Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #2 OS 7 Link to #3 in Pg 1

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sudhalata1

@sudhalata1

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Lack of communication in a marriage leads to these problems. Hope Arnav is able to make khushi happy. All your stories are awesome. Waiting for next

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Vithagan2304

@Vithagan2304

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

hope arnav doesn't breaks khushi's heart

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hararnav

@hararnav

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

i never thought u will leave at a cliffhanger:-))

its a lesson for everyone... for arnavs family and for arnav n khushi too.. they shud hav communicated more.

now who is this girlfren??

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Smita, I can not get enough of this story. It is simply beautiful.

Arnav wanted to take things slowly and understand Khushi better. If he does not reciprocate her feelings and not even hug her or kiss her for 3 months, anyone will feel unwanted. What was he thinking...

On the other hand, Khushi knows the harsh truth about her marriage. She does not want to confront Arnav or his family. She just wants to go away so that Arnav gets his freedom. She is so pure and innocent.

The Gupta family, they do not want Khushi back. She is not their responsibility any more. They want her to take care of Payal and nothing else.

Arnav is coming around. He knows Khushi is upset and wants her to be happy. He is missing her hugs and kisses too :-). That is good. He wants to build 3rd floor so that he and Khushi can have their privacy. I love that idea.

I think the lady he wants Khushi to meet in the restaurant is the architect? His co-league?

I love this story Smita. Please do not end it soon. Continue it as long as possible. And post the next parts super soon...

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Suchi

@ChitraF

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Felt so bad for Khushi.. Awesome parts.. please continue this soon.. cant wait to read who is that lady..

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daljeet

@daljeet

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Who is that lady?????

You have portrayed Guptas attitude clearly. As said there is no cruelty, but an orphan feels a left out feeling or unwanted feeling in such families. I thought at least Babuji would be concerned.

Also I wished Arnav cleared with Garima and Buaji that Kushi is not a trouble maker and the best wife and daughter-in-law, even more than Payal.

I feel a slight anger towards Payal. Her attitude is not revealed.

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inamajar

@inamajar

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

A beautiful story, showing the relation of Arnav & Khushi with their insecurities which they are not able to share yet. They fear for the mental peace of their partner. So nicely written.

Looks like Khushi knows this Lady!!

Love all your stories. So soulful.

Edited by inamajar - 11 years ago

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lujainshaikh

@lujainshaikh

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#178

cliff hanger 😭 Update soon 😃

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Thanx for the the back to back updates
I'm really enjoying this story, not that I didn't enjoy ur earlier stories, it's just that u leave us readers speechless with different concepts about IPKKND everytime u come up wth anew story
Hats off too u dear
Will u be kind enough to update just one more part and tell us WHO THE MYSTERIOUS LADY is?pls pls
Thanx