Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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Rattyswami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#741

beautiful😃

but is it over??

do we have a 33rd update as well

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Uarnkhui

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Posted: 11 years ago

#742

Wow she say yes to marry him nice update

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#743

wow... beautiful... Arnav's confession as Ranjha... its overwhelming... and the proposal then... wow... amazingly written Di... loved it... thanks for the mail Rashmi...

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Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

#744

Such a wonderful sequence.

So romantic with Khushi Kumari Gupta doing her best to ruin it with her strange thoughts :)

Loved how you wrote she smiled and nodded when he said 'I'm no prize'. But she loves him uske bawajood bhi!

And I'm right there in the Naniji, Mamiji, Anjali hug!

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incarnadine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#745

Lovely lovely parts Smita!

Loved every single bit of it. And I knew ASR would come up with his own lines besides Ranjha's..and Khushi's reactions.. she was confused..😛

Loved Arnav's proposal. Straight from the heart. 😳

And especially Garima and Buaji's happiness. Their bituwa was becoming their damaad. They have no idea that all this was ASR's plotting 😆

Loved it ! :)

Looking forward to the next part (s) 😃

Thanks for the email Rashmi ! :) x

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Param

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Posted: 11 years ago

#746

amazing parts!! loved khushi's confusion when arnav changed the dialogues of the play.. asr giving order to corpse was superb line.. happy for ARSHI.. loved the updates..

thanks for mail 😊

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Rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#747

it was just awsome..
loved reading it...

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--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#748

The 5th os was awesome

looking forward to read more 😃

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Raila1014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#749

I nearly cried after her baqwas dialogue - that stupid man really hurt her. I am glad she made him realize that. A confession on stage and a wedding proposal before all the guests. Boy he went all out. I loved the interaction between Garima and Buaji.