||Vapour|| TS [16+] Last part: V A P O U R Uploaded! - Page 14

Originally posted by: DamselinDistres

I'll imagine Randhir, then read it again B)

Originally posted by: basket_101

Namaste Sexy Annie! 😆

Bonjour, ma belle!

Thank god you didn't actually torture us even more! Water is too boring. Vapour was needed.

😉

Haww... You meant to say that my 2nd installment was not good?! *gasping* *turning away from you*

😆😛

Okay firstly.

I need to take a break.

Need to breathe.

*Breathe In. Out. In. Out.*

Nope not working. Still holding my breath.

That. was. HOT.

🤣 🤣 Gee, expected reaction!! Aww... thankoo..😳😳

*Arrey rey dhak dhak karne laga*

Oh mahn!!! I love Jim Carrey!!!! *squealing like a kid* Gosh!!! Hahahaha... He is so brilliant in The Mask!!! 🤣 🤣 No one else could do The Mask better than him!!! 🤣 And damn! You used one of his gifs!! That is sooo freaking awesome!!! 🤣

Honestly

I just came from uni. Grabbed some coffee. And opened your PM.

I was so excited to read it.

And then once I read it, I couldn't stop blushing. ☺️

Aww... *pulling at your cheeks* Sho cute! XP :*

Sach mein flattery nahi hai!

This was the best part.

Hands down. But I'm sure you know I would say that 😉🤣

Ahahahahahaha... Gee, thankooo, Hinal babe!! I really love reading your comments! 🤣 You never fail to make me smile!! I read this comment in the next morning. I could only 'LIKE' it, because I didn't have time to reply. I could swear on anything I own that I have read this comment of yours every single day, when I couldn't find time to sit and reply. 😆

Me too bholi bhaali, I promise 😆

Chal chal... Bholi bhaali and you?! Ahahahahaha... Joke maara! 🤣 Phir toh tu poora ka poora TS itta sharma ke padh rahi hogi na, ki tu apni family ko bhi kuch daer ke liye tamatar jaise lag rahi thhi! 🤣 Ooohhh, what a sight! Behold! A Tomato Red Hinal! 🤗

Itti bhi bholi bhaali nahi hain tu.. Yeh toh mujhe pata hain...

Thank god she wasn't killed for being this seductive and hot ;)

Heeheehee... 🤣 I know... I loved steering you guys off the track for a little bit! 😉

Aah, it was beautiful.

Thank you! 🤗

And I was imagining Vidarth from the beginning, so I was glad to read that it was them 😉

Hehehhe... I am glad you like it! First of all, I really didn't want to mention any names, but then thought.. why not? But then, while reading I came across people who were rooting for Sandhir too, so not wanting to disappoint them, I just thought of not mentioning any names all throughout, except for once, and that too in the last part. I don't mind them imagining their favourite couple in this fiction, so they are free to do that. Mentioning those names just came naturally to me, coz in my mind I was imagining Parth and Vidushi as the pawns of my seductive game of fiction. 😉😆

The fact that the TS doesn't have much dialogue yet it makes such an impact is commendable!

👏 Honestly in love with your writing skills!

Ooohhh... Thank you for those lovely words, love! I really, really appreciate it, Hinal! 🤗 Because this was in a language of dance, you didn't need words to express what they felt for each other, by adding dialogues. Their conversations were surely very clear by their actions. As, Actions speak Louder then Words. But in some places like the guy admitting the way her lips tasted and then them pointing out each other's impatience was one thing I didn't want to miss out on. Silence is Strong. But the right choice of words make it Stronger. << Yeah, I just made that up! 😆 Yup, that's me, the Phoenix Baba talking! 🤣

I was on the verge of drooling! 😆

You did such an amazing job with the descriptions, as I've been saying from the first installment :)

Yeah, and I thank you even once again for always managing to make me smile.. Loads of love! 🤗

Vidushi's character was very playful in this, but I also see her as an honest girl in this TS.

I'm more in love with her character than of Sanyu's, but let's not even go there.

