Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #2 OS 7 Link to #3 in Pg 1

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barsana

@barsana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

SMITAJI...first let me give u a big hug...🤗...succch ...a sweet & cute

updates...loving it...👍🏼...u made my day... thankyou...u r GOD gifted...

may he shower all his blessings on u...😃

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Rish_Rubles

@Rish_Rubles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Very nice parts

Waiting for 10 & onwards

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Sayali_23

@Sayali_23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Smitaaa 🤗 for such a beautiful birthday giftwa...

Bahottt bahottt bahottt maja aya updates padhake... Puri family thinks ASR hates Khushi... Lol

waitingwa for next update ki barishwa...

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

awww so cute yr! where did u gt such awsm ideas frm? it was beautiful!

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

raizada family think dat arnav hate khushi. Bt dey dnt no dat arnav cares so much about khushi.

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Such a sweet story.

Who can resist Khushi?

Certainly not Arnav.

Loved how he is slowly melting down.

And how khushi understands him completely.

The family is crazy.

Hope they don't interfere unnecessarily.

And then creats problems between the two. .

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

congrats on ur new thread

this story is fabulous...

the Raizadas view of Arrnav is so so different to Khushi's view of him

loving the story

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smitar

@smitar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: sayali_d23
Smitaaa 🤗 for such a beautiful birthday giftwa...

Bahottt bahottt bahottt maja aya updates padhake... Puri family thinks ASR hates Khushi... Lol

waitingwa for next update ki barishwa...

Happy b'day, Sayali dear!!!!

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Excellent story line...when I read the first chapter I felt it is going to be a love-hate story...but you turned it into such a sweet story...the khadoos ASR is prince charming for khushi...she has faced so much as an orphan...now she got her own...she could call some thing her own...she is on cloud nine with this small happiness coming her way...so beautifully captured khushi's happiness and Arnav's tenderness and caring towards khushi...the family is still thinking that they have done a mistake marrying khushi to Arnav...soon their fears will be cleared...khushi is such a wonderful wife...she did not want to expose her husband's care as he does not wish others to know about himself much...she understood him so well...they are having a wonderful chemistry...Arnav too started loving his wife...enjoying the care she is showering him...can't wait for more...awesomest chatpers so far...thanks for the PM