The unknown son (An Arjuna-Iravan FF) Part 8B-Page 23 - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update dear... 👏

Iravan is indeed a valiant son...n somewhere I do feel for Ulupi as well.
I have always empathized with Draupadi n about her agony but Ulupi too had a hard time being away from Arjun.
I am glad that gradually forum members are writing more n more about the unsaid tales of Hidimba, Vrushali, Ulupi, Iravan even Yudisthir...

By the way, i wanted to ask who is Rochanagarbha? I had read in some other thread that he was Subhadra's son.
Is Rochana another name of Subhadra? Just asking...
If he's indeed another son of Arjun n Subhadra, then y isnt he given as much importance as Abhimanyu?
Just these thoughts came to me while reading...

Anyway, please continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: amritat

Great update dear... 👏

Iravan is indeed a valiant son...n somewhere I do feel for Ulupi as well.
I have always empathized with Draupadi n about her agony but Ulupi too had a hard time being away from Arjun.
I am glad that gradually forum members are writing more n more about the unsaid tales of Hidimba, Vrushali, Ulupi, Iravan even Yudisthir...

By the way, i wanted to ask who is Rochanagarbha? I had read in some other thread that he was Subhadra's son.
Is Rochana another name of Subhadra? Just asking...
If he's indeed another son of Arjun n Subhadra, then y isnt he given as much importance as Abhimanyu?
Just these thoughts came to me while reading...

Anyway, please continue...
😊


Yep! Rochana is another name of Subhadra or that is what I read in other threads. Ruchiparvan or Rochangarbha died on the 12th day of the war and his deeds were most probably overshadowed by his other brothers.
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Posted: 11 years ago
when is the next update coming?
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Posted: 10 years ago
when is the last update coming... update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
I shall be updating by mid-night today. I apologies for the long wait.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I decided to post the final part in two parts on your insistence for the delayed update. I hope you shall like the Part A of the last part.The underlined part has been recently edited.

PART-8 A- The Final battle

The war had started. The Pandavas had arranged their army in Deva Vyuha to counter the Kauravas Asura Vyuha. In the lead was Shikhandi with Bhima and Arjuna to protect his sides.Beside him were Abhimanyu, Rochangarbha and children of Draupadi. Satyaki and Dhritadyumna were with him. Virata and Drupada had charge on the rest of the army. Kekayu brothers, Dhristaketu, Ghatotkacha and Iravan were in the ranks.

The conches blared and another day of war started. Iravan raced through the battle field till he met Shakuni and his brothers. A battle ensued between them.

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The extensive waters were deadly calm that day. A melancholy silence spread through the Nagloka. It was silence before the storm. Indeed a storm was raging in the heart of a mother who waited for any news of her son. She had sent an army to bring back Iravan from war but she knew that Iravan will never leave the battlefield. So she had commanded the army to protect her son in battle.

A dasi came into Uloopi's room and announced "Madam. A messenger has come from Kurukshetra with news of Rajkumar Iravan." Uloopi jumped on her feet.

"Send him in immediately." Uloopi ordered in a voice that clearly showed the anxiousness that dwelled in the mother's heart.

"My ladyship Prince Iravan has refused to leave the battlefield. The tenth day of the war has already started and the prince has entered the battle in command of the whole Naga army."

Suddenly Uloopi's legs became weak and she plopped on to her bed with a soft thud. The princess of fair complexion had become even paler, as if blood had drained out of all her veins. Her gaze fell beyond the horizon as the blood-coloured red orb in the sky rose to glare at the distant battlefield.

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Broken bodies lay scattered before the Naga army. The Naga army fought with ever increasing viciousness. Stopping them seemed impossibility. The Naga army had brutally slain the brothers Gaya, Gavaksha, Vrishava, Charmavat, Arjava, and Suka who had dared to attack their Chief. The prince Duryodhan was burning in rage at the defeat of Great warriors of the Kaurava army.

Whereas Mamashri Shakuni was fighting with Iravan. They spun around each other analysing the tactics to be followed by the other. Their charioteers drove them skilfully, removing the chariot from position seconds before a poisonous arrow struck the land that had been occupied. Iravan though young was adept at all tactics of war. When a missile missed Shakuni by inches, and a second missile came hurtling by, Shakuni fled from the field. He confessed to his eldest nephew," This Naga boy and his army needs to destroyed. I do not think that anyone other than Bhisma, Acharya Drona or Karna can defeat this lad. But Pitamah and Acharya are engaged in their own battle, and Karna is not fighting." Saying thus he confided his plan to his nephew. The very next moment, Duryodhana called upon a rakshasha "Alambusha come here. I have work for you".

Please do not forget to review. Afterall we are moving towards the end of this FF.

Edited by Yajnaseni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
aawesome.. Lovved it.. Thankss for pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was nice dude...u updated aftr a very long tym!!!! continue soon!!!! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Truth be said yajna I thought you probably forgot about this fF of yours but then seeing a PM from you after ages is like a Christmas treat! So thank you for taking your time and updating it!(Trust me I know how difficult it is to pull yourself out and write down something that is hovering about your head!)

Anyways I simply loved this part...So the final battle has begun and the fate of this unknown but mighty warrior would be sealed forever in folklore and stories that would be sung later in his praises. The part that I loved the most was Uloopi's restlessness; she perhaps knows what news the fate is to bring to her yet she keeps her calm and holds on that thin string of dying hope. Poor mother in her would soon perish!


And the battle between the Nagaa and Kaurava army with both Karna and Iravan taking charge of their side of calvalry. Both equally fierce and skilled; this duel would have instigated fear and admiration simultaneously! Brilliantly written Yajna! I am now looking forward to the final conclusion of the same! Take your time but do continue!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
an update at last. Any idea in the actual epic how iraavan was killed? by karna?

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