Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #2 OS 7 Link to #3 in Pg 1 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great updates...Arnav really behaves cold hearted...Khushi on other hand is soft spoken n always trying to get along with him 😊 He now knows her choice of everything...though his way of conveying attention is different... Khushi adores him truly n wholeheartedly...Anjali n all others r hell worried of her but she is happy with him n understands him too 😊 Payal n Akash are progressing quite fast 😉 Hope to read more updates soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Loved it. .. Full of innocence ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow!!! loved it sooo muchhh...so sweet and lovely...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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In love with this story as well!!!! You are a fantastic creative writer... Thank you for sharing your stories with us!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Awesome start
C 🥳 NGRATS ON NEW THREAD
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Love love this story.
I though Arnav would scold her, degrade her etc but it turned out to be the opposite.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww..SO Cute!!!
Khushi is such an adorable doll..She keeps hugging Arnav 😳
Update soon :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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THIS IS SOOO GOOD! I was so mad at everyone for throwing poor Kushi at this rakhshas with the way you opened the story, cursing all the parents for forcing their girls to marry a complete stranger without so much a talk with the said person. I am so happy you proved me wrong and brought a huge smile to my face. I love their intimate relationship that is not open to the others and glad that the others are feeling guilty. Let them simmer in their guilt for a while to teach them a lesson on blackmailing people to get married. Lucky for them the lion was smitten by this Pari and is slowly giving in to her childlike innocence. Very curious to see Kushi's wide eyes when she learn how babies are made. I would love for her to have this conversation with her husband though as he so deserves this after playing the dutiful husband role for her. A big thank you for writing so much in the opening of this story!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome os !!!
Cn't wait to read more..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
wow smita thank you dear


i was stalking since the previous work is completed for the new one

finally i am sure its going to be another blockbuster

loved it

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