A HIDDEN KINDNESS. A SanDhir Dark FF [Ch.16 on pg21] - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Awesome update.. 👍🏼
Edited by Chandu_rockzz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Mind blowing yaar...just loved it till core
Do update soon...n thnxx for pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
It was awsme yr
Totally luved it

Wtng for next update soon
Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: MDKRM

WHT THE Hell itna tiny sa prt yeh ti had hai pehli bar kisi ff me itna looong prt padha hai 🤣
It was superb early waiting for nxt prt
Nd thnxx fr pm


Sooryyy...😭😭😭
But...promise next part will be a long 1...
Thnx...and take care!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Param_love

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Well the update was small...But moi love it to the core❤️
Lovely,lovely,lovely,lovely,lovely update dear😳😳
lovely,nicely n beautiifully written👏👍🏼
Sanyu Blush!!!😳
thx 4 pm
Update ASAP
Eagerly waiting



Thank youuu!!!!!!!!!! (Bada wala...literally) 😉😉😉😉😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

PART. 6

(Whisling, Randhir greeted his friends outside the hall with a bright smile showcasing his 32 teeth)

A- Are waah!! Rambo...tut oh aaj ladkiyo ki tarah glow kar raha hai...'

[And everyone had a hearty laugh, but it wasn't any of Randhir's concern. He had seen her again, met her again]

*It had been a week since their first meet, and he just couldn't get his mind off her. He had visited the coffee shop, 12 times last week, just to get a glance of her or better catch her name*

K- (Waving her hand in front of him) HELLLOOO!!!!!!!! Earth to Randhir...Earth to Randhir...'

R- Hann?' he asked innocently

(And this resulted in his cheeks being pulled by Kaustuki )

Y- Aree...movie ka time hogaya hai..chale...'

[And so, all of them rushed into the hall...]

*Sanyukta was at the entrance of the hall*

S- Seat no. J 14'

*While on the other hand...*

G- Tickets please...

K- J9

P-J10

A-J11

Y-J12

R-J13

*The seats were arranged in such a manner that 1-13 were together, 14-23 and so on...*

R- J13...13...ahh mil gaya...hey guys...the seats are here...

*All of them took to their seats, except Parth and YoYo who exchanged their seats, so that the love birds could set together. So, while Randhir's was the last...Sanyukta's as the first.*

Seat arrangment-[ J9,J10,J11,J12,J13...J14]😉😉

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(The movie began...a guard were escorting a couple to their seats, flashing his torch left-right...Randhir suddenly caught a glimpse of her who he had been dreaming day and night about)

*Sanyukta suddenly felt a flash of light of her face...*

S- Excuse me...kya aap apna torch durr karenege...?'

G- Sorry'

(The guard chipped an apology and proceeded. Sanyukta's main intention for coming for this movie was to eavesdrop on them, but in vain...as that guy...Randhir was continuously staring..no...gawking at her) 😳

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Thank you!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Awersome i think randhir is in love with sanyu love at first sight
But yaar itne chote updt kyu karte ho plzzz looong wala do na 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Superb rd to sanyu ke pyar main pagal ho gAya hai lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
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Hey! Dear
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely update dear
lovely, nicely n beautifully written
love it to the core
Very well you've described the scenario
Randhir fallen in love with Sanyu
1 week...12 time visited CS 2 see her glimpse...aww
In theatre he sees her...
update ASAP
Eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm

Edited by Param_love - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
It was nyc yr
Rd full deewana ho gy h
Blushing n all
Ek week me twelve times coffee shop gya to just get a glimpse of sanyu

This is getting intrstng wtng for next
Do update soon

Keep smiling 😊

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