🤣 Gee, I am glad I could make your love for Vidushi stronger and deeper, if I did at all.. 😆 Hah! Thank you, buddy!

Parth. Vidushi. DAMN

Hot hot hot hot

☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

*no comments*🤣

That is how you know I am so in love with the part that I can't even form comprehensible sentences to tell you how I feel 🤣

You've said enough, mi lady!! 😎 But I really would love to hear more! 😳 Ufff... I made you speechless?! Oh my gosh!!! That's an achievement for me then!! Thank you thank you.. *bowing down to an applauding audience*

But from her feeling him, to her crawling towards him, to how he held her arms, to him biting her earlobe

You were making me crazyyy ☺️

The build up was great as well!

Issshhh... now reminded me of the whole build up, almost step by step, making me look away shyly!!!!!

Loved how slowly you took things. It was beautifully exciting! (what a combination 😆)

Oh, I was actually worried if I'd bore you guys by stretching this to 3 parts... Actually, even making it a 2 part was a difficult thought, because there were so many repercussions to think about. Maybe you guys wouldn't like the 2nd part, then what's the use to stretching it to 3rd part. But somehow putting the whole thing all at once would really break the flow of magic I wanted to make you all feel as they felt it themselves. And when I got such an awesome response from all of you, I just couldn't help but extend it to 3 parts and end the 2nd part somewhere none of your would expect me to end.. (or maybe some would! XP) Anywho... That torture I inflicted on you did get me some results meaning that you kept asking for more! XD And I needed time to write it all with the proper flow of emotions and physical attraction.

I'm gonna keep reading this one over and over ;)

Gee, Thank you again!! I have never had anyone read my fictions more than once, so I am tearily happy that I found someone who wants to do it over and over again.. 😳😳

Thank you Annie for the pm :D

This was definitely one of the most exciting (*wink wink nudge nudge 😉) stories I've read!

Certainly worth the read!

Oyyyiii... Now you are embarrassing me, Hinal!! *laughing nervously* Ah.. *scratching my neck nervously* Thanks anyway... *looking up shyly*

LOVED it :D

<3

🤪

Tc,

Love, Hinal 🤗

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

I think I've tortured you guys enough. Especially moi bestie Ashu.. 🤗 Gosh!! I was just joking when I said there is no other installment to my TS. I mean, after reading your reviews on my 2nd installment, I felt that I should finish it off right there. Because all of you guys were already thinking that it's a dream, I thought let's make their thoughts a reality and just leave it at WATER.

Gee, I am so sorry, Ashu, Hinal and the rest of you guys for torturing you all! *hangs head low*

I am just gonna go now.. Well. I tortured you with late review. We are even!! I love ya girl!! 🤗

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Dedicated to :Ashu and Chandu Baby!!! 🤗 You the girls!!! 🤗 Aww...I love ya too!!

Now lemme react to the Vapour. It's already getting hot in here 😳

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# V A P O U R (*rubs hands and smirks evilly)

He couldn't take it anymore. But before he could do anything again, he felt her sliding herself down, all the while making sure to rub her butt against him, till she sat on her heels. 😳 Such torture...I love that girl here. He looked down, only to see nothing but the brown wooden stage beneath his feet. Haila! She fooled him. Poor boi!😆

Khwaab hoon, Main toh makhmali..

Where'd she--?

Palkon mein le jaa mujhe,

Maine diya mauka tujhe, Ajnabee..

Before he could let himself complete the thought, he felt something close his eyes. Her hand. They were brushing against his eyelids, while her other hand's finger traced a long line from the side of his head, outlining his ear, then his nape, to his shoulder. His hand came up to cup her head behind his shoulder, as she twisted and stepped out in front. He pulled her closer to kiss her, but she dodged it and went down again. He followed and bent down a bit and cupped her neck, while she looked up at him with those whiskey brown eyes.😳 This was delicios;y graphic!

Hosh mein.. Aaye na abhi..

