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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Pariha khanna

@draco_is_mine

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Posted: 11 years ago

WOW ... res

*will comment after reading again"

Edited by draco_is_mine - 11 years ago

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes
What. Even.
Res

Oh no... What? *staring at you in anticipation* What is it?

Yeah, I know.. It's kinda.. confusing and.. weird, no?

Gee.. *my voice small* Isshhh okay.. Just tell me how it is...😳😳

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Sonali Shivkumar

@ChasingLiberty

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Omg !!!!

I do not even have words for this

I am honestly not good enough to comment on this os

Seriously

This was really spectacular

Please continue !!!!!!

It was so hot.. Her dance moves..

The description

The way he was looking at her ..omg

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ChasingLiberty
Omg !!!!
I do not even have words for this
I am honestly not good enough to comment on this os
Seriously
This was really spectacular
Please continue !!!!!!
It was so hot.. Her dance moves..
The description
The way he was looking at her ..omg

Wooohooo!!! You're the first to comment, actually, since the other two have still reserved their posts! *pouting at the two people before smiling widely at you*

Hehehehe... Hailaah! I didn't know this could render you speechless! *horrified*

🤣 Gee, but that was real sweet of you to say that!

Ah, the looks say it all, babeh! The dance moves were kinda hard to pen down, 'cause I had to keep on imagining it again and again to write it in proper words! 🤣 🤣 eh!

Thank you, girl! :D

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Left me handing dry as a desert.
Ah. Ah.
I was supposed to be studying.
And then. After reading this I couldn't help but comment from my cell.
Yup.
This is from my cell cuZ I like it.
Firstly, I knew from the basketball reference that this is Parthu.
It better be huh!
And dance... I was like... Vidu!! Hellz yeah.
By the way
The way yiu have described her moves... Woah Woah.
And his... Suffering 😆 was indeed. You had me at the last line.
You had me pitying parth!!
Accomplishment.
This. Is. Amazing
I can't comment inline today cuz I'll be going out now won't be able to use my laptop.
So. Yeah. Took the pains to type it on cell.
Considering the fact that I did, I think you should update quick.
Or I slit ristz

Ps: updated Underprotection.. Angst.