Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #2 OS 7 Link to #3 in Pg 1

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ravalisharma06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Lovely story!!

looking forward for d next updates😃

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Sayali_23

@Sayali_23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: smitar
Happy b'day, Sayali dear!!!!

Smitajiii humara birthday nahi haineee... Barun Baba ke birthday giftwa ki batwa kar rahi the hum Nandakishorrr😆

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Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

S, I am sure others have commented on this already but the title "Unwanted wife" had me expecting a cruel ASR who would be shredding Khushi to pieces just because his family forced her on him. But waah what a breath of fresh air, instead of the cold and mean ASR we got ourselves a rather baffled and bedazzled Arnavji all thanks to the way you created Khushi's character. She is such a positive soul, she is mature and basically too grateful for everything in her life to worry about things such as her husband spending too much time at work or him not being religious/fulfilling rituals and traditions or him being all expressive and loving towards her. Instead she has showered her rather aloof husband with so much love and care that he had no choice but to eventually get used to her fussing over him and kind of like it too.

The last section definitely showed great progress in their relationship with Arnav returning some of that love and care to the wife who was forced upon him.

You have shown a great example of how one can turn a bad situation into a good/positive one S and I absolutely love it. I kind of really like the fact that the Raizada ladies feel guilty for forcing Khushi into Arnav's life too because if it weren't for Khushi's super awesome attitude and Arnav's better sense for not blaming Khushi for the mess, things could have turned out quite differently leading to two lives being ruined so well played sister. I am already looking forward to more! ;)

PS. Thanks heaps for the notification Rashmi, I was quite excited to see an email with Smita's new OS!😃

PPS. I forgot to Congratulate you guys on the new thread!👏

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831628

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Simply love it smita!!!!!

Rashmi thank u dear

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

That was an amazinggg update!!!

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suri2610

@suri2610

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Love it love it love it... ASR can never hold himself back from Khushi's charm. Love this Arnav and Khushi... So lively

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S.B.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

WOW WOW that was such a beautiful...interesting ... sweet story ..
loved it <3

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

beautiful story.. m loving it 😊

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sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Awesome...

It was so sweet and adorable...The way Arnav concerns for Khushi, is being so polite to her and the way khushi takes care of him... She understands him so well, never forcing him for anything...

Just love this story... I don't want to stop reading it... Eagerly waiting for the update...