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Greyasr

@Greyasr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#791

Wow

I mean a joy to read evry word..

Just waiting to see what Khushi does.. My guess is she won't call but will run into him at a coffee shop or a book store

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Pdrover

@Pdrover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#792

Awesome update
Your description of sunrise, surrounding and bike trail & ride felt so real, need to re-start biking

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savvz

@savvz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#793

ohh.. thats awesome..

some major history down there in Nilgiris... waiting for it to unfold... exciting days are back... ;-)

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BarunFan1212

@BarunFan1212

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Posted: 10 years ago

#794

Another amazing chapter Sandhya and thanks for the PM

At last Khushi and Arnav met as destined and they were attracted!

The way you have described the Nilgiris tea plantation made it so real I feel like making a trip to India to visit coonoor. Always your description about places are so detail. I really enjoy reading it.

About Anjali, reveal about her story on your own time. With my experience with DND I know you will never break out the mystery as easily as we expect. It will be on your own time and it will be appropriate at that time. Don't worry we know you will keep us engaged and entertained until the end and I do not want it to be soon.

Only sad point is we have to wait for a week to get the next update 😭.

But your chapters are worth the wait and will wait again for chapter 3 to see if Khushi will make that call or will they meet again by destiny and what's Arnav's reaction when he find our who she is.

All the best until that.

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#795

Am here dear Sandhya ...

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Arshi2503

@Arshi2503

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Posted: 10 years ago

#796

Really fantastic.Actually you have given us the visual treatment of the
Nilgiris.the bonding between grandma and grandson is awesome which
Shows how important are the family values . I think she is the major support
For Arnav.
Introduction scene is fabulous. Reading again and again
Thanks for pm

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#797

Wow... What a chapter. Sandhya, you describe so beautifully, I felt like I was cycling in that beautiful mountain. Superb. That was some meeting. Both were flirting with each other. Oh gosh, I am waiting to see what happens next.

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lilium-rose

@lilium-rose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#798

See, I told you. You have a knack of painting a picture with your words. And that is a breathtaking landscape of the Nilgiris you have painted.

An unruly, ungroomed, Arnav who also is a tea admirer, and a mountain-biker ... hmm interesting.

Loved the update. What had me ruminating was the goose bumps inducing conclusion.
"Every molecule inside her body froze, chilled her to the bones and left her shivering like a leaf hanging by the thinnest thread in a hurricane. For Arnav Raizada wouldn't want to have anything to do with her once he knew who she was."

And I am thinking this - does Arnav actually hold her accountable for his family's heartrending loss or did an occurrence after Anjali's disappearance make Khushi believe that Arnav would never forgive her for putting his family through such intense pain.

So a few sleepless nights and an impatient wait until the next update. But hey, no pressure. Just update soon...ish...😉

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#799

Sandhya...

The jadugar..

U've hooked me to this story once again..

I grinned like a fool when saw ur pm..😳😳😳

Oh..

So..

That was not Arnav who noticed Khushi in the train n she also noticed him..

Who's he??

Let's see..

Arhi's first meeting..

How can it be a simple situatoin.😊

He wanna help her but she's simply afraid of him..

Then he somehow convinces her ..

Then he helps her step by step..

Both notices about each other's looks..even flirt a little bit..

Attraction is growing by leaps n bounds..

She thinks what to do if he asks for her cell number...

hmmm.Khushi..😳

He doesn't asks but gives his own contact number..

What a gentleman !!!

And..

All of a sudden..

Everything is crashed to ground..

Arnav Singh Raizada..

The elder brother of Her Highness..

😭

Ahh..

The past..the hidden past..

And u've no intention to unfold it anywhere in near future 😔

Is there any other option rather than waiting..😕

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meera06

@meera06

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Posted: 10 years ago

#800

What an update Sandhya..

I am craving for some tea now !!

Arnav is here and I loved the way you described his looks..I loved the GM and GS conversation..Gm knows Arnav so well ..its good to know that she knows the ups and downs of tea business and provided the much needed encouragement to Arnav..Looks like Arnav is the pillar of the Raizada family..where is his mother?BTW I am already in love with the grandma -grandson duo..

Finally Arnav and Khushi meet and what a way to meet..I loved the way Arnav was flirting with Khushi and in fact Khushi responded to him in her own way..seemed like she was coming out of her shell ..I also liked Arnav's idea of giving Khushi the option to call him but sadly that wont be happening now since Khushi knows who he is..

Also wanted to say you do have a way to describe the places..made me fall in love with the place just by your description though I am a person who is not actually fond of hill stations..

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