Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #3 OS 7 (7~31) Link to #4 Pg 1

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Sorry meant to update my res and not quote

Seems like the injustice done to Khushi has addled my brain. 😆

But love her for confronting the siblings!

Edited by Arshi67 - 10 years ago

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Tammie

@saomom

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

I have never, ever liked the Shyam character. Not even in fanfics.. However, I want to shout hooray for you turning the tables on Arnav and Anjali!!! Brilliant! Carry on! I will be waiting!!'

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Uthra

@Viji79

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

I always like bold Khushi. But Arnav disappointed me. Anjali, 😡 better left unsaid. Shyam was a surprise package.

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Just read alll eight parts of this story.

Loved how Shyam is the sensible one and how he dealt with the Raizadas.

Anjali needed to be told a few hometruths.

The family has been mollycoddling her and have never let her take responsibility for her actions.

Glad to see Shyam putting his foot down here.

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Congratulations dearies..⭐️⭐️
coming to the updates..
well this is called power punch..
"On your face guys"👏👏
loved the way Khushi talked with him..
Shyam's each dialogue was perfect and more than one slap for both the siblings but I loved the way Shyam talked with his wife and told her the truth.
so now Arnav what will you do ???
Awesome..awesome awesome updates Smitaji.👏👏👏
waiting eagerly for the next update.
Zara socho agar Khushi Arnav ko ghar pahunchane ke liye thank you ke badale kuchh Rupiyein de toh as fare..😆😆 but I know she will not act like this.