Pulling her up, he felt her resist the speed and slow her ascend, by placing her hands on his shin, one by one, then his knees, before going up and clutching his thighs, one after the other, then on his pelvis, his stomach, her torso, his shoulders. All the while pulling and biting her bottom lip and then, taunting him with her tongue darting out to wet her lips. His eyes found hers. He blinked at the intensity they shone, while she gazed at him.

Key word is intensity. Beautiful. could imagine this perfectly.

She was all that she showed him.

She was all that she hid from him.

She was all that was right in front of him. < I adore these 3 lines in red

Ik dooje mein hi kahi khoyi rahein,

Teri Meri Zindagi..

He pulled her to him and hugged her to himself with all his might. He didn't care whatever the world said.

She was his. 😳 These words do funny things to me😳

She hugged him back, a small smile playing on her lips. It was threatening to break into a big grin, but she still had some teasing left to do. Hehe!!! I'm all for more torture!!!Sticking out her elbows and splaying her fingers wide at the expanse of his back, she lifted the front of her hands, letting the junction of her palm and wrist rest at his shoulder blades. She pulled herself closer to him still, proceeding to lift and wind her leg around his thigh. And then she moved. From side to side. Again nailed the visual part. This was hot! Like surface of the sun hot!

Khamoshiyaan, Dhadkano ki sunaa jaa..

Jaane, kya hona hain kal..

Parth felt her moving and followed her movement. If he remembered it correctly, then it felt like Tango. Her hands left him, and he felt her bend back, arching her back to a perfect 'C', with her arms high above her head. He held onto her waist, as she straightened her other leg between his bent legs. 😆 Tango?😳

She felt herself in mid air, as the tips of her fingers touched the stage, a sense of safety swirling in her, as she felt his arms tightening around her waist, while bending forward with her.

Aa zaraa, qareeb se,

Jo pal milein naseeb se,

She clenched her stomach, when his tongue licked her navel. His mouth was hot on her now cool skin. 😳😳😳Feeling herself pulled back, she bent her leg and felt the stage under her foot. Her arms drew back and came to rest on his head, sliding down to cup the sides of his face. Her hands jerked a bit, when his nose brushed right beneath her bosom, and later again when his mouth planted another sizzling kiss right where her heart lay. 😳 I stopped here and read the Para 3 times.

He saw a small smile playing on her face. He chuckled and kissed her neck, followed by her cheek. He felt her other leg unwind from his thigh.

Aaja!..

He saw her twirl away from him.

She stopped twirling when she felt a high platform, that reached up to the bottom of her shoulder blades, right behind her and spread her arms wide and set them on the edge of it, lifting her eyes to see Parth walking to her with his infamous swagger, like a predator. She felt something pooling at the bottom of her stomach. So hot!😳 So hot indeed!!!!

He started with caressing her arms, from her shoulders to the tips of her fingers, before intertwining them with his, while pressing his body into hers, and caging her between his legs. 😳 This did funny things to me too!

She turned her face and felt his nose brushing the side of her face, before digging into her cheek, as his body pressed into hers. She had wanted to move, but stopped on feeling him pressing into her thighs. asdfkgktmgk!! So hot!!

• He smirked when she squirmed under his hold. Taking her earlobe into his mouth, he sucked on it, just like she had before. A whimper escaped her throat, as she tried to control herself. 😳 He's returning the torture!!Then he froze.

Make love to me..😳

Pulling away, he stared at her.

Eyes wide, his embers blazing now. Her back left the solace of the platform, as he pulled away, with her arms held behind her back. Her knees bent on their own, as he lowered them to the ground. asdfghjkl!! I'm burning!!😳😳

She found herself right underneath his penetrating gaze. His hands still twined with hers. She felt her arms being pulled out from behind her slowly and then, rising, as he lifted his own. Her skin tingled like a million needles were pricking her, as his hands freed her from his grasp and proceeded to caress their way down to the lace on the side of her bosom. Her breathing hitched. Her eyes snapped to his, to find him watching her. She almost wept at the concern and passion they held. Poor girl! She smiled in reassurance. Her hand came down to caress his face, but he took it, placed a sweet kiss on her palm and placed it back where it was. Above her head. 😳

Let me..

