~ArHi FF~#1~The Hands of Time~ - Page 82

I am so so sorry for being so late to respond back. I had been eagerly waiting for you to start this story but now when you started, I couldn't write back to you.

You know I always wondered at your level of maturity while writing DND, which was your first venture. And thought how will you top that. But I am glad you proved me so wrong.

You have taken your writing skills to all together a different notch. The story starts with a great tragedy. The one that still shows its aftermath even after so many years. The scene where you describe Khushi using a rubber band to snap out of her thoughts was very intense. I wonder how can you ever learn to live with a loss so profound. We have a friend, , a brother, parents, grandparents, everyone have lived a life since then but still they are just standing there...

But I do regret the fact that I have to wait for the next update to come and its not a novel that I could have gotten and finished it till it lasted...But patience is a virtue!

Thank you for your writing! You have no idea what these mean to me!

Thanks for the pm.

Happy writing!

Loved how Arshi met n der convo awsum.:D

Sandhya,

Welcome back...so marvelous to see another masterpiece in the making! Excited as usual to read Hands of Time...and what can I say about this Arnav and Khushi...unbelievable...set against a very familiar part of the world for me - Coonoor and the Nilgiris! You have as usual painted such a lush and colorful landscape of the place with your words...truly, and I have to say this to you, despite having read so many A andK stories on the forum there are few that manage to ignite the power of visualization as yours do! Arnav and Khushi such conflicted souls as usual, and yet so alike at some level...nice characterization of Shashi and Garima. So was Anjali a Raizada? And did she suddenly get kidnapped when she and Khushi were around 8? Is that why in the last couple of lines Khushi seems devastated and certain that Arnav will never want to know her? Waiting, waiting...

Best,

They met in the 2nd chapter itself.. N they seem to go good until the name..

Now m dying to know would she contact him back..

Plz update pretty soon..

Love u

Wow! That was quick! :D They already has sparks flying everywhere! Well, that's the magic that ArHi has.

Sandhya, your language is so beautiful ! Sweet. The way you describe every scene--- feels like I am right there!

This FF will surely be in my top 3 list! You know, the kind of stories that we will always keep very close to our heart :-)

Waiting for the next update!

Thanks for the pm! :-)