A HIDDEN KINDNESS. A SanDhir Dark FF [Ch.16 on pg21] - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

PART.7


(Since the past 30 mins...Randhir kept stealing glances at her, as he knew that staring, sorry gawking at her would definitely bring trouble. He took a look at the love-birds, Kaustuki clinched to YoYo, and had turned pale white. He shifted his eyes towards her, there she sat, with utmost confidence, compose and bored. Yes, she definitely bored.)


R-(in mind) Who is she??


[Flashback]

W- Randhir...Rany...
(A women of thirtyish entered her 15 yr old son's room...)

R'm- Mera baccha aaj ese mood me kyu hai??

R- Mom...you know what?? Har ladki ek jesi hoti hai...melodramatic, hyper, emotionally weak...except for you...(he bit his tongue)


*A 15 yr old Randhir complained to his mom, after the incident which took place at school, when one of his female classmate, by mistake spilled orange juice on his crisp white shirt after seeing a cockroach*


R- Sare ladkiya ek jese hi hoti hai...no body can be there for Randhir Singh Shekhawat...( he said proudly, while his mom slightly hit the back of his head)


R'm- Achha??? Don't say like that...koi ek ladki hai bahar uss duniya me who is made JUST for you...( his mom assured him)


R- As if...


R'm- Acha? Ok, do this thing...tum ek list banao...jisme you will mention FEW imp qualities you want in her.


(Renuka stressed on the word FEW, as she knew that her son was capable of writing a thesis on the qualities which he desired...)


*Randhir lost his mother at the age of 17, since then he had kept that list closer to his heart than ANYTHING, and after that he had lived with his Maternal Aunt*


[Flashback ended]


P- Hello...kaha khoya hua hai??( Parth whispered finding Randhir in such a state)

R- han...kuch nahi bas kuch soch raha tha...


*Yes, he was DEFINELTY thinking of something. Any boy/girl at the age of 15 would have made a stupid, lousy, unimaginable list, but Randhir was different. He was quite mentally mature as per his age..*

R-(In mind) Not melodramatic. CHECK!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
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Hey!Dear
Lovely n awesome update😳
lovely,nicely written👏
love it to the core❤️
Rd dreamgirl list😳
Interesting vry interesting😉
keep it up
update soon
eagerly waiting
Thx 4 pm🤗


Edited by Param_love - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
It was nyc

Rd dreamgirl desired list
N he's finding sanyu perfect for him

First quality checked

Wtng for next

Do update soon

Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
randhir toh majnu ban gaya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Waooo rd is in love not confirm but he is falling for her but what about sanyu ???????? Complicated
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

PART.8

R- Bye guys!!

*It was 11 at night and Randhir had just dropped Parth to his home and Aryan to his hostel. As YoYo-Kautuski went on a lonnnggg drive :P *

*Randhir had just turned on the radio station and the song which was being played suited his situation PERFECTLY*

Kyun raaton ko main ab chain se so na sakoon
O ...
Kyun aata nahi mujhe din mein bhi chain-o-sukoon
Kyun aisa hota hai main khud se hi baatein karoon
O ...
Kyun tu jo bole koi sune main hi sunu
Dil ye bekarar kyun hai
Ispe dhun sawaar kyun hai
Kyu hai ye khumaar kyun hia Tu Bataa..."

R-Tera intezar kyun hai
Kyu hai ye khumar kyun hai tu bataa
Tu Bataa aa aa ...
Tu Bataa aa aa ...

*Randhir was going with the flow and was trying to match the words*

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[Suddenly Randhir's car came to a halt. He saw a guy misbehaving with a girl. He got down the car and went towards them. The girl was trying hard to get out of his grip on her wrist]

Gi- HEEEPPPLLL!!!!!!! Please chodo mujhe...plea...

R- Chodo use...

Gu- Tu kon hai be?? Teri behen lagti hai kya?

R- Vo lage ya na lage, chod use...

Gu- Nahi chodunga...kya karlega?

R- Puch mat...kara toh tu maafi ke layak nahi rahega...[Randhir said giving his signature smirk]

Gu- Abe saale...tu mera kuch begadega...? Haha...tu??

[Randhir closed up to them and punched the guy on his face, leading to the guy's nose starting to bleed and the guy fell backwards. The girl got out of his grip and hid behind Randhir.]

Gi- Thank you...thank you sooo muc...

[Before she could complete her sentence, Randhir held her hand and pulled her from his behind.]

Gi- Ye...ye kya kar rahe ho??

R- Main tum jese logo ko ache tarah se janta hu...(Saying so he smirked)

Gi- Mat...matlab??

[Randhir brought her left hand from behind which held a knife. He took and knife and threw it far away]

Gi-Main...main nahi janti vo kaha se aaya...

[Randhir pushed the girl towards the guy who now stood on his feet.]

R- Chup chap niklo yaha se...varna police ko bulane me ek second bhi nahi lagaunga...aur khabar daar yaha dobara dekhai deye toh...

[The duo practically ran for their lives after seeing the fire which oozed from Randhir's eyes...]

NEXT DAY

*Randhir picked Parth and drove towards the collage*

P- What!!!!!! Really?? But...tujhe kaise pata chala ki vo ek plan tha?

[Parth asked curiously, as Randhir had jusr narrated the incident to yesterday night.]

R- Ek baat bata...agar koi ladki problem me ho, toh I am really sure ki uska saman properly ek tree ke paas nahi rakha hoga...

*FLASHBACK*

[As Randhir was approaching them, he saw the girl's belongings lying near the tree...ARRANGED!!]

R-(In mind) What?? Oh...toh ye vo Jodi hai jo logo ko lutti hai...abb dekho...man kya karta hu...

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

Edited by spark23 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Awesome n amazing update Dear
lovely, nicely n beautifully written
love it to the core
Beautifully you've described the scenario
Update ASAP
thx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
It was amzng yr
Rd toh bhut intelligent nikala
He handled dem so smartly
Luvly update perfectly portrayed

Wtng for next
Do update soon

Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Nice part par sanyu nai thi rd is so smart hope ki wo sanyu ka plan bhi samajh jaye...thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Waiting for sandhir moments!!!
And update was awsm 👏

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