Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I) - Page 93

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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting how both Arnav and Aakash's gift to Khushi were both part of her past. But a happier time, like a reminder to Khushi that things were not so bad at some point. Like someone commented, a bit like reinstating some of that lost dignity.
Arnav playing Khushi's secret birthday Santa fits with the way I understand his character. Of course, he was a class conscious teenager, he realises that himself, but he was never downright bad. I think he is that kind of lover, almost Nerudaesque in the 'I love you as certain dark things are to be loved, in secret between the shadows and the soul'. His affection for Khushi is both heroic and pedestrian at the same time. I understand this Arnav and relate to him. It is interesting the four gifts he got her. The photo-frame was obviously the most personal and by putting a picture that his sister clicked, he put a bit of him in it. Life of Pi was a good choice too. Khushi is Pi isn't it, the one who learns to share the boat with Richard Parker? Da Vinci Code was given to her after the Aman episode, by now he was giving her generic stuff. The pens were the worst! 😆

Khushi asks him a valid question, why now? If this whole thing left you this tortured, why not earlier? Now it is entirely possible that you are not telling us the entire story. I mean, what is to say that Arnav did not engineer the 'accidental' meeting at Tewari & Sons to begin with? I am very suspicious when you throw a bunch of information our way. Like the way you gave us a large chunk of the Tewari story to us in the latest instalment. 😛

But here is what I think, it is alright that Arnav did not try to reach Khushi all these years. He had to become the person that he is today to set things right with Khushi. I am sure Khushi will see that one of these days.

I am not able to point the exact thing you did in this story, but you have somehow made Arnav and Khushi a very viable endgame now. There is attraction and chemistry. I hope NK weighs in on this!

PS: Poonam Raizada is something.. even Payal agrees how brutal it is. I also liked that you humanised Samir Singh, he is not the one-note evil politician. Though he is probably going to mess with Khushi anyway.
Edited by motichoorladoo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
God somebody cut open that old wound, its probably infected and incorrectly sutured one. I am sure wound toilet is the only way.
*Pulling my hair off*

*Stomps out*
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very Interesting And Intriguing Update...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: CheshireBilli

Hehehehe.

I try not to become juvenile about 'res-ing' but I couldn't help myself.


Semanti...Semanti... Semanti...😆
Your DP says it all...🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was a beautiful update...
Past imperfect and future tense...
But present continuous...
Dhak Dhak...

Just like Arnav we too have our hearts in our mouth...
What will befall on Khushi...
Looks like the New-Onites are hell bent on making her life miserable by hook or by crook... Intentionally or otherwise just like the Raizadas...
What an egoist Arnav had been... But now will he change and what changes may occur and when???
You have portrayed things so realistically and down to earth without glossing over any sort of relation!
Loved the update Radhika...
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting update. Eagerly waiting for the next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
will Arnav stand up for Khushi this time?? waiting to read it..
loved the conversations...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice title and the way it shows in the story.
Waiting for more
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi dear finally u update.good one...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Poor khushi! I mean how new ons just ruined her life! Poor kid!! I hope khushi gets her due soon!!

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