extent of things happening between them...to sit down to hash it out wouldn't be wise...
Now there is payals dad heading to destroy her livelihood...I admire payal for not wanting to get involved...
I am awaiting amans entry to see what has he in store for kushi...as all are behind her
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wait, wait.. Akash is in California? Dibs!

Also, that was clever, Radhika. Technically, it was money in that envelope after all, but he was gifting her a good memory and some of her lost dignity actually.
You know what, Arnav can have Khushi. Especially since I am getting to keep Akash now. I would take a pi charm chain too. But why did he gift Khushi that? Does he think she is irrational? 😛


Edited by asmanichatri - 10 years ago

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