Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#351

payal need to be spanked like seriously how can someone be this rude. bade sahab and all.

my poor khushi she has been subject to so much by these people and the environment. i hope this all helped her to become a better and stronger person.

oh my i am so curious to know what happened to mr.raizada.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

Oh what a different SS
I am thankful to my friend for suggesting this story
Would love to be a part of this journey
Will wait for the next update

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Finally. .. After a long time a long update. and what a cliffhanger. I think Arnav said something to khusi ... first Aman and then Anand Raizada. .Both related to Arnav.

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Asma

@asmanichatri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

Oh my! Now we need to find a man for Preeto as well. Not for a moment suggesting that a woman is incomplete without a man (or vice versa), but it is fun like that. At least in fiction (only in fiction). Please don't kill Raizada Sr, otherwise Poonam Raizada will cut Khushi into tiny tiny pieces and feed it to Arnav and Anjali, really rare.

Though your previous update did speak about a golf-playing-useless Sr Raizada as per Mrs P's assessment, so holding on to that hope! I think I would like to pronounce Arnav Singh Raizada as the queen of mixed messages. And that right there is why he seems so real 😆

I still can't grudge Payal, because she is funny and has sass. Also it is clear that Khushi is not particularly perturbed by Payal's snootiness and if anything admires her for her 'model-like' looks 😆

And I am with Khushi, about floppy hair boys -- never trust them!

You can't end an update like this and not tell us when to expect the next one. Come on!

PS: The American college system has nothing on the dynamics of Indian university dynamics. Damn!

PPS: Econ grads are always the worst in every part of the world. But then I am a lit student, so I do feel that way. Surprising that Khushi who is a Math major feels that way too.

Edited by asmanichatri - 11 years ago

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

did arnav's father die in front of khushi..??

or something else happened..??

nice update...

waaiting fo the next......

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

A teist at the end. very nice depiction of average college life

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#357

Hi Radhika 😃

Khushi is not centre of attention in the college , as she is lost in the sea of students . Arnav is the same , no friendship / enemy with khushi . Once we read his pov we will understand his animosity towards khushi . Khushi was admiring Arnav's new hair style , for once she was acting her age but the warning bells in her head alerted & she raised her guards around him . Did Payal get insecured that she came to khushi to show her place ? Payal is irritating at times . Akash was constantly in touch with khushi , he arranged khushi part time job in AR , did Arnav recommend or Akash used his power to help khushi . In fact we have to know Akash's pov too .

khushi is suffering from fever did she witness Anand Raizada's death , poor thing .

looking forward for Arnav's pov .

Well written👏

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

#358

Hi Radhika, I'm Ruchi :)

There are so many instances you wrote of that resound with me. Your story just has that amazing happening in front of you feel. You've portrayed that snobbishness and condescending attitude towards so called vernacs so well.

That pakode ki kadi bit is typical of the attitude that bitiya samajh legi. Just because she is from your own mohalla, she will adjust. I really like this Khushi. She's sensible, realistic, and just gets on with things. Like how she has no illusions of her own limitations.

Preeto is certainly quite adept at creating an image! She comes across as being a little duplicitous as well. Don't know if she can be a real 'friend' to Khushi. And she clearly is of the firm belief ki ek ladka aur ek ladki kabhi dost nahin ho sakte!

Arnav still remains an enigma. I'm looking forward to viewing the happenings of the past from his perspective. Khushi being witness to his father's collapse doesn't bode well at all. Although the way he's actively seeking her out in the present, and your allusion to an incident in the past does make me think he didn't react well.

May the fierce Mr Vinay Sharma forever be in Arnav's vicinity ;)

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mayapvj

@mayapvj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#359

Your description is so crisp and lucid that I can feel the scene unfolding in front of me...u have left us in cliffhanger...what happened to anand raizada????

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anu1017

@anu1017

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Posted: 11 years ago

#360

Awesome update as usual Radhika(now that we know ure name 😊 )

Hmm did the senior Raizada just collapse? Is the reason Arshi are in a rift? too many questions, please update soon!!!!!