The unknown son (An Arjuna-Iravan FF) Part 8B-Page 23 - Page 13

Is very good..you also mention rochargarba in your story..how iravan fill same filling as unknown son of Arjunlike his little brother Rochargarba..please show us how Iravan share his love to his brothers..^^😊

Awesome, update, Tia!!! Loved it!!! Rochanagarbha part was awesome!!! Loved Iravan's replies!!! Continue soon, darling!!!

Finally an update😃. Very sweet update. Loved your description of Iravan's earlier life. 👍🏼

Aww.. you included RochanaGarbha too! Basically this was something I read for the first time! All of Arjuna's sons together.. Iravan, Abhimanyu, Rochanagarbha, Srutakarma now only Bhavrubhana is missing! But still its really fine!.. it was feel good update.. and I really like the starting part. The two lines.. beautiful!

Oh man!!!

Originally posted by: Meself

Sorry it took me a while to pull myself out of my bed and finally put a wors out here!! So Rochangrabha makes an appearance too. It's kinda sad that Ghatotkach, Bhabruvahan, Abhimanyu and Uppandavas got their stand but Iravan and Rochangarbha were left out of the line. Especially when they carried the same lineage of the greats!!

Anyways this chapter was a soothing delight and I loved the way you brought in the untamable Uloopi. Her radical thoughts and firm beliefs had made her kingdom bow down before her and to see that here was pretty amazing! So she knows there are ull omens surrounding her son; but then again it is the mighty Iravan who wouldn't back down just like that. The story is reaching its high! Waiting for the next part!!

Tia,i have read all the chapters in one go...Wow...excellent updates👏👏...in each update,u had portrayed all feelings very well n each n every characters gain equal respect here...my fav part is Arjun -Iravan 's convo...very realistic😳...kanhaji nicely figured out him...ya...he is very brilliantna?😉..loved the scene how Iravan answered the commander...very brave boy👏...n Rochangarbha's part also perfect...cont soon...thanks for the pm😊

tia!!! iravan's meeting with his mothers subhadra and draupadi was very nice... i would ve loved it if there was more of drau ans iravan... and rochanagarbha... i started loving this kid... specially when he said "dhris uncle wont mind some more help"... that was really cute... i really liked this duo.. iravan and rochanagarbha... it is true that they both were brought up in similar conditions.. overshadowed...