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sarb

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Such a beautiful and emotional story, love it. hopes u update the next partz soon...

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Hina malik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

That was beautiful!

Hmm so now Raizada family is considering that arnav doesn't behave well with khushi? Haha, serves them right for forcing the marriage on them! Because what if ASR wasn't that understanding? Khushi's life would have been ruined for no fault of hers!

Lovely piece of writing!

Update soon:)

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just4this

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

so new story started loved it

thank u

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badfaith4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: RizArshi
Res😊

Unres😃

That was simply awesome. I thought I will be angry at Arnav for ruining an innocent girl's life. But I am so glad that I was wrong. I am still angry but at the stupidity of the Raizada ladies. They had almost ruined Khushi's life along with Arnav's. It was so wrong of them. I am absolutely loving the punishment that Arnav and Khushi are giving them by not letting them realize that all was fine between the husband and wife. Loved their growing friendship which I hope will turn in to love soon. Khushi is so understanding. Loved Arnav's concern and care for her. I am so glad that he realised its not Khushi's fault and didn't unjustly punish her for getting married to him. They make a very sweet and adorable couple. Loved all the chapters. Waiting for more😊

I have a question. Is Arnav aware of Khushi being an orphan or is he yet to know about her?

Happy birthday to Barun Sobti.

As always I really like the story. They both are adjusting to each other. I'm mad that Arnav was forced into marriage. At least he didn't take it out on Khushi. They suit each other which is very good.

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ajeetha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

vow so beautifully written i was clean bowled when i read the story when yu read the title one can expect asr anger and taunts but what a twist the story is entirely different the relationship of arnav and kushi is so different and how the family misunderstand them. i loved the concept each one of your work is a masterpiece waiting to see how the story unfolds

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Param

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

awesome story!!! arnav is so nice to khushi.. good he never got angry with her.. ARSHI are so discreet about their relation in front of family.. love them.. 😃

thanks for mail 😊

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Anamika100

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Another fantastic story concept. When I read this, I just can not stop smiling. What beautiful soul Khushi is...I am so in love with this couple who are Begining to understand each other without any words being said.

Please please Arnav, do not break her heart.

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..Jyoti..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Awww..such a sweet story..

Continue soon..

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crazyweird

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Awesome update

Totally loved it

Looking fwd to next part

Plz plz update soon

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Jyothi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

omg Smita ! this is so sad ... heartbreaking ! I mean Khushi with all her innocence and love doesnt have any clue that Arnav was never ready for a marriage.

Arnav on his part, blackmailed into marrying but he can never hate Khushi but at the same time her innocence breaks his heart cuz she dsnt know the truth of their marriage. he loves her but so hesitant to take the next step.

and the family. SRSLY ! I mean sometimes they totally know how to mess it all up !