Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#761

That was so squeal worthy and romantic! I loved it so much! I can't wait for the next OS!

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#762

Jitni taalia heer ranjha ko mili usse do guna taalia tumhare liye

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smitar

@smitar

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#763

Originally posted by: segad
Jitni taalia heer ranjha ko mili usse do guna taalia tumhare liye
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Thank u, thank u, Seemaji.😃 Hum dhanya ho gaye!😆

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#764

Awww such a beautiful ending

can't wait to read more

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#765

TG NK and Aakash came and stopped them.. loved their confession..

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#766

Awesome ending.
arnav proposed in front of all.
loved khushi's monologue when arnav changed the lines of drama.
loved the flirty arnav a lot.
excited 4 nxt os.

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831628

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#767

You weave magic with ur words dear. Simply awesome.

Waiting for your next creation

Edited by toeditor - 11 years ago

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#768

smita, that was tooo good -

the modified dialogues of ranjha was exceptionally good

at last our ASR did it - the onstage proposal after the act was simply awesome - good thought - loved it

rashmi, 🤗

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#769

beautiful story!! loved it. 😃

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#770

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna
Awwee... so sweet... loved their confession... loved the ending... its beautifully portrayed... amazing story Smita Di... hats off to you...

Aww. That was so romantic and sweet. As always you are a wonderful writer. I can't wait for the next one.