Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #3 OS 7 (7~31) Link to #4 Pg 1

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vandana73

@vandana73

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Brilliant !! I was reading between the lines to know about Shyam's real motive but he seems to be a nice guy !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

unbelievable !!

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cosmina

@cosmina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

brainless Raizada brothers:))))) and that from Shyam's part!! brilliant!!

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Superb updates like dis Shyamji

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rupzloveu

@rupzloveu

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Congrattsss in new thread
Awesome updates
Loved it

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

congrats on ur new thread

love the update

superb!!!!!!!!!!!!

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Congrats for the new thread

Khushi is a strong girl , loved how she handled the situation .

Here Shyam is the hero , he not only reprimanded Anjali and gave her very much needed advice . Always clinging to her brother and complaining like a child for every small thing . How will Arnav apologise to khushi after realising his folly ?

loved it

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Suchi

@ChitraF

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

WOW!!! Loved Shyam words to Anjali.. I wished this in actual series.. someone will show reality to Anjali.. but it never happened there.. you wrote it beautifully..

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8Lucky88

@8Lucky88

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

i like the story and that in this story shyam is actually a good character and i cant wait for more chapters as i would like to see how arnav and khushi relationship works...continue soon