Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #2 OS 7 Link to #3 in Pg 1 - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago
What a brilliant story this is. You have really captured the heart and soul of he IPK characters and taken them forward.
Love the nuances in the characters of the Raizada's, Guptas ASR and Khushi characters, right down to why Khushi wanted to throw a tantrum and could not because all that would do is have Buaji twist her ear.

I always felt this distinction in Payal and Khushi's treatment in the Gupta house and unfortunately the show did not take the direction where Arnav notices and makes up to her for all that she lacked and make her feel special and love and shower her with gifts. Here you are taking that path.
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Posted: 11 years ago
He's really in love with her! Hopefully now the misunderstanding will be clear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
And you stopped there!!!!!

It's astounding how carelessly thoughtless people can be. Her giving nature and feelings of gratitude, I suppose, will never allow her to see that. I'm so happy Arnav is doing something about it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
You left us at Cliff hanger 😡 . Please update soon I know you update very regularly but kya kare the way you ended the update 😭 . Nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please update quickly, I want to know who the lady is! I loved it and I can't wait to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandystarz19

Loved it. Dear plz give chp 10 correect link. Ccz if we click on given link it open in diff work of ur.


Thank you... Dun...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Another beautiful story... This one is becoming my favorite . It has all the characteristics of Arnav-Khusi intact. Love the way they communicate without saying a word. Feeling sad for khusi's misunderstanding and cannot wait to read how Arnav removes it cos that he will do as she is 'his Khusi' now
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Posted: 11 years ago
too bad.. they totally didn't understand her.. hope Arnav doesn't take too long..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting!!
Another set of story!!
I never thought you will have such awesome imagination!
Beautiful!!
read it totally and in love with it as its so unique!
ur thinking process is different i guess else this would be difficult!
Read all the parts in one go and i somehow loved this particular OS!
U have left a cliff hanger in a way! how can u stop there? more excited to know who she is!
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is the best story by far Smitha!!! I am loving it 😊

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