The unknown son (An Arjuna-Iravan FF) Part 8B-Page 23

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

mamashree shakuni is beaten this is quite good update

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Yajnaseni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: Patrarekha
mamashree shakuni is beaten this is quite good update

Thanks dear! I was not sure it would be up to standard or not but your review confirms that this one can pass as 'okayish.'

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taruna

@taruna40

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Awesome really loved it I was coming in IF after long time I read ff again

I m so glad to know something abt iravan there is so little abt him known facts

I m very interested

ty so much for PM

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: Yajnaseni

Thanks dear! I was not sure it would be up to standard or not but your review confirms that this one can pass as 'okayish.'

although i will say your previous updates were great maybe because of gap you have difficulty to get your true form back but this update is no way bad or okay its good

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

This edited part is far better than the previous one..Very nice..

Thanks for the pm

One request pls...Pls write more FFs on Mahabharat characters...Urs way of writing is very beautiful..Loving ur stories so much..😊

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

i have a request u r very good in writing father-son bond so can u after this finished write on arjun bavrubahan reunion along with a kaju relation between vrishketu and bavrubahan

hop u know the whole story of that aswamedha u can add it as continuation of arjun vrishketu story

Edited by Patrarekha - 10 years ago

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Yajnaseni

@Yajnaseni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: Patrarekha
i have a request u r very good in writing father-son bond so can u after this finished write on arjun bavrubahan reunion along with a kaju relation between vrishketu and bavrubahan

hop u know the whole story of that aswamedha u can add it as continuation of arjun vrishketu story

I was planning to add Arjun-babruvahan tale to Arjun-Vrishaketu one. Just I am not getting the will to update the FF. First I will finish with Arjun-Iravan I guess and then we will see.

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Yajnaseni

@Yajnaseni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: shiningstar77
This edited part is far better than the previous one..Very nice..
Thanks for the pm

One request pls...Pls write more FFs on Mahabharat characters...Urs way of writing is very beautiful..Loving ur stories so much..😊

Ummm...Let me first finish with the four I am continuing. Then I am planning a modern-day FF and and an Arjun-Chitrangada FF.

I hope you have read all my other three FFs.

Here is the Arjun-Subhadra one if you have not read it yet-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/mahabharat/4149333/when-their-eyes-met-an-arsu-ss

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#159

tia if u take my suggession dont start so many story together u will have difficulties to concentrate on any i will say finish iravan arsu n vrishketu first then start others otherwise u will b next aru the confused soul

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Yajnaseni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: Patrarekha
tia if u take my suggession dont start so many story together u will have difficulties to concentrate on any i will say finish iravan arsu n vrishketu first then start others otherwise u will b next aru the confused soul

As I said before I am first going to Finish Arjun-Iravan, then ArSu. After that I shall be thinking about taking up any new project. I have learned my lesson from Aru di.