Dipping his head down, she felt his tongue licking a line on her skin, from the hollow of her throat right down to the valley between. She could feel herself getting more moist as she watched him watch her, while he did all those things to her. Oh god! She wanted to hold onto something. Anything. Even a bedsheet would do. She just wanted to clutch and crumple it, because of the intensity of her emotions and her senses going berserk. She arched her back, feeling his abs against her soft flesh. She wanted to touch him. And do things to him. She tried to touch him again, but this time his hand refused to let go of both her hands from his grasp. A groan escaped from deep down her throat, when one of his hands reached beneath her and brush the lace of her bra.😳

She rolled away from him, making him follow her movements in shock and concern. Did he do something wrong? He sat up. And watched her with a frown. She was smirking, as she straightened to stand and brought all her velvety raven tresses to one side. An eyebrow rose, when his eyes registered her fingers playing with the straps of her bra on her shoulders, before pulling them down slowly. The hellcat is baaack!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆

There she was biting her lip again! He wanted to just ravish her mouth, but he stayed put watching her hands going to her back. His eyes dropped and widened at the sight.😃😃

Confidence. That was what made her shimmy out of that 5 inch skirt, right in front of him. That was still a piece of cake. But now. She was feeling Bolder. Her hands itched to rip off his pants and have her way with him. And there he was, sitting and watching her with those blazing embers, dripping with lust. She had made up her mind. Reaching behind her back, she unclasped her black lacey shield, before dropping them in front of her.

She held her breath, as she watched his reaction. His face was not one to show many emotions. But she knew him better. She could read him. A myriad of emotions was displayed before they finally settled on appreciation and want.😳

And maybe something, she dared to think of.

He saw her smirk and go down on her knees. Oh ****!! His hands involuntarily settled by his side, on the stage, as he swallowed real hard on seeing what she was doing. She was ****ing crawling up to him. Crawling.

No. Rather, Prowling. *am smirking*

Like a Tigress. Ready to jump her Prey. 😃 accurate description! Full marks!!

It didn't help when his eyes strayed to her butt high in the air, because of her back arching like that of a cat. He felt himself hardening more, if that was possible. Shit! ****! His eyes snapped to her bare chest. They were pressed together.. and bloody moving a bit as her own arms brushed against them. He is so getting teased!!

When he was finally within her reach and she was in between his parted legs, she breathed in deeply and lifted her legs to straddle his hips on either side, one by one. She leaned forward and bit his lip, and licked it, watching him. Poor PARTH!!!! But 😉

A small whimper burned at his throat, while his hands came up to caress her waist, his thumb brushing the underside of her mounds. A finger nail dug into his chest, making his back flatten on the stage fully, as she leaned forward with him. He felt her cold fingers brush his stomach and go down to the band of his sweatpants. 😳

I need to touch you.. Her velvety voice laced with a groan of need.

His hands cupped her head and her bottom respectively, smashing her lips with his. Pushing his tongue into her mouth, he groaned when her willing tongue slid against his. His fingers grabbed the side of her shorty shorts and ripped it.

She gasped and pulled back to see him smirking. Someone's getting impatient..😳

I heard that someone needed to touch me..

But you still have your sweatpants on.. Her eyes looking down at his pants and back into his eyes.

You are most welcome to do the honours. He tilted his head in affirmation.😳

Biting her bottom lip, she giggled.

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Credits to the song makers and singer.

Name of Song: Aa Zara

Singer: Sunidhi Chauhan

Movie: Murder 2

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*jumping back in from wherever I was* Hahahhaa... look at you, guys!!! Need some ice? I've got a bucket full! But, no, Ice bucket challenge. We gotta save Water, you know! 🤣

Now for your bloody awesome reviews that make my day!!

Torture Khatam!!! 😈

Keep 'em coming, moi sweeties!!! Come on, come on!!!

Yours truly and sexy,

Annie😉

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Haww
It was so hot
So it was Vidarth
Humm can't say anythig for now
Moi blushing after reading this