Originally posted by: Patrarekha
sorry was busy in my school duties tia , and then after reading i was not in position to write. how can i say anything when i am visualizing son's head falls on mother's lap? i ran out of words and then the Peshawar incident completely drained me, so was not able to comment , i know always that Iravan's story was sad but i was not attached to him as i am with Abhimanyu but through your writing i fell in love with Iravan , so his ending was heart wrenching to me, i always hated Alambusha for killing Iravan by deceit but reading this i badly felt an urge to see how Ghatotkacha kills Alambusha, i can't just imagine what was going on Uloopi's heart , destiny never gave her anything only had taken from her , her beloved never loved her , only resort of her life now is snatched away from her , no i can't imagine what is she feeling just like i cant imagin whats going in those parents heart whose children are massacred in Peswar attack, Ghatotkach and Iravan both came to fight a battle only for their fathers no way it was related to them , still Ghatotkach gets some mentions for different reasons but Iravan none, coz Arjun was much aloof and you penned Arjun's aloofness convincingly, but Arjun did mourn Iravan's death when he came to know. but your last ending was quite raw and intense without getting emotional you hit the right cord but i would love to read Arjun's reactions after knowing about Iravan's demise.
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