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janu

@Janu75

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#781

Arnav is the one who keeps everyone united in the family what about the the brother.

Arnav in a vagabond look ...even nani is not complying with his rugged look ...

Khushi has come to settle scores with the demons of her past and here she comes across the raizada ...the man who is related to her past and who shared his number expecting her to take the call on them moving forward in her present...

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Natalia

@Natalia

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#782

Amazingly intriguing!!

An intriguing story is set to unfold with backdrop of beautiful Nilgiri range, with a serial killer (so it seems) lurking in the corner, and heady emotional past marring the landscape like the ominous clouds!!

Really amazingly written... Can't wait to read the next chapter!

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#783

You know to some, it may seem like the pace is very slow but I am loving it as I think you are doing a great job at setting the scene. Now we know that Arnav grew up taking all the responsibilities of the family (maybe the parents were too deeply affected by Anjali's disappearance to carry on and he probably grew up overnight), he loves Nilgiris (as you clearly do too because you described it in such a way that I so want to go there now) but the bad memories make him run away from it as soon as he is settled, he became a loner (?) as he craves solitude. I love that you spent such a huge part of his chapter on him. I love him already, mountain bike rider, stubble and curls and all . . . I love his love for his grandma as well. He is an action man and did not waste time to get to the point with our injured heroine - he likes her and wants to know more. I love love how he realized her fear of strangers and gave her the flexibility of taking whatever attraction they have forward. He is very confident too.

Then it all came crashing down on her when he said his name and of course she is too scared to call him now and he will think she is not interested. Oh crap Sandhiya, I want to read more now to see what our Kushi will do next. Will she run away and hide or face her fears as she decided when she left her job made the trip to the place of her nightmares?

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#784

Amazing update!!! It got me hook already and I can't wait to read more!!!

I loved the conversation with Arnav n his grandma and of course it has to be ASR to take everything on his shoulder cause let's face it, we loved to read of a strong man who have control and take responsibility for his family and loved one. It's kinda make him more hawt and worth drooling. Lol, idk if anyone else share the same thought with me :)

But again, I do wish for him to spare time to relax and have time for himself too.

Now coming to arshi part, I just knew it was khushi and not some guy biking and was just waiting for arshi to come face to face.

I loved the way they met and I kinda feel khushi want to face the danger and it has to relate to anjali, I may be wrong.

ASR did surprise me when he show his interest in khushi and give her his number. I expect him to be aloof because of his family and it's history but luckily he is interesting to know khushi. But what's gonna happen when he really know who she is? And what's his opinion abt the Rao? And mostly khushi?

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ipk1970

@ipk1970

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#785

This is a very gripping story. It will be very hard waiting for updates.
You described the scenery, the emotions and the happenings extremely beautifully.

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#786

wow what a beautiful update...absolutely loved it...the first well not really the first meeting was freaking awesome... your a very talented writer...continue soon...

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lOVENI

@lOVENI

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#787

Beautiful chapter...just too good!!Beautiful chapter...just too good!!

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Shereen_J

@Shereen_J

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#788

Waw, loved the update.

Abducting of Anjali, still unnerves Khushi. Her rudeness,guarding herself is all understandable.

Arnav, what can one say, no words for him. :P Their intimacy grew. So anxious now. What will she do now ?

Edited by shereenjain - 10 years ago

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avchowdhury

@avchowdhury

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#789

awesome just loved the uppdate

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thechaigirl

@thechaigirl

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#790

Ohhhooo...that is quite some punch you packed in there. In reading about the Nilgiris, the tea plantations and the beautiful mountain ride I was completely immersed...the past, present and future holding no ground to its beauty. Perfect setting for two strangers to meet, interact, attract and may be fall in love...but alas the punch came with the past !

Wonderfully written Sandhya. If the past wasnt there these two would have been like any other set of strangers who when they meet do not know how they would mean to one another...but then may be it is the past which will give a love story to remember. Great love stories often arent easy to live through...

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