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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#801

You know what amazes me every time I read something you write - the absolute ownership that blazes through your descriptions. It feels like you know the Nilgiris - every little leaf of that forest floor that Arnav let his Enduro rest as he checked her for injuries. I love the way you talk about tea and tea growers and their problems. (Orange pekoe - where can I have some of that?)

You may write beautiful romance but it is your setting and your landscape is the crowning glory of your stories. And I love that!

Of course, I cannot wait to see where this goes. And yes, I am very patient. No questions about Anjali yet. I know she will turn up when she needs to :)

PS: The conversation with Sumitra and Arnav was very North & South in essence. And now I cannot get Richard Armitage out of my mind (I am in love with that man. I am. Unabashedly.). Please have Arnav grin and flirt more (ha! given what's coming up!) so that it can be Barun in my head again :D

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amus5

@amus5

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#802

okkk...I feel guilty of an accident that happened in my childhood and I still hold myself responsible even today. I wish to return to that place where it all happened and try to overcome my guilt but all of a sudden I come face to face with the a chip of that accident how would I feel...

TRAUMATIC...that would have been Khushi's case too...I'm sure she would want to avoid Arnav at all cost...

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😊

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ipkndlover75

@ipkndlover75

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#803

Wow!!! Am so happy with ur new story... This ones just as riveting and catchy as Dawn Noon and dusk!!!

Caught up till chapter 2...and just loved the story uptil now...the mystery surrounding Anjalis disappearance..

the beautiful setting of the story...and ur equally beautiful description of the mountains, Conoor...the western ghats...just created the scenes before my eyes...simply amazing...

Just loved this mountain biker Arnav ...and the way they met...amazing chemistry crackling between them...

Can't wait to c what happens next...

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#804

Sorry to repeat, but I love your affinity with nature and the beautiful way you describe nature and people enjoying nature.

Wow what an introduction to Arnav Singh Raizada. You really revealed a strong man whose shoulders carry quite a burden and even I was tempted to soothe away his worry lines 😆. Best of all, he did not have a mustache and full lips...😆 As proved by the description below. Thank you from bottom of my heart!!!!!

"They travelled from the thin slash of his mouth, up his sharp Romanesque nose, to meet a piercing pair of eyes that were deeper and darker than the forest around."

Lovely conversation between him and his grandmother.

Given who they both are, will Khushi ever call him? Is she right that he would not want to have anything to do with her?...I have a sinking feeling that she may be right.

Edited by Anamika100 - 10 years ago

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dsbj

@dsbj

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#805

wow!! what a brilliant chapter.. cant wait for next. hope it's not arnav who observed her in train .. now khushi know he is a raizada .wonder will she call him? guess not but hope they will meet up again soon .. waiting for next already.

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hararnav

@hararnav

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#806

wonderful..

so that person in the train is not Arnav...

Sumitra Raizada is one strong woman... she understood what and how Arnav is going through in business.

Arnav is the little guy tht khushi saw cycling..

thanks for taking us through Arnavs personal trial(though he might not like it as he wanted to go alone:-))

Glad that Khushi didn't go into panic attack with the stranger fear... loved how he gave her space and made sure she took his help.

After knowing the name she must have erased the number:-((

wonder how anji's family reacted after the incident

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samarablog

@samarablog

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Posted: 10 years ago

#807

I love this arnav, and really really do hope that he doesn't changw as story takes its due course...am amazed...its sinply too good...

And even after all that sweet banter, the last lines took my breathe away. ...poor girl...heart goes out to her...

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#808

Great update! I'm trying to imagine Arnav with curls! Anyways it's obvious that Arnav is the man of the family now. His relationship with his grandmother is very good. She is very experienced.

Arnavs and khushis first interaction! Loved it! Khushi isn't going to call him I doubt.