Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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StripePurple

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Posted: 10 years ago

#371

First up, that ending deserves an Arnavji-level "What the...!" Poor, poor Khushi. Fate is so terribly cruel to innocents sometimes.

About the rest of it, I'll be back soon. Still processing this twist.

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rdforfun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#372

such a realistic writing. Cant believe its ur first story. You are blessed with fantastic writing skills.

Do keep writing and let me read ur stories 😉

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SS88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#373

Oh my God, I hope Arnav's dad isn't dead. That's terrible, poor Khushi. If Arnav blamed her for Aman's suicide attempt, I shudder to think of what he would say to her now. That is , if Mr Raizada is indeed dead. What is the bone of contention between Arnav and Akash exactly? I get it that they're not close, but that's the case with many cousins. Maybe I'm overthinking this, but there is something there. And Payal, why would she randomly seek out Khushi? Preeto is right, what was that vague chat about?

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Anamika100

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Posted: 10 years ago

#374

I am so enjoying this story. Preeto asked a very pertinent question...what is the equation between Arnav and Khushi...it's definitely not simple aversion...she can not stop thinking about him in the past and in present he can not forget her and let it go...hmmm...fascinating.

What a cliffhanger of an ending ...waiting eagerly for more.

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Jyothi Rockzy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#375

That was a great update...

But I have a small issue... you seem to cutoff describing or mentioning about few things..

Like the treat Aman invited Khushi to after their last exam...I thought you would mention it later..but it never happened..and now..like what happened after Mr.Anand Raizada collapsed..? Did Khushi got blammed by Arnav being the inauspecious one..? or was it just her fear of getting blammed once again..? Hope her job, her hard work did not get wasted just because of that..

I so loved Akash's helpful nature..but Khushi is soo grounded and responsible always.. No surprise she never felt things could get any friendlier between Arnav and her or for that matter Payal or even Lavanya...

By the way..what was that act of Payal and Arnav..? what did they wanted to do..was it just having some fun at the expense of Khushi..? or was it a bet by Payal that she could still make Khushi uncomfortable with her presence and talk...but Khushi took it really well and answered her rather than just snobbing or avoiding them.. Preeto is soo funny and silly..quite contrary to Khushi but probably more safer to be friends with..

I wonder how is Arnav ever be able to patch up the gaps...or bridge the differances...not just in status..but also in everything else..

by the way..what is the reason for the differences between Arnav and Akash..? Has it anything to do with Khushi along with the family reasons...or is it that they are just two completely different individuals who never got bonded closely..

But I think Anjali and Akash are closer...are they not..?

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seema13

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Posted: 10 years ago

#376

Fantastic update...i m loving the way u r giving the description of all things...though Khushi was not much bright student but she iwas a hard working girl...loved her friendship with Preeto...here m liking Akash also he is such a nice guy ...did Anand singh Rayzada passed away ?...nd Arnav blamed Khushi for this ...so many questions plz update soon.

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amus5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#377

when you are striving hard to stand on your two feet and inspite of all the odds you take up a job and related to the job you come face to face with a guy whom you have never met before but whom you know is the father of your estranged college-mate at a place you are not expected to be (though for a reason) and that guy just falls down ... how shocking is that - can be felt in the delirious state of Khushi's -It just goes on to show how deeply Aman's incident and its following repurcussions and New-Ons has made an impact on her...

thanx for the update...pls continue soon

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pinkrose1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#378

nice update...

you stopped in its peak...

what happens to him?

is this make arnav to treat her bad?

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pmpm1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#379

Read all the chapters in a go. Fabulous! This story is different. I would love to continue reading it. I don't know if you send pms when you update, but if you do, can you please send me one when you update next.

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swtsam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#380

read all the parts in one go. ...loved it...very interesting. ..n looking forward to read more. ...plzzz do pm me ur updates. ..will love to read more. ...waiting. ..